Name: silentocean reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 05, 2006 06:46 am
Ohhh, clifhanger.
I like your story, but I think Ginny is acting a bit ooc. She's not half as helpless as everyone seems to think she is. I don't know as much about Draco's charicter, so I can't really comment on his behaivor.
One thing though, about the bet...
Draco's already said Ginnys name (when he made the bet!) So technicly, he's already lost.
Author's Response: Well he said it just to say, "I'm sure you will say Draco before I say Ginevra."
I know that Ginny usually has much more temper but I wanted her very frail because of the trio's behaviour. She's all alone now, there is not even Neville or Luna for her! But don't worry, she will recover confronted to Draco....well a little bit beacause we all know that Draco is an excellent seducer ;)
Thansk for your comments!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 05, 2006 04:18 am
I do hope that the trio sees how he, Draco makes her feel about herself when she is with him. They are kind of ignoring her and only pay attention when they realize that they miss Ginny when they are alone. It's sad...
I do hope that the shoe is on the other foot and when they ask her again to join that she ignores them and heads on out with Draco.
Love your story, cannot wait til the next chapter..
Author's Response: Don't worry about the Trio, they will pay in some way....especially beacause Draco will be a part of it lol. I know that The Trio is not very nice in my story but I wanted Ginny to be alone so she will get closer to Draco! And it worked. And the Trio will regret everything! Thanks for reading and reviewing
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 05, 2006 03:42 am
Please, tell me he didn't hear her?!
Loving this. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well, I love when Draco has the power so I guess he heard her lol. But believe me, Ginny won't be unhappy ;)
You will have more soon, don't worry!
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 05, 2006 02:46 am
Oh NO! She said his name. He won. I cannot wait to see what he wants from her now.
Author's Response: You will see it, I swear! I'm already working on the next chapter!! Thanks for your comments!
Name: Jordanza reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 04, 2006 11:27 pm
GREAT CHAPTER! i really can't wait till the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you very, very, very much!!! I promise you will have the next one very soon!
Name: Kisou reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 04, 2006 09:30 pm
Hahaha. So, Ginny is definetly not a Slytherin. Well, I think we knew that already, of course. But, I thought I'd be obnoxious and point it out anyway. How does she know Draco will continue to talk to her after he's won the bet?
No critisims on your writing, though I admit, I didn't look for problems, I wsa too busy reading like a normal reader, god forgive me. ^_^ I beta read too much.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Well Draco is a Slytherin so we know that he will take advantage of Ginny's mistake and believe me, he will do more than talk to her! lol
Don't worry for my writing, I know this is not perfect . I'm French and I try to do as best as I can. So I guees any remark helps me in some way.
Thanks for your comments!
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 04, 2006 09:08 pm
She said it! She said his name! (And I say that as if I'm the only person who happened to notice...)
Please update again soon - I want to know what his reaction is.
Author's Response: lol, yes she said it! Well, how Draco is going to react? Mmmmm, we know is a real Slytherin so we can suppose that he will have a very .....sly idea lol. I promise you will discover it very soon;
Thank you for reading and reviewing again!
Name: jess10 reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 04, 2006 07:10 pm
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh craaaaaap she said Draco! Dun dun dunnnnn.
Author's Response: Hell yes, she's in deep, deep, deep trouble lol......
Thank you for your comments!
Name: princessswan reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 04, 2006 06:43 pm
HAHA She said his name! :P I'm dying to find out what her punishment is. A passionate night with the sexy Draco Malfoy? ^__^ PLEASE update soon!! (:
Author's Response: Well, I'm not saying anything but you're not very far from the truth.....
I swear you'll know everything very soon.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: hummie reviewed
Ginny's mistake on Dec 04, 2006 05:37 pm
OooOOOH :) She said his name! Please write the next chapter soon, I'm intrigued with how this will turn out! Great job!
Author's Response: I swear I'll do my best to write the next chapter very very soon and you could see what Draco is gooing to ask her...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: Katrina_M reviewed
The game is on on Nov 04, 2006 01:46 pm
ooo! I can't wait for more.. sorry i dint review on this earlier! I hope you put out the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: I forgive you lol! School has started now but I swear that i'm doing my best to update asap! Thanks for reading and reviewing again!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
The game is on on Oct 17, 2006 12:16 pm
Love it! Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: You will have more very soon, I swear!
