Name: Hajra reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jul 05, 2007 11:56 am
There's no need for a cruciatus! This was lovely to read! I love the idea of the conversation they shared being a turning point in their relationship. x
Author's Response: I always thought that if they took the time to know each other, really know each other, they´d see what's obvious to us: D/G is the OTP! Thanks for reviewing.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jul 05, 2007 03:15 am
I really enjoyed this--you did a really nice job keeping Draco and Ginny in character, and I could almost see the whole scene playing out in front of me. And you deserve extra credit if English isn't your first language! Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It was really hard, let me tell you. But if you got to picture the whole scene, I'm above and beyond happy. *SQUEE* for extra credit!
Name: sweet gurl reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jun 23, 2007 03:20 pm
Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! You're the first reviewer I don't know, so I'm really grateful. :)
Name: anismenta reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jun 22, 2007 06:26 am
It’s good , really good. Ginny and Draco are in characters (may I say in fandom’s character?) he is smooth, smart and in self control. She is funny, sensitive and light. The rhythm is fluid and you have a nice choose of word. I like specially this line “She raised her eyes to meet his. There was something soothing about them, about the way he was looking at her. She convinced herself that was the way Malfoys apologized. “ It’s nice.
Something tell me that this will not be your first and last fic……It’s a sequel in the horizon?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Now I feel kind of odd because I'm sure that sentence wouldn´t be half as good if Wolfstar hadn´t beta-ed me! If there´s a sequel, it's not coming soon. It´s really difficult this English writing. But I'm so glad you liked it. I promise something in Spanish though!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jun 21, 2007 01:35 pm
Awww! That was sweet, Feli! And it wasnt horrible at all! You deserve a pat on the back!
I liked their banter. You didnt make Draco too nice, but made him to be bearable. I like Ginny, too. She was tempermental in the right spots (like a true Weasley).
Wonderful, hun!
Author's Response: You're too kind! I like when they get on each other nerves too. Thanks for appreciating my characterizations and for stoping by. ;)
Name: WolfStar reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jun 21, 2007 05:28 am
*pokes* You shouldn't be so self-conscious. It's NOT bad! Elsewise... I wouldn't have beta'd. :) It's cool!
Author's Response: Wolfie, you´re the ULTIMATE BETA READER! I told you it would be difficult, and still you took the job. Thank you so much for all the work you put into this. *hug*
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jun 21, 2007 05:19 am
Oh, Felicitas, that was darling! It was original, too; I can't ever remember reading a fic where they were standing watch, before. Lovely and sweet... perfect!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: So, at least I scored on originality. YAY! Thanks, Perse. And you know me; I´m all for fluff. ;)
Name: Airmid reviewed
Chapter 1 and only on Jun 21, 2007 04:10 am
Feli- I really loved it. Great job and I hope this isn't the last we see from you in English. I would love to see more moments after this...
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved it! But really, it is far too difficult to keep writing in English. I had like gizillions errors in one paragraph. Still there's another bunny hiding in my chemistry notes, so maybe some day...