Name: Enigmatic Eel reviewed 7. Restitution on Apr 13, 2008 12:36 pm
I can't tell you how excited I was when I saw that you'd updated this. I feel like such a geek XD
Name: laylaelaine reviewed 7. Restitution on Apr 13, 2008 11:33 am
I enjoyed every second of this story. I love it!
Name: linz7886 reviewed 7. Restitution on Apr 13, 2008 10:16 am
Over?! Ah, well, nice while it lasted. Good break from all of the angsty fics I have been reading lately.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 7. Restitution on Apr 13, 2008 09:57 am
Over...over? But I wanted it to be long and drawn out? It was a good idea for a plot, original. This chapter was fantastic. I would like a sequel? Come on, where she has to tell the family, they continue to work together, she gets pregnant and then he worries about her...pretty please? It's just there seems to be a shortage of good fics and good writers nowadays, and you are definetely a great writer. I hope you write more very soon. Thanks for a great story.
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed 7. Restitution on Apr 13, 2008 09:46 am
Awwwwww! Im so glad they got together! But, Im sad its over! This was a wonderful story to read, and Im glad you decided to write it.

Wonderful!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 13, 2008 08:13 am
OMG, I cannot believe you left that chapter hanging there like that....whatever shall I do while waiting for you to post??? Great job!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 5. Discovery on Apr 13, 2008 08:06 am
Another lovely chapter, your technique and story telling skills are superb. Your plot flows nicely. Great chemistry between the characters. I love it.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 4. Deep Thoughts on Apr 13, 2008 07:58 am
What fun!!!! Nice job, I love the budding relationship aspect and the fact they are both fighting against it. The dialogue is superb.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 3. Mr. Peacock in the National Gallery with the Brush on Apr 13, 2008 07:51 am
this is a very cute and fun story, and I am really enjoying it. Great job.
Name: dumbledorefan_07 reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 08, 2008 06:59 am
I love this! Please, please, please update soon!
Name: Shwadi reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 08, 2008 01:43 am
Just when i thought they were gonna play nicely!!! Great story :) i love it xxxxx
Name: lookwhatidid reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 07, 2008 06:09 pm

absolutely brilliant! and with the perfect dose of humour as well; i can't wait for the next chapters! =D

Name: Deian reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 11:59 pm
Are you sure Draco didn't make a tiny huge mistake? Come on!
Loving the fic, the parallels between the 'crappy romance fics' & the story are cool. Is it gonna end with them happily ever after?

Author's Response: Steve Holt is a bastard. We don't even know who his real father is. What else don't we know about Steve Holt?
Name: lilydarliing reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 07:52 pm
AHHHHHHHHHHHH.

I am obsessed with this story. I absolutely LOVE the characterization. This story is the kind of thing that I search high and low for, and I can't ever seem to find it! ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC. I'm very, very impressed.

I really, really love the way they banter (okay, so it was in the beginning, oh well), and I really like the way they curse, too. Really splendid job.

Also, I like the development of their relationship. You give the reader what he/she wants without dragging it out/granting the reader's wish IMMEDIATELY.

Perfect perfect perfect. Probably one of my favorites, ever.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 02:26 pm
well he did make a mistake, just not the one he mentioned. haha. update soon!
Name: Embellished reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 12:26 pm
Hee hee! Draco really did make a huge mistake, didn't he? And not the one he had in mind. Of course, Ginny wasn't the epitome of maturity and intelligence either. This was a very fun chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next one!
Name: princessswan reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 11:25 am
Oh my.. I hope they do get together soon. Their chemistry is so intense. ;) & I want to see Draco grovel. :P Hahah anyway, I love this story.. please update again soon!! :D
Name: Alexandria Malfoy reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 10:19 am
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. xx
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 09:06 am
They kissed!!!! But then she ran.
:(

WONDERFUL!!
Name: shans12342002 reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 05:54 am
OMG! I can't believe you ended it there, you need to continue, ASAP, hehe!!! This was really good, I was just going to read a chapter and then i ended up reading the whole thing! Great job!
Name: Kalira reviewed 6. Paradise Lost on Apr 06, 2008 05:14 am
oh that's horrible... ending the chapter there. I hope the next one comes soon... I really want to know what Draco's mistake was.
Name: Kalira reviewed 5. Discovery on Apr 06, 2008 05:05 am
Draco's moment of realization at the end was entertaining. I like how they are progressing, it seems pretty natural.
Name: Kalira reviewed 4. Deep Thoughts on Apr 06, 2008 04:57 am
I always loved Ginny's impressions in the books... and the one she does of the house-elf was hilarious!
Name: Kalira reviewed 3. Mr. Peacock in the National Gallery with the Brush on Apr 06, 2008 04:49 am
That's right. You'll see. Impressionism, pointillism, minimalism - all rubbish. But splotches! Ah, they are the way of future," Draco went on. "Of course, no one will recognise this until after I've died, discovered in a gutter, penniless and reeking of alcohol. General rule of thumb for the tortured artist, you know.

hahaha.... there do seem to be a lot of splotches around these days, sadly. Anyway, I really like how you're keeping them bickering, but they both seem to be softening towards each other. I like how it's gradually and not just BANG they like each other.
Name: Kalira reviewed 2. At the Rory Age B Ampersand on Apr 06, 2008 04:37 am
Their bickering is definitely the highlight of this story. You write it so well!
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