Name: lilyevens reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 01 on Jul 26, 2007 06:45 am
I hope there's an update soon!
I really love this story!!

Author's Response: Working on it as we speak :)
Name: Embellished reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jul 05, 2007 03:36 am
I absolutely love the interactions between Ginny and Ron--they are exactly what I would expect from the two of them. And of course, the snogging made me sigh happily. I'm worried about what is going to happen to Draco, but at least Remus has given me hope along with Ginny!

Author's Response: *smiles* Draco is going to have a rough time of things....
Name: SabrinaR reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 30, 2007 07:18 pm
oh man... way too ominous and horrible for my liking yet I cannot seem to tear myself away from this story... I will be back when later chapters come in. That was an excellent chapter. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!rn
Name: Hajra reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 29, 2007 02:18 am
That was intriguing I'm dying to know what Remus meant! I loved the build up to the kiss, the release of that tension between them! Also I love the idea of Ron having a secret sweetheart - so cute!

Author's Response: All will be revealed in good time :)
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 28, 2007 12:54 pm
ach, their love is so beautiful... I love how realistically you've shown all the character's feelings. Its's impressive? Very lovely, but I really can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Hopeless reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 26, 2007 05:14 am
oooo, that was a good one!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 05:46 pm
Remus rocks! Fantastic story! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Remus knows there is more than meets the eye and he will reveal all eventually...
Name: MK Richie reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 04:05 pm
Cute! I'm hoping Draco doesn't get Azkaban and only gets sentenced to house arrest with Ginny ; ) I was soo glad to see you updated, and the kiss was well worth the wait! Please update as soon as possible, I'm looking forward to it!!

Author's Response: Thanks. That kiss was a long time in coming for those two and it was too little too late...
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 11:50 am
Rain- I always love your work, and this one is no different. You always make the characters believable and true to character. Your imagery is always superb and you draw your readers into your story. I wait with anticipation for the next chapter. I have one criticism for you, this chapter needed some editing. There were a few places that had inocrrect or missing words, as if you were on a roll and thinking faster then you were typing. Overall, a fabulous story. --Kristine--

Author's Response: Thank you. I took care of the problems. Apparently my beta was excited when she read it too :)
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 09:15 am
Oh please keep this one going. Your character treatments are so sharp.

Author's Response: Thank you. I plan on finishing this.
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 24, 2007 06:00 pm
I loved the part in the middle where Gin was trying to separate her feelings for Draco (somewhere between love and hate) because I think that's so accurate most of the time. I'm so glad to see this out! And I'm looking forward to more from you.

Author's Response: She's not sure what she feels for him or even if she truly does. *pats* She'll figure stuff out eventually.
Name: Nokomis reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 24, 2007 05:22 pm
*beams* Oh, this story fills me with JOY.

ESPECIALLY when Draco and Ginny finally act on some of that tension they've been nurturing between them. They were so sweetly domestic over breakfast, and I love that Draco finally made a move. Granted, it was a bit belated for anything fun to happen before he was taken away, but, still!

So what all *does* Remus know? He was very cryptic and knowing in this chapter.

Also, Harry is a jerkface.

And who is Ron's secret sweetie? *wants to know* He and Gin were very sweetly sibling-y in this chapter. He's being very civil about the whole situation, by Ron-standards.

And poor, poor Gin! The story of her attack was sad, and her frustration about Molly keeping her locked way is palpable. Hopefully she'll manage to break away from her cottage.

*happy sigh* I am so happy you're writing this. It's a fantastic story, and I eagerly await the next update. Until then, I will happily be squeeing over the Draco/Ginny smooching you so wonderfully provided in this chapter. Fantastic job!!

Author's Response: *snuggles* I'm so glad that I could make you happy with this chapter. Do you know how hard it is not to share the details of the story with you? It'd damn hard, but your reactions are so worth it!
Name: angelhorn26 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 24, 2007 05:18 pm
Excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm hard at work on the next installment!
Name: suprstr27 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 09, 2007 12:40 pm
this is such a great story. i've loved other stories you've written, but your username didn't register, so i was just expecting your average story, but it's REALLY good. please update soon =)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! Thank you!
Name: hawaiian techno reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 09, 2007 05:46 am
Ok, I love it!, I'm using my brothers account, but I've reviewed this story before and I love it! please update!

Author's Response: Thanks! Next update coming soon!
Name: Xazou reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 09, 2007 12:55 am
Oh my god, poor ginny and poor draco. I'm feeling so sorry for them both. Please let the order make a good decision for the sake of them both. I love the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. They are both in a bad place right now...
Name: SRivera reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 08, 2007 09:27 pm
I can't help but think this is going to end up badly. I've read most of your stories and they were all wonderfully done. I was trying so hard to restrain my laughter at your description of constipated-looking Harry as it is midnight and the whole house is asleep. This is the only time i can read stories in peace and it's worth staying up for. So thanks for this wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I will say that things will not be easy and leave it at that.
Name: gurl reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 08, 2007 04:02 am
I never starts WIP but I couldn't resist your writing. Very well written. I loved the characterization and the flow of the story. Not too fast, not too slow.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 08, 2007 03:46 am
Guh. The amount of which I hate Harry is eclipsed only by how much I love Draco. How awfully evil that he has to go to Azkaban right when she's fallen for him. It has me thinking of all the ways she can keep him for herself...

I'm loving it! Thanks.

Author's Response: Harry is a total prat isn't he? *smiles*
Name: VioletJersey reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 01 on Jun 07, 2007 10:06 pm
You never fail to surprise me with your stories -- and this one is truly a delight to read. I love that it's not your average D/G romance -- sweet yet not overtly mushy.

Also, I love that even the house plays a big part in the story -- a sort of metaphor of what the world should be like if we all just take the time out and realize that life is alot simpler if we all just get along! I can't wait for the next chapter! *smiles*

PS: Are you still going to do the Thief of Hearts prequel?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to do something different and this is what I came up with.rnrnAs for a sequel/prequel to Thief of Hearts, maybe. I have some ideas.
Name: adorame06 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 05:25 pm
wow this is interesting, I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Judibry reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 01:36 pm
must. have. more.

Excellent beginning. Everything is very well written. Ginny's feeling & emotions, and their transition is realistic.
Thank you for an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to an update.

Author's Response: More is on the way I promise! Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!
Name: Masqerade reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 07:42 am
aawwww! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Hajra reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 06:57 am
This is brilliant! I love the way you built up the relationship between Draco and Ginny, and the way the anticipation was building up at the end...whoa! I found myself leaning in towards the screen, just as Ginny was shifting closer towards Draco...Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you! *happy grin*
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 06:54 am
Awww... how very sweet. I especially enjoyed the "I'll hex your naughty bits" and imagining Harry's constipated look. hehe And mmm... Draco would probably look adorable in huge lumberjack attire, eh? :oD hehe ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks! Just remember Ginny is an equal opportunity hexer :)
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