Name: soccergrl reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 06, 2006 10:26 am
oh my gosh, that was one of the cutest things ive ever read. i had a huge grin on my face while i read it.
Author's Response: thanks!
Name: silentocean reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 06, 2006 06:47 am
I really like this story. I like the way you've incorporated book six and they way you've portrayed Draco's and Ginny's charicter. Do try and post chapter 16 soon?
Author's Response: I'll do what I can.
Name: seegrim reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 05, 2006 08:11 pm
Oh.My.Gosh. Loved it times ten. I cannot even put into words how much I loved this chapter. You, my friend, rock out loud.
Author's Response: I have always wanted to rock out loud! Thanks! Glad you're having as much fun as I am.
Name: seegrim reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 05, 2006 08:02 pm
I can't remember if I already reviewed (it's finals week so my brain is applesauce) but I wanted to say this chapter is so great! I love this story and I think I'm officially a fangirl now!
Author's Response: You're my first!
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 05, 2006 07:16 pm
Huzzah. This is everything that I could have hoped for in the new chapter. It has tension, humor, truth and the thrill of a growing intimacy between two people who have become friends and are falling in love. I really like this Draco and Ginny. And if the next chapter makes you as the author squee, then I'll probably faint dead away. I think I'm developing a crush on Draco Malfoy. Does that make me looney? Thanks so much. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: If having a crush on him makes you a looney, then you're in good company. I'm certifiable.
Name: Anise reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 05, 2006 05:50 pm
I really like this Draco. It's easy to just make him into a jerk who is Redeemed by Teh One True Love of Ginny, but I think your portrayal is actually a lot closer to what canon!Draco would be if this particular set of circumstances had happened. Anyway, we all hope to see more soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Name: zenophile reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 05, 2006 04:18 pm
wooo! another great chapter cant wait for the next one ;)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Birdofpray09 reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 05, 2006 02:08 pm
This is a bit of a selfish review . . . But I was wondering if you've posted the chapters up to 16 anywhere yet?
This story is just so good that I'm thanking God that you update so frequently!
Author's Response: No, just on my computer and the composition books (TWO OF THEM) by my bed. I've typed through chapter 13, (I think) and now I'm just at the mercy of the SPAG beta. She's very good.
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Questions, Confessions and Smiles on Dec 05, 2006 01:57 pm
Oh good, there will be at least 16 chapters! Huzzah!
Author's Response: Probably more like 25. Ish.
Name: Peki reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 05, 2006 05:02 am
This last chapter made me smile (they all do, really, but this last one especially) :-) I really like this fic! This 7th year scenario is very similar to something I've been working on lately (one of those braintwin moments *g*), and I can't wait to discuss and compare with you once mine is posted :) I especially love Ginny in this, still. She's strong and kind, just what Draco needs. I was a bit surprised that they became so friendly and comfortable with each other so soon, but I trust you've got the plot all figured out and planned, so I'm curious where it's going. I'm excited for more and will be waiting for an update most impatiently *g*
Author's Response: I really hope their intentions and subconsious thoughts come out within their inner monolgues... Am I the only one who has these? Anyhow, that that will give the reader reasons for their behavior. I've written through chapter 16... it's all on beta time, really. And trust me. You don't want it pre-beta.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 04, 2006 08:55 pm
Aww...that was a sweet moment. And not in a bad way. Anyway, I've caught this story a little late, but I'll try to keep up with it from now on.
My only issue in this chapter is Ginny's description. Though it isn't something I dispute, it is a little cliche, and I want to just warn you against writing something that won't be something new. I don't think you're in danger of that; I haven't really had any warning flags go up besides that, so it's not something to worry about or to let change what you plan to write. My only advice would really be to make sure that Draco is very real to you. If you know him, then your audience will know him and relate to him and you won't have problems with him seeming cliche. The real issue with a cliche Draco is not his characterization, it's that often, the author didn't really come up with the character themselves. They've stolen someone else's version of Draco and you can never really write someone else's character. You have to give your own interpretation. That's what fan fiction is all about anyway,isn't is: A different interpretation?
Anyway, besides that, keep it up. This is good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful and through review. You've certainly given me lots to think about.
