post more soon!
I like the story but Malfoy doesn't seem very Malfoy-ish. I kind of like his arrogance and selfishness to be present most of the time.
a very interesting and not over done side of Draco...him as a vrigin... but I think I like it... It changes his whole dynamic so quite OoC please keep writing!
liked it differant veiw on draco than most stories , but like it actually,update again soon.
awww..hopefully they will get married
So cute...I like that you made him out to be "pure" never get many fics like that...Cannot wait to see what else is instore...Will Ron beat Harry to death for what he done or will he forgive and forget...Post soon.
AWWW. Ginny is so lucky to have such a hot, sweet guy waiting for her after she dumped the cheating scum. (: Hehehe please update again soon, I love this Draco &Ginny fluffiness!
awwwwe cute story!!!!!! update soon! (hate freakin harry potter btw)
Author's Response: good!! than i'm doing what i'm supposed to!!! thanks for the review!!rn
This is really good! Harry got what he deserved. Draco was really nice. I hope he doesn't turn out to be a jerk. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
that's sp cute! please update soon!
omgg! its good i like it!
I love it. your such a great writter and I hope that u keep at this story b/c I want to see what happends for them. SO pleas keep at it.
Dev
Awww! Draco's so sweet...
progress!!!
lovely, well done! I'm very happy you updated, and you used some very good sneakiness.
very promising beginning, well done!
I love the idea of your sanctuary room. Plus I have always wanted to punch a few men in the head. I never had the chance. Reading your description of it was very satisfying.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review!! Also, if you think reading about it was good, writing it was so much better. This fanfic is like my diary in an alternate universe.
Alright...this is something.
Your story is cute, although cliched. I am confused as to why Harry was cheating on Ginny, will there be an explanation in upcoming chapters?
I do love some of your word choices, but there is something not quite right about your characterization. Why is Draco acting charming to a Weasley? Is that acceptable? Is there any internal conflict on this? And so on. Keep it up. I would love to see how you plan to unfold this.
Nice, though quite boring. Add some more description if you get my drift.
Author's Response: yeah i know. the next chapters are way better. believe me.
thanks for the review!
Author's Response: yeah i know. the next chapters are way better. believe me.
thanks for the review!