Name: FrecklesForever reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on May 11, 2013 09:39 pm
This was adorable :) I loved it!
It's true that we don't usually see DG when they have already matured in their relationship. This was a refreshing piece of work
Name: Tamashii reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Nov 28, 2009 05:17 pm
Hi!
I find wonderful your idea of showing their relationship at two points of theirs lives where they are falling in love.
I also liked how you portrayed the other characters in this story, specially pansy.
I Loved when Harry said: “Well, Pans, you can stop fretting. They look just fine to me. Still giving free public lessons in Sex Ed…”
It says so much about their relat¡onship after they went public
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Nov 14, 2009 04:33 pm
I like how Draco and Ginny come back together at the end! :)
Name: la_rubinita reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Nov 09, 2009 10:05 pm
That was so refreshing! I wish there, was more, but more would actually make it less, if you know what I mean, so I guess I'll just have to make do. Really, really amazing work!
Name: thundersenshi reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Nov 03, 2009 04:55 pm
I usually don't read D/G married fics, but yours was a real pleasure to read :)
Name: ZSF reviewed
Chapter 1 - Here take mine on Oct 10, 2008 09:43 pm
Oh, and I read somewhere in another respond how you wanted some suggestions on Britspeak. There was one point, early in the book, where it said something about Ginny loving History of Magic and studying at the "college student level". Well, in the UK, it would be university, but that wouldn't be used anyway for the Wizarding world.
Name: ZSF reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Oct 10, 2008 09:39 pm
Oh, that was such a nice sweet fic. It somehow managed to be amusing, endearing, and sometimes heart breaking too. Great job!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on May 20, 2008 01:49 am
You're absolutely right about how there is something special about a mature relationship. It's like good wine...
Name: Avacado reviewed
Chapter 1 - Here take mine on Apr 21, 2008 09:19 pm
I liked it.
You really have a gift of story telling, you know.
Very well done.
Author's Response: Thrilled you enjoyed! ~Vesica
Name: joliefille reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Jan 09, 2008 09:18 pm
Very cute, and I liked the back and forth between the past and the present. Pansy and Harry threw me for a loop, and I'm sad that there are only three Weasley children left, but it was good. A few errors here and there, though, like "he whispered in here ear" and "getting the hair of her eyes" in this chapter. Sorry. end nitpick.
Author's Response: OH NO! I am so anal about the typos. Thanks for pointing them out. And yes, the Harry/Pansy bit was meant to be somewhat jarring. Twenty something years can change a lot. ~Vesica
Name: Dana F Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Sep 14, 2007 06:07 am
Lovely. I loved the double falling in love thing. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for taking the time to review! ~Ves
Name: pattygirl reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Jul 30, 2007 11:58 am
this is such a sweet story i love it!
Author's Response: Awww, glad you enjoyed it! ~Ves
Name: Jorrn reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Jun 12, 2007 03:31 pm
How utterly delicious. Very heart warming. Unique in perspective and very real. So many time once the kids are gone it seems there is not much holding a relationship together. Love seeing how they were able to work themselves back to each other and rediscover what they started out with!
Author's Response: Thrilled you enjoyed! Thanks for taking the time to review. ~Ves
Name: japdragon reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on May 13, 2007 08:22 pm
i loved this. and the second falling in love was definitely more poignant than the cliché hogwarts get together. i wish i could write like this!
Author's Response: Well, it does make sense that something happened at Hogwarts but there are only so many ways to write that and I'm pretty sure they've all been done. :D Thrilled you enjoyed and thanks! ~Ves
Name: Xxsilent_soulxX reviewed
Chapter 1 - Here take mine on Mar 06, 2007 03:21 pm
hehe... how cute. :]
Author's Response: Thanks! ~Ves
Name: Foreveress reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Mar 01, 2007 03:12 pm
Great story, I really loved it!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed and thanks for taking a second to review! ~Ves
Name: Evalahn reviewed
Chapter 1 - Here take mine on Mar 01, 2007 09:51 am
Hey, I've recently been too stuck on mynuet to read anything by other authors (minus the Okelanis...), but this is really rather good. Er, I'd change a few things so it sounds more like britspeak, but the writing and storyline itself is particularly good. So... brava!