Name: MyEscape reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 03, 2006 08:57 pm
love it and want more please
Name: Elena reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 03, 2006 04:31 pm
add more!
Name: blubberguts reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 02, 2006 08:20 pm
weird
Author's Response: Mmm. Perhaps.
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 02, 2006 08:18 pm
Oh my. This was worth the wait. I love reading those moments of intimacy between two characters when they become real and human to each other. This was an excellent example of that very thing. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks. Me, too. Glad you thought it was worth the wait.
Name: seegrim reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 02, 2006 07:15 pm
What a sweet chapter. I really enjoyed it. I think I love Draco more though! Eek, in love with my husband and a fictional character, talk about dichotomy! Thanks so much for the story! I love your stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. You're not the only one with the dichotomy! I bet if we polled the girls around here a good number of them would be a little 'in love' with Draco. *sighs*
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 02, 2006 01:23 pm
“I don’t hate you.”
no he sure doesn't... So vair vair fabby! I don't know how you do it... It's so great that they are talking. Will there be conflict from our beloved(ish) Dream Team at any point?
I was vair impressed at how you could make the death of a toad such a symboly thing... Draco is lovely.....
Author's Response: Draco *is* lovely... *sigh*
The dream team? That would be telling...*cough* chapter nine *cough*
Name: jess10 reviewed
Assessments, Dead Toads, and First Names on Dec 02, 2006 12:19 pm
Eeeeeeeeee!
Author's Response: I Know! It's just warming up!
Name: Embellished reviewed
Manners, Potions and Loneliness on Dec 02, 2006 07:37 am
I just started reading this story, and it is quite enjoyable. I like your Draco--his self-pity is very funny. I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out!
Author's Response: Self pity (in others) is amusing... to a point. You'll have to let me know if it gets annoying. Thanks for the review!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Manners, Potions and Loneliness on Nov 30, 2006 03:55 am
"You will not blush, you bugger"
fabby fabby fabby... again ;)
no you shall not silence the fabbiness of writing fabby with your sarcasm. I am enjoying reading this vair vair much, it is a ray of sunshine in a field of rather grey stuff....
uhh, well done. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've never fancied myself as a "ray of sunshine" but can certainly work with that. Thanks so much for the review.
Name: ziolkowskis reviewed
Manners, Potions and Loneliness on Nov 30, 2006 01:30 am
Such a fun story - your Draco is a hoot. Love the stuff he says versus his thoughts. Keeping writing - I am definitly enjoying.
Author's Response: Thanks, I believe I will.
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Manners, Potions and Loneliness on Nov 29, 2006 03:34 pm
GASP! You can't post my comments - everyone will know what a dirty mind I really have!
*Frowns dissaprovingly at the lemon biscuits*
Well, each to their own, I guess.
Much love and congratulations for my favourite Texan (That puts you above Jensen Ackles, you realise?)
Author's Response: I suppose chocolate would be better? With tea? Ew.
Should I know who Jensen Ackles is? In my defense, it's a big state.
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Nightmares, Lunacy and a Favour on Nov 29, 2006 03:32 pm
*Hugs*
Glad to see the updates progressing nicely!
And I have to agree with everyone else, Draco's thoughts are pure gold. Of course, you know what I think he was *really* thinking...
*saucy wink*
Author's Response: Yes, I do... *fans self*
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Manners, Potions and Loneliness on Nov 29, 2006 02:21 pm
You have the best chapter titles! Thank you for gracing us with yet another wonderful chapter. I have more comments, but am far to lazy to write at the moment, so they will come with the next review.
Author's Response: Thanks & you're welcome. I had a very good time with the titles.:)
Name: Peki reviewed
Nightmares, Lunacy and a Favour on Nov 28, 2006 10:33 am
Draco's inner monologue makes me giggle. *g* I like that this is, in spite of the very serious situation they are in, a very lighthearted treatment of D/G. :) Or at least so far! I'm excited to see where you'll be going with it. I just hope Narcissa's death will turn out to be just a dream. I couldn't stand to see her die, ahh!
Author's Response: I actually thought about you when I put in the "character death" thing on the posting site. Never fear, Peki, I wouldn't do that to you...