Update soon
I feel this is going to be a really amazing fict!
Great start
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Did something happen? I don't use LJ, so I can't read your friends-only blog. Why will stories "NOT be posted on FIA"?! Please give us a bit more of an explanation for the sudden indefinite good-bye (although it seems like a permanent good-bye for the readers of this archive).
I love this story and I would really like to be informed when u start writing again. my e-mail is purriffic11@aol.com
Jerk! Now come back begging...
Orphan?? This story looks amazing!!! I really love the way you portray Draco!!! Still I want to beat up the guy for going incendio on Ginny´s address!!! But I´ll know they´ll find each other, right? ;) I know I´m not the only one cheering for this story, PLEASE GO ON!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, orphan, isn't that awful? I would let you have at Draco and beat him up except that I need him for the rest of my fic. Good to hear that you're enjoying this bumpy ride so far. Yes, much more to come! Appreciate your review. - fallenwitch
I actually remember reading this fic, and I know it's a really good one! I always love reading your works because you write angst without trying so damn hard to make it look sappy! It's honest and warm -- just the way I love it!
Unless you change the course of this story, I know how the next chapters are going to be like -- and I pray that you will finish this journey because I didn't mind taking this trip the 2nd time around! Keep up the great work! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review, VioletJersey. I hope you enjoy this journey the second time around, and I am thrilled that you like my particular brand of angst. It's a hard sell! - fallenwitch
Oh, this is such an amazing beginning! So well written, and a really good description of their relationship.
Author's Response: Wow, I will suck up this praise like a shameless sponge because writing from Ginny's POV is not my forte - not even close. I'm always afraid reading it will make folks want to scratch their eyeballs out - so thank you very much, nun outfits are cool! -fallenwitch
ohhh mann!!! That part about her heart at the end...that was real sad but so... beautiful. This first chapter was written so well...your phrasing and descriptions are unique and i can't wait for the next chapter! I'm completely hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ginny POV fics aren't my forte so I appreciate your kind words. I hope this one continues to hold your interest. -fallenwitch
Oh, fabulous start. All that torrid heat in the seduction scene and then, just switched off. Abrupt cold shower. Very real and poignant. Can't wait to read the next trick up your sleeve.
Author's Response: Thanks, Phae. I don't know about tricks, but the next one is coming up soon. Thanks so much for your review. You know how much I appreciate it! -fallenwitch
and then what? What's next???
Author's Response: I think you'll get a good idea of where this is going after the next chapter or two. If all goes as planned, I plan to post again later this week. Thank for your review! -fallenwitch
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*breathes*
I've been debating in my head whether or not to PM you for the last few days to tell you that this is probably my favorite story of yours and to ask if you'd abandoned it.
I. LOVE YOU.
if you can't tell, i'm excited times a million. =D
Author's Response: Hello Bella! I had no idea you fancied this story so much. Speak up next time, girl. Don't be shy! You know where my lj is, BTW. Nah, not abandoned but it sure looked like it, didn't it? I am ashamed to say that it got lost in the roar of Along Came A Wizard. But it's back, and I'm thrilled that you love it so much. Thank you for your review. It made my whole week! How could it not? -fallenwitch
Wow, that was an amazing chapter. I hope to see more of this story soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming soon. -fallenwitch
great chapter. i hope that this is a story and that it will end with a happy ending, cuz what can i say? im a happy ending kind of person. update soon if it isnt a one shot!
Author's Response: Thank you! Nope, not a one shot. More is coming. - fallenwitch
Ooh! I'm thrilled to see that you are working on this again. I'm looking forward to seeing what changes you make (that is, if I can remember the original in enough detail), and how everything turns out.
As always, I love the way you manipulate words. You manage to convey character so well with so little. In this chapter, I particularly liked the passage, "The second time he wrestled her to the ground, a week later, she told him if he wanted to speak with her, don't, for Merlin's sake, throw her on the ground again, or he would meet with the business end of her wand in the most unpleasant way possible, no magic necessary." That one made me laugh out loud, and it says so much about both Ginny and Draco.
Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: It's always a good day when I can make you laugh, even if it involves shoving Ginny's wand someplace... well, you know! I hope you enjoy this the second time around. Since there's no prerequisite for reading this fic, no memory of the previous incantation is needed! *laughs* Thank you for the wonderful review. -fallenwitch
now i'm all excited for another one of your stories, i love it. why did that bastard dump her like that? One minute he whispers sweet nothings in her ear and the next he rips out her heart out. lying bastard.
Author's Response: I agree that Draco has quite a bit to answer for, doesn't he? Thanks for the wonderful review! -fallenwitch
wow.....thats all i can say. apart from: that was really good, well done i loved it and cant wait for more from you!!
Author's Response: Wow... thanks! More is coming. Stay tuned and thanks for the review! - fallenwitch
*insert squeal of delight here*
Oh, fallenwitch! I forgive you for being away so long when you treat us to this upon your return! How horrifically angsty... It takes me right back to high school (speaking of horrific), feeling all of the same things as poor Ginny. I LOVE it!
This, however--"He stared at her endlessly, until she hit him on the head to get him to stop." Does not seem as if he'll just be able to let it go. Of course, I missed this the first time 'round, so I don't know, but I'll be waiting (maybe even patiently) for the next installment.
Thank you for something to look forward to!
Author's Response: Yes, yes, yes! I had to go back to high school to dredge up the feelings in this opening chapter. *stuffs them away again* Thank you for the forgiveness because it has been WAY too long since I posted. The next chapter will give you all sorts of insight into Draco! Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Persephone 33! -fallenwitch
wow, thats tragic. but it was good.
Author's Response: Thank you! -fallenwitch
wow
Author's Response: Thanks! -fallenwitch
wow! that was amazing. i can't wait to read more. there is more i hope!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, there's more. It should be up within the week! - fallenwitch
Wowzer. Okay really, it's even better than I expected!
I liked this part:
That persistent snake was just getting started. He nagged her and harassed her and stalked her until she was ready to hex him just to get some relief from his infernal pestering. Fine. Yes, she would bloody well meet him in Diagon Alley over the holiday break if he would then kindly sod off for the rest of his sorry life.
And this part made my heart sad:
She was absolutely heartbroken and hurting in a fashion she never knew existed. Of course she hated the Slytherin with every fibre of her being that wasn't busy aching and yearning for him. He was everywhere she looked, in everything she felt, and she could hardly stand to be alive, so unrelenting was her particular kind of hell.
Oh, Draco, why'd you hurt our Ginny? Sigh.
Wonderful words, fallenwitch.
Oh, and the wanton cow line? Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, seegrim. You are always too kind to me. I reached back and pulled out some of my own teenage angst for this one - yeah, wanton cow and everything! - fallenwitch