Name: chineserose reviewed
Help on Jun 09, 2009 06:34 pm
Aww that was simply *beautiful*!! I loved loved loved it! Wonderful :)
i'm going to go read the sequel now (:
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: lilactree reviewed
Trouble for Ron on Jun 08, 2009 03:22 pm
Pansy is such an interesting character! It's great that she's not portrayed as the usual one dimensional pug-faced-Parkinson but someone who has depth and a strong personality. Nicely done!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm rather partial to Pansy, so writing her with some personality is a real pleasure.
Name: chineserose reviewed
First Date on Jun 05, 2009 08:16 pm
ehehehee LOVEEEEE!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: chineserose reviewed
Diagon Alley on Jun 04, 2009 03:15 am
beautiful start :) This has to be my all time favourite dg story :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: mj123 reviewed
Help on May 14, 2009 09:18 am
absolutely brilliant best story i have read so far on here what i want to know is hat happened to the second one
Author's Response: Thank you :) The sequels are called 'A Moment in Paradise', which covers their honeymoon, and 'A Not So Simple Kind of Life'.
Name: Valentines Riddle reviewed
Diagon Alley on Apr 12, 2009 06:26 am
Hi,
Just to get this out of the way - I think you're a great writer, and your grasp of family situations and relationships are uncannily accurate!
However, as enjoyable as your story was to read (at least for the first half), I felt you repeated yourself and dragged the story out in some sections. Not all, mind, but things like the repeated discoveries while on the verge of kissing etc were a tad irksome after a while. Overall, although I think your writing is good, pruning the story down so it didn't drag out so much at the end would have improved it.
I assume this is supposed to be OOC, so I won't take you to task about Draco/Lucius's fluffiness etc, but the fact Ginny was a stay-at-home mother, and a clone of Mrs Weasley, annoyed me in places too: I see her as a little more independent. Also, although Drake and Angel were accurate representations of small children, they were just as aggravating if not more so to the reader than to Draco and Ginny at times!
Those were just some minor criticisms. There were many good points, and this is definitely one of the only Harry/Hermione fics I could read without vomiting, and I like that you didn't make Pansy desperate or a whore! Overall, congratulations on a generally well-written story.
sincerely,
Riddle.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: hotpinknails reviewed
Charms and Tempers on Apr 02, 2009 10:10 am
I really don't like the fact that they're favouring Angel over Drake. I mean, he gets disciplined more than she does and she gets all of the dresses and jewellery etc. that she wants. I wouldn't really caare about it if Drake got treated the same way, but he doesn't :/
Author's Response: Narcissa makes sure Drake gets his fair share.
Name: serinah reviewed
An Old Friend on Mar 30, 2009 10:38 pm
is there no one to tell draco he has two kids? :)
Author's Response: It hasn't occurred to anyone that he doesn't realize ;)
Name: serinah reviewed
Telling Draco on Mar 30, 2009 10:20 pm
oh god, this was painful to read. good writing.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: Tessanne Malfoy reviewed
Help on Mar 13, 2009 12:52 pm
So Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: Tessanne Malfoy reviewed
A Real Family on Feb 16, 2009 01:57 pm
Awwww!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: Tessanne Malfoy reviewed
Special Hugs on Feb 14, 2009 11:38 am
Oh God!!!! THAT IS JUST TOO FUNNY
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: Tessanne Malfoy reviewed
Telling Draco on Feb 13, 2009 05:10 pm
Awwwww! I teared up!! so sad that they separated and she never told him!!!!
Author's Response: It wasn't an easy decision for her :)
Name: gracie reviewed
I Love You... on Feb 10, 2009 11:02 am
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww i love Angelique she sooooooooooooo cute/sweet!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: Malfoys girl reviewed
Help on Jan 31, 2009 02:41 pm
this storyy is just sooooo awsome!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: kimpossible reviewed
Good Morning on Jan 12, 2009 05:09 pm
haha ferret face
Name: kimpossible reviewed
Facing Mr Weasley on Jan 12, 2009 04:57 pm
well....
too fluffy
Name: kimpossible reviewed
Telling Draco on Jan 12, 2009 04:16 pm
meh
Name: chineserose reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Sep 29, 2008 07:59 pm
I dont know whether i've ever reviewed this, but i love your writing :) keep it up :)
btw, there's a slight error in the last sentence of this chapter. you wrote 'as well breed gentlemen', as oppose to 'well bred gentlemen' i believe.
Author's Response: Thank you :)rnrnOops! Thanks for pointing it out; it's all fixed now *g*
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Secret Wizards Business on Aug 17, 2008 05:56 pm
As I reread this story, I wonder how the heck I made it through the first time around with having to wait for chapters!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it the second time around :)
Name: BloodyHands reviewed
Secret Wizards Business on Jul 22, 2008 03:50 pm
MY birthday is March 25th!
YAY!
Author's Response: Same day as the twins! *g*
Name: caishilingg reviewed
An Old Friend on Jul 15, 2008 10:44 pm
I was supposed to stop two chapters ago (it's 1:43 in the morning) but your story was so interesting I had to keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest :)
Name: IAmFoeverLadyMalfoy reviewed
First Date on Jul 15, 2008 08:15 pm
Love the story, but one thing that I had to point out-
“Monsieur Malfoy, êtes-vous prêt à commander?”
“Mr. Malfoy, you are ready to command?”
There were a few other errors I picked up on as well, but that was the funniest. Keep writing! (Not this story. This story is finished, but ya'know... just in general.)
Author's Response: Thank you! Believe it or not, those translations were actually done by an actual French person (as in native speaking), so I don't know what went wrong. I'm still writing! The sequel is coming along slowly, but surely :)
Name: alannadonoso reviewed
Help on Jun 28, 2008 06:45 pm
Well, I loved this story so much that I had to read it in is entirety before writing my review. As most would agree the Ginny Draco ship is not one that is easy to find a lot of material on. I have loved reading this story. It was filled with such heart felt sentiment and so well written that I often could not stop reading even while at work. Thank you for your contribution to the wonderful world of Draco and Ginny Fan Fiction. You are a talented writer. I look forward to reading the sequel. Alanna
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I do my best and comments like yours make it all worthwhile :)
Name: tuftybunny reviewed
I Love You... on Jun 22, 2008 08:20 am
AWWWWWW lucius is a wittle softy LMAO
Author's Response: He is when is comes to a certain little witch ;)