Name: pinkblood reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Jul 30, 2010 08:55 pm
I felt it was going to end a bit abruptly but the ending worked because of the last line, "But no one came." Smutty but there's also a lot of hidden plot in just 1000 words - would love to read more (I think there's enough for a long story in the concept of this piece), but it's beautiful. LOVE!
Name: babigurlchels reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Feb 25, 2009 03:59 pm
...dirty and interesting, i like it. next please!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 17, 2008 03:35 pm
Bad Draco! That's just MEAN!
Name: Nameless reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 03, 2007 04:23 pm
Nice one-shot but what's up with the ending? So he just left her hanging? One little encounter and that's it?
Author's Response: Well, I like to think that he didn't want to go too far with her because he likes her more than that. At least, that was the intent when I wrote this one-shot *ages* ago. But yea, he's still a jerk for just leaving her hanging.
Name: Katelynn reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Sep 14, 2007 05:34 am
Oh my god. that is so unfair. he should get his ears checked.
Name: slygal reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 13, 2006 08:53 pm
and her revenge for that little scene is....
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 10, 2006 06:39 pm
I wish there was another chapter
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 09, 2006 12:37 pm
Definitely naughty, indeed. :) And just enough angst/mystery to be intriguing. Good stuffs. ^_^
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 08, 2006 03:42 pm
. . . That's it? I feel like I've been left dangling from a cliff. Great story I loved it, however is there any chance of a sequel? I want to know if they have a future...
Name: saucy reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 08, 2006 01:03 pm
Man, he's such a prick.
Name: pens82 reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 08, 2006 06:01 am
good
Name: Angelsea585 reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 08, 2006 05:54 am
Fascinating. If you feel so inclined, fill us in on what happened, although I'm off imagining my own ending right now...
Brilliantly done.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 07, 2006 06:57 pm
Oh don't leave me hanging! It is fabulous and I hope that this isn't the end of the piece. If it is, please I beg you to write a sequel and satisfy the relationship. I too want to know. Is he going to approach her again?
Raving over on this side of the keyboards!
Name: CCC reviewed
Benefit of the Wrong on Dec 07, 2006 12:47 pm
Hmmm, the ending was abrupt. Was he just messing with her? Do they have a future together. Was the last line meant as a joke? Your writing is good, but I'm a bit confused. It could just be me. I'm having one of those days.
Author's Response: It's totally left up to the reader to think what s/he wants to think, which is why it's abrupt. A lot of times I like to leave fics unresolved or ambiguous. :) But I'd like to think that Draco has a little bit of sensitivity to him...just a hint. If you want to know more, just let me know.