Oh no! She didn't hear him and when will he get up the courage to just speak from the heart again...
Poor, whipped Draco. What else will he have to endure for Ginny's sake? A very evil part of me hopes quite a lot! Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to finding out what will happen with the trio and with the potion.
Author's Response: If you want to play, you have to pay! It'll be good, character-building stuff for Draco. He deserves a little discomfort. But only a little. Thanks for the review!
Good chapter. Wish it was longer though :)
Alright, I'm sure you get this all the time, but I have a NEED to quote my two favorite parts of this chapter:
1.
Ginny pushed out her lower lip a fraction of an inch.
Draco mentally rolled his eyes. Bloody fucking hell. The sound you hear is that of the Malfoy heir being whipped into submission. Enter the date in your diaries, please.
2. “For fuck’s sake, there are certain things you just count on. Hagrid tries to kill us with mad, hairy things with too many legs, Mum sends a maroon jumper for Christmas, Hermione knows the answer to every conceivable question ever asked, and Draco Malfoy is a giant, throbbing arse. I think this might be the beginning of Armageddon. The world has gone insane.”
HAHAHAH. Ah, I really enjoyed reading this. Can't wait for the next chapter to get posted. Tell your wonderful betas to hurry!! Considered this story Favorited...or however it goes ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm having an awfully good time with it...
omg! its beautiful i luv it!!!
Ooh so many admissions! And she's not having too hard a time getting him to spill his thoughts and feelings *squee*
oh dear lord, a malfoy laughing heartily...
Fabulous chapter, and Harry was there! yay, jealousy! loved it, can't wait for more...
Author's Response: A Malfoy laughing hard... has to be curse induced!
Aww *tears up* That was just lovely.
His internal dialogue is hilarious! *passes Draco a hankie*
“You should ease into the whole ‘being nice’ thing, Malfoy. Too much at one time might… injure you.”
My keyboard thanks you for the thorough cleaning it's just received *g* They're both brilliantly in character.
Excellent! I loved his efforts to keep his thoughts on track :)
Excellent chapter. Draco's inner thoughts are so very amusing. I'll be laughing for quite some time. Thanks.
Author's Response: You're welcome. Thanks for reading!
i know i know, ive already reviewed, (as the other 'Hopeless'0 but this story is just so amazing, it deserves it
wow, that was just breathtaking. id have to say it was a magnificent chapter, and please, please update!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will update as soon as possible!
He ignored her. “For fuck’s sake, there are certain things you just count on. Hagrid tries to kill us with mad, hairy things with too many legs, Mum sends a maroon jumper for Christmas, Hermione knows the answer to every conceivable question ever asked, and Draco Malfoy is a giant, throbbing arse. I think this might be the beginning of Armageddon. The world has gone insane.”
I have never laughed so hard. Great quote. =)
I also enjoyed Draco's thought at the end regarding rendering the Trio speechless. Very Draco.
Overall this was a great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad I made you laugh. The next chapter won't be as long in coming.
Awesome!
Yay! Draco is sooo sweet in this one...
great chapter...this is one huge review...i just read all of the chapter and must say that this is great...would love to see some more cuddling and kisses...is she not a prefect with her own room? will we ever hear from Draco's mother...Loved all of this, hope that Harry doesn't interfere with them...
Author's Response: I think it's funny you're working out how to get the smut rolling...you're not the only one. We'll see. rnrnWe shall see.
Teehee! Glad to see you posting more of this! Draco's internal monologue never fail to makes me laugh. :)
Author's Response: Thanks to you, his internal monologue isn't quite so fluffy! I like him with the snark.
I've really enjoyed reading this, i like the way you've depicted Ginny , she's got just the right amount of sweetness and spice to make it fit! you're characterisation of Draco is also appealing, he's not dastardly evil... nor sickenngly sweet, an interesting plot line - i'm wild for more! x
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. I've had to reign myself in a whole lot to not make our Draco into a sickeningly sweet leading man... thank God for betas.
CONTINUE!! great so far, can't wait to see more d/g and the rest of the potion...
Author's Response: The potion intrigues me as well, I think it might be my favorite part!
Really enjoying this fic! I love the way you've portrayed Ginny as being strong. Glad snarky Malfoy's still in there as well!
Next chapter sounds..intriguing. Please let it be Harry that's jealous. Silly boy letting Ginny go like that.
Author's Response: Yeah, I do so love to torment Harry...
Yes, I have done the walk of shame... with a gigantic hangover and my friends doing the hateful slow clap as I came in! But this is very very good, and you must hurry because I want to know what happens... does Harry find out?? Stupid scarred git that he is, I hope Draco smirks at him!
Author's Response: *gasps* Not the slow clap! Horrid!
I'm just waiting on the corrections to come back... it'll be posted as soon as I get them. Rest assured, if the speccy dolt does find out, there will be much smirking involved...
oh, i loved it! im excited for the next one!
"I was going to get up and leave in that direction, anyway. I'm not actually following her or anything. Just… casually walking. Yeah, that's it"
haha! pretty much one of my favorite lines, and theres so many more too. love this story.