I can't tell you how excited I was when I saw that you'd updated this. I feel like such a geek XD
I enjoyed every second of this story. I love it!
Over?! Ah, well, nice while it lasted. Good break from all of the angsty fics I have been reading lately.
Over...over? But I wanted it to be long and drawn out? It was a good idea for a plot, original. This chapter was fantastic. I would like a sequel? Come on, where she has to tell the family, they continue to work together, she gets pregnant and then he worries about her...pretty please? It's just there seems to be a shortage of good fics and good writers nowadays, and you are definetely a great writer. I hope you write more very soon. Thanks for a great story.
Awwwwww! Im so glad they got together! But, Im sad its over! This was a wonderful story to read, and Im glad you decided to write it.
Wonderful!
OMG, I cannot believe you left that chapter hanging there like that....whatever shall I do while waiting for you to post??? Great job!
Another lovely chapter, your technique and story telling skills are superb. Your plot flows nicely. Great chemistry between the characters. I love it.
What fun!!!! Nice job, I love the budding relationship aspect and the fact they are both fighting against it. The dialogue is superb.
this is a very cute and fun story, and I am really enjoying it. Great job.
I love this! Please, please, please update soon!
Just when i thought they were gonna play nicely!!! Great story :) i love it xxxxx
absolutely brilliant! and with the perfect dose of humour as well; i can't wait for the next chapters! =D
Are you sure Draco didn't make a tiny huge mistake? Come on!
Loving the fic, the parallels between the 'crappy romance fics' & the story are cool. Is it gonna end with them happily ever after?
Author's Response: Steve Holt is a bastard. We don't even know who his real father is. What else don't we know about Steve Holt?
AHHHHHHHHHHHH.
I am obsessed with this story. I absolutely LOVE the characterization. This story is the kind of thing that I search high and low for, and I can't ever seem to find it! ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC. I'm very, very impressed.
I really, really love the way they banter (okay, so it was in the beginning, oh well), and I really like the way they curse, too. Really splendid job.
Also, I like the development of their relationship. You give the reader what he/she wants without dragging it out/granting the reader's wish IMMEDIATELY.
Perfect perfect perfect. Probably one of my favorites, ever.
well he did make a mistake, just not the one he mentioned. haha. update soon!
Hee hee! Draco really did make a huge mistake, didn't he? And not the one he had in mind. Of course, Ginny wasn't the epitome of maturity and intelligence either. This was a very fun chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next one!
Oh my.. I hope they do get together soon. Their chemistry is so intense. ;) & I want to see Draco grovel. :P Hahah anyway, I love this story.. please update again soon!! :D
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. xx
They kissed!!!! But then she ran.
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WONDERFUL!!
OMG! I can't believe you ended it there, you need to continue, ASAP, hehe!!! This was really good, I was just going to read a chapter and then i ended up reading the whole thing! Great job!
oh that's horrible... ending the chapter there. I hope the next one comes soon... I really want to know what Draco's mistake was.
Draco's moment of realization at the end was entertaining. I like how they are progressing, it seems pretty natural.
I always loved Ginny's impressions in the books... and the one she does of the house-elf was hilarious!
That's right. You'll see. Impressionism, pointillism, minimalism - all rubbish. But splotches! Ah, they are the way of future," Draco went on. "Of course, no one will recognise this until after I've died, discovered in a gutter, penniless and reeking of alcohol. General rule of thumb for the tortured artist, you know.
hahaha.... there do seem to be a lot of splotches around these days, sadly. Anyway, I really like how you're keeping them bickering, but they both seem to be softening towards each other. I like how it's gradually and not just BANG they like each other.
Their bickering is definitely the highlight of this story. You write it so well!