on Sep 10, 2008 04:42 am
This was so sad, and yet it was all portrayed with such poignant simplicity.
Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!
on Jun 17, 2007 10:50 am
Ouch! I really liked it, and love the possibility that it might have happened in canon. (I insist on believing in canon DG!) I like how well you worked it in.
I was also pleasantly surprised by Draco's "disappointment" in Ginny. Somehow, that seemed more in character than many other fics' Dracos getting all homicidal in his jealousy. Well done!
Flaming_Temper-Tantrums reviewed ...
on Jun 13, 2007 08:23 am
wow. it really fits into the stroy Rowling created, and it presents a light on Draco, even though he is dark. really interesting perspective, thanks for sharing.
on Jun 13, 2007 06:32 am
Oh, I have mixed feelings about this. I don't think it's bad, I just had different emotions running through me as I read it. But the "Boy-Who-Would-Not-Die" was funny.
on Jun 11, 2007 06:35 pm
I loved it. I personally didn't think it was very dark. I thought it was more brutally honest and realistically canon, which is always interesting. Great short read!
on Jun 11, 2007 05:07 pm
Wow... that was amazing and powerful. I love the idea of this fic, how he saw her for who she was and stuff. Lofferly. XD
on Jun 05, 2007 02:06 am
Oh, that is so good. It almost makes me feel bad for Draco. It was very well written. Definitely one of my favorites!!!
Name: To love a harpy
on May 16, 2007 12:08 pm
That was a VERY good story. I like the whole "he knew" thing being repeated, and the "she never knew" at the end. This was very well written (short and sweet!). If anyone tries telling you to write more for this, don't listen, the one-shot works perfectly. I'm usually a perfect closure freak but this WORKS. I love it.
pens82 reviewed ...
on May 16, 2007 05:09 am
on May 15, 2007 03:24 pm
I loved it. How heartbreaking to be there right along with Draco... Great Great job! ;)
Name: nun outfits are cool
on May 15, 2007 10:33 am
very good :) fabulous continuity, and excellent Draco-in-jealous-denial, amazing ending, even if it wasn't quite happy...
on May 15, 2007 09:46 am
I enjoyed this. I just read another fiction with teen angst, but this was more mature. I cannot quite explain why or how this was better in my mind, but I enjoyed it.
on May 15, 2007 09:42 am
hmmm... short and sweet. i like it! =) the tone is appropriate for Draco I think, I'd imagine him to think something like this, not exactly the things that he thinks but more the way they're vocalized, if that makes any sense. thank you for the pleasant and interesting read =)
sarina reviewed ...
on May 15, 2007 06:13 am
i like it. i was in need of a darker fic and a short one as that, and that was def verrry good^^
on May 14, 2007 11:48 pm
Very nice. Dark... but not to dark.
Draco now realizes he can not have his heart's desire. Poor Slytherin!
on May 14, 2007 05:33 pm
I like that... always wondering if he is good enough... but never catching her to take a chance. not too dark, atleast she didn't die as soon as he pronounced his love or something... thanks for the read