Well I made a mistake in my correction it's j'en mourrerai (futur simple) and I highly doubt that it's a dialect thing because ail in frech in the equivalent of aye in english, and I teach french, I guess your friend sent you a typo or something and for the rest of the correction well they are just better the one that you have are right but not good. I hope that last sentence does not offend you or your frech friend.

Author's Response: No offense taken :) I did one year of French and think myself still clever that I remember how to count to ten, but that's about it ;) As it could have been a typo, I'll make your suggested changes, because there was no way I could have checked that and took her at her word. Thank you so much :)

j'en mourerail haha sorry it's verry funny
It's j'en mourrais, I adored that mistake it made my day and cheesecake is gâteau au fromage avec une coulée de liqueur de chocolat
and it's sont de la vraie couleur de l'amour.
But your french is pretty damm good
you probably have already been corrected if it's the case sorry.

Author's Response: Thanks. Actually, the French came from a reader who's actually French, born and bred (she corrected my original attempt, which was appalling). Perhaps it's a dialect thing?

A warm and fuzzy Lucius oh my!!! Drake is absolutely precious. Love the story and the 'Wizard Business' was priceless!!

Author's Response: Thank you :) There are only two things that can soften up an old Death Eater: Drake and Angel ;)

Once again the whole Draco attempt to kill Ron just confuses me. I mean Mrs. Weasley wasn't even upset with Draco after he tried to kill her son!

Author's Response: Molly knows that sometimes it's better to let others handle the situation ;)

Wonderful story. This will be definitely one of my favs!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

wow! took me quite long to finsh the story but to tell you the truth i also didn't want to let go. good to know that there is a sequel waiting for me...
yours, veronika

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it :)

am i allowed to give them both a good night kiss? *g*

Author's Response: Of course, just don't let Ginny catch you in there with Draco ;)

I liked it very much, although it was very long. Great work

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Why did you have to end the chapter like that?!!?!!?

Author's Response: There's nothing wrong with a good cliffy every now and than ;)

hej!
read the honeymoon scene a few days ago and was very happy to find out, that there is a "background story". loved the first chapter and so i have to stop writing now so i can get on reading lol
yours, nika

Author's Response: Thank you :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic. There's also a sequel called "A Not So Simple Kind of Life", which comes after the honeymoon fic *g*

Okay: Two things I've noticed thus far in reading: 1) The comma placements in the sentences really need to be worked with and they are truely taking away some of the impact of the story for me; and 2) Drake and Angel, while keeping his words simple, has EXCELLENT grammer and all of the YOUNG children seem to be able to speak like adults in their sentences. This is all that I've found that has really bothered me. Other than those, I find the story-line to be brilliant!!! You really have a way of bringing to life the emotions of the characters.

Author's Response: Thank you. My beta actually has a Masters Degree in English, so there shouldn't be any missing punctuation, but if there are I do apologize (we're only human). It is possible for five-year-olds not to speak like babies (which annoys me). I taught all three of my children at an early age to speak correctly, and Drake and Angel are somewhat modelled on them :)

The host (in this case Draco) is always served the wine after everyone else. the other details are correct (such as the host first tasting the wine and approving it). Small details like this will just enhance your already excellent story.

Author's Response: Thanks!