Reviews For The Tempest
Name: curiousee reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 23, 2018 01:27 am
This, needs a sequel. Thank you for writing.
Name: KJ Expelliarmus reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 15, 2013 05:54 am
A truly lightning affair
Name: LelekaSam reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 02, 2012 01:58 am
wow, simply WOW. you created something truly beautiful. LOVE the ending.... sooo great. "and above him, a star twinkled"
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 19, 2008 01:19 pm
That was awesomely written. Is there a sequel? I hope there's a sequel...
Name: ablaze reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 30, 2008 06:48 am
wow. that was intense. have you ever given thought to write a follow up to this?
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 05, 2008 06:48 pm
Have I left a review before? I cant remember.
But I decided to re-read this.

Amazing.
:)
This makes me dislike Harry even more.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 24, 2008 08:30 pm
I thought this was bloody fantastic. I like how the sky was a mirror of their emotions. The ceiling being a raging thunderstorm when Draco entered, but after their encounter 'stars twinkled brightly in the clear night sky'. That was great.
Name: fluffahoy reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2008 07:47 pm
Bloody Hell.
That...in need for a better word...rocked.
Name: creativemermaid08 reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 07, 2007 07:41 pm
This was really good! You shouldn't have been worried that you wouldn't be good at writing smut... you write like you've done it before!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: dracoginny4ever reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 16, 2007 06:16 pm
WOW. This has to be the best D/G oneshot I've ever read. I especially like this line: " The knowledge that he would be the first to have her - him and not Potter - pushed Draco past desire into frenzied need." It seems like exactly the thing Draco would think.

Author's Response: Wow! What a nice thing to say! Thank you so much!
Name: Lil Cas reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2007 05:56 pm
I like it!!! Very well written

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: seegrim reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 13, 2007 08:22 am

Wow! For a first attempt that was brilliant! Even for a second, third, or fourth attempt, for that matter.

I loved this line: The effect was immediate, the redhead’s mouth forming words of encouragement that were lost in the cacophony of the magical tempest raging above them.

Thanks for the good read!



Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Ginger98 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 12, 2007 11:27 am
1st time on this site, 1st story I've read. I really liked it. It was hot, & charged with passion. Loved the ceiling reflecting emotions. Way to go!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you stick around. There are a ton of good stories on this archive!
Name: When It Rains reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 12, 2007 08:07 am
That was a nice story. I like smut, it makes me happy. Good job.

Author's Response: It makes me happy, too!
Name: Creating Apathy reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 11, 2007 02:46 pm
WONDERFULMARVELOUSGORGEOUSGAHHHHHHH!

You couldn't tell it was your first time writing smut, and it the story was so beautifully artful. Great job.

Question: Will there be more?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it! As to whether there will be more... Never say never, but there are some other things I need to finish up first.
Name: merdagh reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 25, 2007 05:10 am
fucking sweat good for your first make another

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Name: LadyJane reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 16, 2007 07:36 pm
holy crap...fantastic.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: passion reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 05, 2006 12:59 am
Perfect!! I have read many of ur stories and loved every one of em...This one is no different..Loved every bit..You captured there emotions wonderfully, very intense and yet so smutty :D...I always have a huge smile on my face after reading your work..Fantastic job! I like these kind of fics...not many dialogues..just action..not only that kind of action :o You know what i mean..Toodles!!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! That's very nice to hear. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: eli reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 02, 2006 06:17 am
ahhh! tell me it's not a one-shot!

Author's Response: It is a one shot for the time being. I may come back and revisit it later, though, if the bunny strikes!
Name: JamieLynn reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 30, 2006 11:11 am
hey, this story is awesome! you really shouldnt keep the world waiting too long for more ;)
hehe good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It's a one-shot for now. I'm not ruling out continuing the storyline later, though, if an idea comes to mind.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 30, 2006 09:44 am
This was my favourite line, "She was completely unashamed to be here, to be with him like this." For me, that summed up the whole feeling b/n D/G. The one part that didn't work for me was Draco holding Ginny up with her back against that rough stone wall (ouch!) as well as his gymnastics to get his pants off. I would have preferred some other position, perhaps using one of the tables and Ginny on top with Draco watching her and that tempest above. I liked the openess of her proposal and his sincere appreciation of her. There was nothing underhanded or dirty about it. It was lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. Originally I had planned to have them on the Gryffindor table, but I couldn't get it to come out the way I wanted it.
Name: akiko_dono reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 30, 2006 04:59 am
great job. i like how the great hall was used as a reflection of their impromptu relationship. i'd like a sequel, or perhaps another chapter, showing how they come to terms with what happened, if you're up for it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! For now this is a stand alone piece, but I'm open to writing more if I get visited by any fluffy white bunnies.
Name: pens82 reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2006 04:32 am
good

Author's Response: Thanks
Name: Horizon684 reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 05:09 pm
Well you did a great job...I want to see what Potters reaction is when he finds out she isn't pure anymore. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sure Harry will be distressed. Maybe not quite as much as Ron would be, though, when he realizes what his little sister's been up to.
Name: Niraerlinn reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 27, 2006 04:24 pm
Really hot, I love the whole idea of the storm raging in the great hall. I only wish it had been on the Gryfindor house table instead of the wall. I just feel it would have given Draco some kind of perverse satisfaction, but the wall was very hot too.

Author's Response: Originally I planned for them to do it on the Gryff table, actually. I think both Draco and Ginny would have gotten some satisfaction from seeing Harry eat in the same spot they were getting it on earlier. I couldn't find a way to get them both on the table without some awkwardness, though, so I went the easy route and shoved 'em against a wall. I'm glad you still liked it, though!
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