Author's Response: Many thanks! Out of curiousity - what would you change re: Britspeak? I certainly wouldn't mind doing some further edits on this. Skimming the chapter, there are quite a few things in there that are only used in Britspeak, but since I am not native to Britian, there is always room for improvement!
~Ves
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Feb 24, 2007 08:43 pm
I just read this and I love it. Wonderful job! I really love how you allowed us to see both how they got together, and how they fell in love all over again. Extremely well-written. As I said, I loved it! :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed and thanks for taking a second to review! ~Ves
Name: SS Felton reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Feb 13, 2007 03:09 pm
loved it!!!!!!
write another
Author's Response: Hint taken! Glad you enjoyed this. ~Ves
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Feb 08, 2007 02:26 am
I love the way you pulled this together in the end, with elements from the past recurring in the future, and helping bring Ginny and Draco closer together. The smut was well-done, too. It makes a lot of sense that it would be so intense after such a long break. Thank you very much for posting this story! It was a nice change, and a joy to read.
Author's Response: Well I certainly thought so! How knows how long it had been? I can see them spending the whole rest of the day in bed. :D
I am so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for sticking with it, even through the tough chapters! ~Ves
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 6 - Dance with me. on Feb 08, 2007 02:26 am
In this chapter, I most liked the balance between past and present, and how they set up the future. In the scene from the past, Ginny's show of trust, and then Draco's, helped set them on their path. Then, in the scene from the present, the echo of the past helped them remember why they are together. It is very nicely done!
Author's Response: Sometimes we just need little reminders about HOW we got where we are because a lot of times the reasons why we made the choices we did are still valid if a little dusty for being forgotten. Glad you enjoyed! ~Ves
Name: snowfelon reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Feb 01, 2007 08:04 am
hello! just wanted to say that yes I enjoyed your fic very much, very interesting perspective. I did blanch a little at imagining a middle aged Ginny & Draco being naughty, then immediately felt bad about myself. everyone should get a little fun, not just young frisky things. so kudos for opening minds and yeah i lurved the 7 different phrases.
Author's Response: *snickers* I appreciate you stepping out of your comfort zone. It is rumored that even 40-year-olds still have sex! *wink*
Thanks so much and I am thrilled you enjoyed this!~Ves
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Jan 30, 2007 08:23 pm
I truly enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing it. I can't believe it's over. Oddly enough, it makes me a little sad. I'll just have to read it again. I have to admit that I'm a sucker for a grand gesture and Draco asking Ginny to dance at Hogwarts was perfect. As for the hair ribbons, holy moly. The nice detail to that besides the obvious is that Molly still sends them to Ginny even though she is now too old to wear them. Such a Mum thing to do. I'm glad that as adults Ginny and Draco were able to still find uses for them. All's well with the Malfoys--that's a nice ending. Thanks again.
Author's Response: All it quite well with the Malfoys! I rather like grand gestures too - which is probabaly why they showed up in this fic! Thanks so much! ~Ves
Name: mchen reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Jan 30, 2007 07:00 pm
Nice little story, but it seems you may have rushed the last two chapters out -- your verbs go back and forth between the past and present tense almost randomly. Other than that, a well-thought-out, well-written story.
Author's Response: Drat! That would be a product of an earlier version. I thought I had caught most of those but thanks for letting me know it needs another edit! Glad you enjoyed it! ~Ves
Name: youthinrevolt88 reviewed
Chapter 7 - I Love You. on Jan 30, 2007 05:19 pm
Lovely as usual, and I did indeed enjoy them falling in love again, it made up for the earlier angst perfectly!
Author's Response: Oh hooray! Thanks so much for taking the time to review! ~Ves