Name: Kisou reviewed
The game is on on Oct 16, 2006 09:33 pm
Well, I'm having fun. And being lazy, so I didn't actually look at that with any kind of critical eye. But, I enjoyed it. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for this comment Kisou! I'm so glad to see that I have faithful readers and reviewers ;)
Name: jess10 reviewed
The game is on on Oct 14, 2006 01:50 pm
Ahh! I need more!!!!
Author's Response: You will need more, I promise! Thank you for this review!
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
The game is on on Oct 13, 2006 09:24 pm
How fun. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks.
Author's Response: I'm glad to see that the plot of this story please the readers.Thanks to you for reading and reviewing. I'll update soon
Name: Moonyk reviewed
The game is on on Oct 13, 2006 07:53 pm
Ooohhh JUIIICCCC-SEE!!! I like very much!
cheers!
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much for all this enthusiasm, Moonyk. I'm glad you like this story and I promise you will have more very soon.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The game is on on Oct 13, 2006 07:38 pm
Ha! I can see her making out with him and screaming "Malfoy!" instead... she wouldn't have to say his name! ;) Great update! ;)
Author's Response: Well, well, well...you'll see lol. I don't want to say anything but you will have the answer in the next chapter and you'll see what happens! Thanks for reading and reviewing again!
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed
The game is on on Oct 13, 2006 04:12 pm
I love your story. I think its getting good. Hope you update soon Thanks!
Author's Response: Well, thanks to you for redaing, reviewing and liking this story. I'm glad you like the way it turns out. I update very soon, I promise!
Name: ginnyd reviewed
The game is on on Oct 13, 2006 03:38 pm
im really loveing this! cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. i'm so happy to know that people like this story coz' she is like a baby to me lol. Don't worry I update very soon ;)
Name: Kisou reviewed
The strange new tutor on Oct 04, 2006 09:38 pm
I was reading your bio. You don't like D/Hr. How depressing. I like to leave my shipping options open. Good job. I'm amazed that you can write like this, and add to that the fact that it's a second language. I'll be watching for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! About Draco and Hermione, it's not taht I don't like this ship but to me, they are not meant to be. Besides, I really like Ron and as he loves Hermione, I don't want to make him suffer. I'm writing a fic on them, but I already know the ending is going to be sad. This can't work...
Name: curlihairedfiend reviewed
The strange new tutor on Oct 02, 2006 05:06 pm
what a pleasing fic. i do look forward to the coming chapters. but i dont think i like Ginny this defensive, strong is one thing but being too defensive makes one seem a bit foolish. unless thats what youre going for.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. About Ginny's defensive behaviour, you have to consider that this is Draco Malfoy we are talking about. I thought it was good for her to be sharp and cold at first but don't worry, she will lose everything very fast ;)
Name: Katrina_M reviewed
The strange new tutor on Oct 02, 2006 11:39 am
aww! This is really cute so far. I hope it gets better, not saying it's not good though mind you. I just mean that I hope later on we get an explanation for Dra- I mean Malfoy's;)- sudden additude :) Very nice so far! can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Well, you will have an explanation for Malfoy's behaviour but later, much later....maybe in the fifth or the sixth chapter. I know it's frustrating but I don't want to say more on Draco before. I promise next chapter will be up very soon.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The strange new tutor on Sep 30, 2006 05:57 pm
Really really cute. Characterization is good. And sometimes it's nice to forget HBP happened so we can have some good ol' fluff! ;) Can't wait for more! ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, HPB is pretty sad so I chose to ignore it all for this story. Thanks for your comments and compliments. Next chapter will be up soon.
Name: Silver Peppermint reviewed
The strange new tutor on Sep 30, 2006 03:08 pm
An orginal twist of the whole 'D/G bet' scenario. I wait for you next update eagerly!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll try to update asap, I swear!
Name: jess10 reviewed
The strange new tutor on Sep 30, 2006 02:20 pm
This story seems really interesting and could go many ways. I hope it doesn't end too quickly or typically.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Don't worry, I'll try to not go too fast as far as their relationship is concerned.