Name: aizak reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jul 30, 2008 08:18 pm
I liked it. A continuation would be nice.
Name: Kristibisci reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 23, 2006 05:37 pm
Aww, poor Ginny and Draco. Can't they just realise that they're meant to be together? Then everyone would be happy! This story has great potential and is full of raw emotion.
Just a bit of constructive criticism to make it even better: Watch for malapropism (the misuse of words), like when you use the word 'prevail' instead of 'avail'. Also, watch your sentence structure. Try reading your story out loud. I find that really helps my writing.
I hope to read more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your review and criticism. It really helps. Thanks! : )
Name: ShnazzieYazzie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 20, 2006 05:53 pm
I thought you story was FANTASTIC!!! it's was soooooooo great! I hope you continue your fabolous writing... Keep it up buddy!!!
Author's Response: I don't care. Don't bother lying to me again or I will make u dee dee dee
Name: dragonfly reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2006 12:34 pm
awww wow that was a very powerful story as short as it was it was a lot of emotion i could imagine the pain from both well done of a job!( clap clap clap)
Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad you liked it! This is my first story and I was kind of nervous about it. Thanks!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2006 10:49 am
Love it! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing. I was kind of nervous if you guys would like it. Thanks!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 16, 2006 05:43 pm
I like what you have written so far and I am looking forward to possible additions to your short story. I am interested to know how it all pans out in the end! SUper Duper awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll think about additions to my story. That was a great idea. Thanks for reviewing!