Name: chenjinyan reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 13, 2017 05:55 pm

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Name: VickyVicarious reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 20, 2008 04:15 pm

I can't wait for more! This is really really good.... I especially like how you take everything into consideration.

Name: LuvWabbit reviewed Chapter 5 on Mar 11, 2007 07:50 pm

Oooo I really like this story. I think you have some amazing ideas, and a really good style. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it... sometimes I can't wait to see what happens next either! Haha. I have a general plan, but I keep changing it as I write.

Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Chapter 5 on Mar 11, 2007 12:10 am

aaw, he felt gratitude!!! the silly goose... I love how you've characterized Ginny in this story. It's fabulous...

Umm, Death Eaters would put Muggles on buildings... merely as a display of their own dominance. They feel superior, and are just exhibiting that. Only, it wasn't a group of Death Eaters, it was one rogue one, one with an extreme dislike of Muggles... choose him, whoever he is... Lucius Malfoy? It would fit well with the story...

Or it could be a ritual; an offering of their souls. It was meant to be seven; the magic number, but two escaped/were discovered before the ritual could be completed. They could have been arranged in a circle, only the circle wasn't obvious to Bill, as there were two parts missing...

Okayy... that's weird. I'm rambling, so I'll stop. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Aww, this review made me really happy! :) I'm glad you like my Ginny... half the time I have no clue what I'm doing with her... lol. For some reason I find her harder to write than Draco. I think I agree with your musings... I had been thinking along the lines of a ritual... there are five-pointed symbols that mean death, so maybe I'll go with that. Thanks for helping me decide! :) As for Lucius, he's in Azkaban presently... but I've been thinking about staging a breakout... so we'll see what happens in the future. ;)
And are you forseeing any updates to "Rampaging Hedge"? That story cracks me up! :)

Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed Chapter 4 on Feb 12, 2007 03:59 pm

Well at least there is some conflicts between Ginny and Draco to solve now. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!

Author's Response: And there will be more conflicts to come! Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Chapter 4 on Feb 11, 2007 05:17 am

*such* a good idea, with the Legilemency. I love this story; it's believable and interesting... can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! I'm glad you think the Legilimency thing passed off well... I was worried that it would be cliched or boring... you know how it gets when you work on one chapter so long that you honestly can't tell anymore whether it's brilliant or terrible? Yeah, that's how this chapter was for me. Haha. Many thanks for your encouraging review! :)

Name: sweet gurl reviewed Chapter 4 on Feb 10, 2007 03:52 pm

cant wait for mre

Name: sweet gurl reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 10, 2007 02:15 pm

OMG draco is so vulnerable!!
i hate to see him like that :O

Author's Response: Hate in a bad way... or hate in a good way? I hope it's leaning towards good... because he's in a pretty vulnerable position. ;) Thanks for reviewing!!

Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter 3 on Dec 18, 2006 01:27 pm

It looks like it will be amusing in the future. If you need any help with editing or anything I could probably help you out. Not to say that it looked like it was in need of major editing. Do keep writing, I should like to know how everything works out and perhaps see a bit of D/G intereaction in the coming chapters.

Author's Response: D/G interaction will, in fact, be seen in the next chapter... which I hope to have up in a couple of days (life provided some unavoidable distractions over Christmas break)... thanks for your beta offer, I may take you up on it in the future! :)

Name: CCC reviewed Chapter 3 on Dec 17, 2006 03:32 pm

Nice chapter, I'll be looking for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! More will be coming soon!

Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed Chapter 3 on Dec 16, 2006 05:34 pm

Oh, as for the italics thing, it sounds like you're not ending the code. After you've put everything you want italicized after , you need to end it with I had to put periods in there otherwise it wouldn't show up, but be sure to remove the periods when you use the code.

Author's Response: I think it still didn't show up... but thanks for trying! I think I'm going to mess around with it right now...

Author's Response: I just figured it out! I feel pretty dumb... it was very easy--you're right, I wasn't ending the code. Thanks for your help!! :)

Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed Chapter 2 on Dec 16, 2006 05:04 pm

Your Draco is a very unique one. We're used to sarcastic, suave Draco and condescending, bully Draco. But yours has a new level of depth, a frailty which is very humanizing and still very believable. Excellent!

Author's Response: I love these kinds of reviews! Not because they're so positive (though of course I don't mind that either--haha), but because you tell me WHAT you liked about it, not just THAT you did. It really is very helpful. And it's great to have the readers analyze the characters... it helps the writer to step back and view the story through different eyes. I'm glad my Draco is believable! Thanks for a great review! :)

Name: CCC reviewed Chapter 2 on Nov 26, 2006 04:53 pm

This is very true to the books, that must be hard. Good job. I'll be checking back for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's one thing that I try really hard to do as I write--stay true to J.K.'s characterization. Of course, it won't be perfect, and I'll have to take some creative liberties as the plot progresses, but it's encouraging to hear that I'm doing well so far. Much thanks! :)