Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter Thirteen on Aug 08, 2009 06:40 am

Lovely chapter... as in gripping. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Name: DGgirl reviewed Chapter Thirteen on Aug 05, 2009 03:48 pm

omg, the last part was so sad =( But, I'm glad Ginny was there to comfort him! Hope this creates some sort of bond between them, and starts them down the path to romance. I am kind of disappointed, though. I wish Ginny would think of Will as a son; she's the closest thing he's got. Maybe, she does think of him that way, but just doesn't realize it. Either way, update soon! x

Author's Response: I think Ginny definitely thinks of Will as a son more than she realizes, which is good, because she's certainly the closest thing he has to a mother. I think a sort of mother-son relationship between them will become more pronounced, as time goes by. As for Draco and Ginny, I like to think every little thing they go through together -such as the last part - creates a closer and closer bond between them, a level of comfort between them that grows more and more pronounced. Anyway, thanks for the review! :D

Name: Incognito reviewed Chapter Twelve on Jul 30, 2009 04:40 am

That was a lovely chapter. I am REALLY in the mood for some D/G action though! *hint hint* =)

Author's Response: He he, there will be some action soon, though not in the next chapter.

Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter Twelve on Jul 29, 2009 04:04 pm

It's a silly little detail but... it's Astoria with an o not Asteria.

I really like the way you're writing Pansy. I love that she's blunt and very Slytheriny without being an awful person. That and I'm amused to see her slip up and actually say something nice about another person.

Author's Response: I love writing Pansy, she's so much fun. So much, in fact, that I'm using her more in this fic than I intended to :)

Name: Morgan Amanda reviewed Chapter Eleven on Jul 26, 2009 12:39 pm

Hey! Great story so far... I'm having a hard time resisting tracking down the other version and reading it! Quick question... when did Ginny get her memory about the battle at the ministry back?

"Ginny didn’t know why Lupin seemed so sure of this, but she didn’t really doubt his assessment either, recalling how Malfoy had taken a Stunning Spell in the chest to avoid being indebted to Hermione. Stupid prat, she added to herself. Just to make herself feel better."

Did I miss something?

Author's Response: Hullo, thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Trust me, you wouldn't want to read the other version *shudder* Not only has my writing improved since then, but there was this weird subplot involving runes and time-traveling (which sounds cool but made absolutely no sense). Also Ginny was increidbly weepy and annoying. I'm actually in the process of having that version removed. But, I'm hoping to finish this fic soon, because I've been getting chapters written and put up here pretty quickly, so hopefully the wait won't be long! :D As for the memory, that was actually a mistake! Thank you for pointing it out. She has not gotten her memory of that day back yet. I'm going to go edit that now.

Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter Ten on Jul 22, 2009 04:22 pm

A little angst here and there s good, makes the story more real and less total fluff. Besides, angst is only bad if there's no basis for it, and god knows there's been enough to angst about in the last few chapters. I've liked them, the chapters that is.

Author's Response: Yes, I agree, it creates conflict for the characters. I always feel like I should apologize because I've really had people complain before, but then, as you pointed out, this is not intended to be a fluffy fic (although a few fluffy moments here and there are always good :D). Thanks for the review!

Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter Nine on Jul 21, 2009 08:12 pm

Hmmm. I suppose it's sort of good that she knows what happened to Blaise now. It'll let her begin to let go. I hope.

Author's Response: Yes, I think you'll find she focuses a lot less on Blaise from now on, trying not to think about him, anyway. Of course now there's Ron who has disappeared/may be dead.

Name: Incognito reviewed Prologue on Jul 16, 2009 11:32 am

Oh and I think I know who Harry's Secret Keeper is! *grins* I shan't give it away, but I can bet my hat that it isn't a Gryffindor or Draco.

Name: Incognito reviewed Chapter Five on Jul 16, 2009 03:27 am

Oh my stars! this is my favourite chapter. Ron and Tracey arguing over who will deliver the baby, and Malfoy diving in front of a spell so that he would no longer be indebted to Hermione -- I was laughing my arse off! It literally fell off from all the laughter. Ginny trying to slap Malfoy awake was a nice touch too! :P

My favourite line from the next chapter is when Draco wakes up and asks Ginny what happened and she tells him he saved Hermione's life. His response:

“I did? Oh, thank Merlin,” he breathed, shutting his eyes momentarily. “We’re even, Granger.”

Priceless! --Now for me to read the rest.



Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you liked this chapter; it was a lot of fun to write!

Name: doc_3 reviewed Chapter Eight on Jul 14, 2009 05:31 pm

this is unbelievable. I'm so thrilled it is being updated. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm on summer vacay at the moment, so I should be getting a lot of chapters out quickly. I'm hoping to actually finish it within the next few weeks, and then get the sequel underway.

Name: dristi reviewed Chapter Seven on Feb 12, 2008 06:23 am

hi, it's been a long time since you updated.i hope you didn't abandon this story...it's very promising and interesting. pls update soon!!!

Author's Response: Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it! Just wanted to let you know I definitely haven't abandoned it; life has just been kind of hectic, but I'm hoping to get a new chapter up in the next few weeks. And even if it takes longer, it won't be abandoned, I hate leaving stories unfinished! If you wants news/cookies, you can check out my lj- http://littlebit-liz.livejournal.com. Again, thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it! Just wanted to let you know I definitely haven't abandoned it; life has just been kind of hectic, but I'm hoping to get a new chapter up in the next few weeks. And even if it takes longer, it won't be abandoned, I hate leaving stories unfinished! If you wants news/cookies, you can check out my lj- http://littlebit-liz.livejournal.com. Again, thanks for the review!