Name: Kitty Lupin reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 12, 2009 03:30 pm
I like it and hope you continue. Very intresting premise... But if that's all there is to it... Alas, I love my complicated happy ending to much.
Name: Stylishcella reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 03, 2008 01:02 am
Brilliant storyline. But i feel its hanging in the air somehow..Sry, didn't quite understand the ending. But t'was good =)
Name: Mollie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 05, 2007 02:50 pm
Oh, that is sad. I wish they had ended up together. I understand Draco's explaination about how she couldn't have done what she did if he hadn't done what he had done. Still...Well at least it wasn't Harry freaking Potter. Well written story. I really enjoyed it!!!
Name: WolfStar reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 21, 2007 03:39 am
Aww, it's so good! And so sad. *tear* It was hard keeping it under control here at work. I think I like it just as a one shot, though I suppose if you really wanted, you could consider this a cookie from the bigger story. But I like it as is.
Name: lilydarliing reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 17, 2007 01:29 pm
I think this is worth continuing. I would love to see how it plays out.
Man. I freaking love this.
Name: Thessie reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 02, 2007 06:28 pm
If you want to continue this story, then you need to either make it so we have more of an understanding of Draco, or know if Ginny is still in love with Draco. Because with the way you ended it now it seems that both of them are unhappy and that is okay for Draco but with Ginny and that whole Grifindor thing she would fight for something that she wants.
Name: kimrs reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2007 02:57 am
Well, OK. You HAVE to continue this. I need more. I need to know what happens next. This is a great teaser, don't leave me hanging. Please!
Name: Nyghtinggail reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 28, 2007 06:23 am
I think it has a nice end there. But if you do continue I'll keep reading.
Name: julian steerpike reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 25, 2007 06:19 am
arh. his answer broke my heart, really.
it's very pretty already as a standalone, but i would definitely pick it up to read if you continue. :)
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 24, 2007 08:18 am
i'm not logged in at the mo. so will review again later. absolutely lovely well done. i'm not sure if this is just a one shot, but if its not i cant wait for more. well done it was beautiful!!
Name: Kattycat reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 24, 2007 12:56 am
I think that the story can stand on it's own just fine. When you leave an open end it just leaves more to our imagination.
Name: missY reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 08:47 pm
Why?! I think it's a good story. You should continue this. Maybe you can try to write it again when you're not too busy...
Name: braidedsilver reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 07:01 pm
My God how you've grown and improved. As a reader I am very proud of you. This was a bit of a tear jerker and I swear I felt that hand squeeze around my heart. I hope you'll finish something soon. As far as continuing this goes, I'm not sure. That depends entirely on your best judgment.
Name: Ananyamous reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 02:26 pm
I'm hoping that you'll introduce Seamus. You should definitely continue this story.
Name: SimplyVintage reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 01:26 pm
It was so very sad. I do hope that youll continue! You cant just leave it so open-ended! Ginny MUST be with Draco; not Seamus. For my own affinity with Happily Ever Afters. I love the story, and you dont have to continue if you dont want to.
Name: slygal reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 12:29 pm
I think the bastard deserves some redemption.... please write another!!
Name: archirat (just not signed in) reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 05:46 am
It's an interesting story, but I am not sure that it needs to be continued.
Actually, it all depends on how you want the story to progress; is this a story of shields building and then coming back down, or is this just a story of a shield disguising what was once beautiful?
It all depends on what you want out of the story.
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 05:32 am
Well Yea! You have to write more. You cant end it like this and she cant end up with Seamus come on give us your loyal readers some closure!!! Besides it is a bloody good start to a story Now will you write more?
Name: kitten_1234 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 23, 2007 01:19 am
I love your stories! I really enjoyed this but I hope you do carry it on as I am a definite fan of happy endings and Ginny and Seamus just doesn't do it for me ;) I like your characterisation of Ginny, it's very real and not artificial, you also haven't made Draco into anything other than a Malfoy, great work!
Name: Lili Montegue reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2007 10:07 pm
I really enjoyed this. I would love to see more, but I am COMPLETELY empathetic to time restraints....
This was well done. I wonder what it really was that she needed to heal by seeing Draco again?
Name: svadilfari reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2007 07:45 pm
Dear Merlin, she CAN'T end up with Seamus, especially NOT after that outburst. Come on! No, I object. Can't you at least, for my own pitiful need of closure, so a shorty? Just an ickle one? Lol otherwise great job.
Name: Dracosgrl10 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2007 04:04 pm
i really enjoyed this story and would read it if you did continue it... nicely done!
Name: SMichaelM reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2007 03:33 pm
Please continue! I want Seamus to go die and Draco to sweep Ginny off her feet!
Name: gurl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2007 03:24 pm
predictable but well written. almost made me cry.