Name: Desertisle reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2016 01:06 pm
Brilliant writing and story! Kudos to you.
Name: yomoedmb reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 05, 2010 05:13 am
Wow that was amazing. I just love how you make it so sexy without giving full detail of the smut, and it's so much more than a PWP because there are so many emotions portrayed in your words. It touches someone deep. This was beautiful.
Name: an_element reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 11, 2008 06:18 pm
You write beautiful prose, it's more artistic than most writers I know and the fact that you put this in first person shows that you wanted to relate the caracter and guess what? You succeded! Thanx for such a piece.
Name: Black Alnair reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 18, 2007 10:33 am
Beautiful use of music as a means of healing. I was at a concert a few weeks ago - and it's always incredible when the singer puts down his mic and everyone is just singing along in one single drawn out moment - really really incredible. And you've described it perfectly! Made the sensation palable.
And I loved Draco - I wondered how he was when he walked in, how the conversation struck up between them, and how he's changed. His question, "So how was your day?" was so simple and potent. It's something that is asked all the time but you've elevated the ordinary into something truly meaningful.
Looking forward to more of your work rockmysocks. Fantastic penname btw! ;)
Name: arabela reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 03, 2006 09:09 am
agh, wow, I LOVED it. Your writing is really lyrical, - very beautiful. wow, that was really pretty.
Name: Niraerlinn reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 10, 2006 10:39 am
Really beautiful, especially for a first fanfiction. The closting line was particularly touching.
Name: sillysun reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 08, 2006 02:23 am
I haven't been reading much D/G lately - this reminds me why I love it so much. It felt like them, and I really like the way you handled it. Nice work.
Name: ablaze reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 07, 2006 12:36 pm
completely love it. i love this side of draco. "No Gin, we don't heal completely. We just find a way to make it bearable." so true draco, so true.
Name: snitch369 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 07, 2006 12:21 pm
You're a really fantastic writer. I look forward to reading more from you :)
Name: noludoru reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 07, 2006 05:45 am
I love it!! My only concrit for you is that Ginny sounds young-- but she is young, and hurt, and we all sound younger when we're hurting. It's a great short story. Oh, and don't feel vulnerable that it's your first fic-- at least you posted it for people to read, that takes courage.
Author's Response: Yeah, she probably sounds young because I was usin her, in part, as a conduit for me and I'm only 19.
Thanks for the oh-so-delicate criticism.
Name: gurl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 07, 2006 03:40 am
That was beautiful.
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 07, 2006 03:34 am
Brilliant. I loved it. Just enough angst to show that although their is still pain you can always find some pleasure.
Name: Teller of Tales reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 06, 2006 07:29 pm
I really did enjoy reading this. I know this might sound weird but I thought it was beautifully written especially for it being your first fanfiction. I hope you continue writing more and soon so I can read more of your work.
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks alot.
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 06, 2006 04:49 pm
That was great! It was angsty and emotional and just great. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks!