Reviews For Occam's Razor
Name: distel reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 03, 2008 06:43 am
so. haven't even begun reading the first chapter and already feel the need to review simply because ... I read you notes (Story and chapter notes) and agree so WHOLEHEARTEDLY that I fell in love with you on, well, first read *laughs* Now let's just see if the story makes me love you even more ;)
Name: sweetpop reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 02, 2008 10:34 pm
ohh this is great! Thanks for the sneak preview! =) xx
Name: imsoka reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 02, 2008 06:06 pm
This is too cute!

I love it. Seriously, *LOVE*
Anxiously awaiting updates. ^_^
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 02, 2008 01:01 pm
WONDERFUL!
:)
Name: tinamarie reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 02, 2008 12:27 pm
I am sad that there is no next chapter to go to...but it is something I am very much looking forward to.
Name: tinamarie reviewed Chapter 3 on Jan 02, 2008 12:16 pm
Loving it!
Name: tinamarie reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 02, 2008 11:53 am
I love it, like really love it. You've managed to write a very very realistic representation of what happens to couples all the time. I can't wait to read more.
Name: tinamarie reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 02, 2008 09:15 am
I really like the approach you took, I have a special place in my D/G loving heart for stories in which our beloved characters both face realistic emotional situations which set the wheels in motion. Most readers can sympathize if not empathize with Ginny and her lack of a real relationship with Harry. People change over time, even in the wizarding world. I am looking forward to reading the next couple chapters.
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 02, 2008 01:15 am
very good :)
can't wait for more!
Name: nikisasilverrain reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 08:34 pm
Alright, I'm all caught up. And now I must beg the question of: Why haven't I read this before? Honestly.

Well written, I love that Harry is not the antagonist, without him messing up the Ron/Hermione duo. Just, well done!
Name: Embellished reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 04:47 pm
Hooray! I had been wondering if you were going to update this, and I'm thrilled that you actually did. My favorite part was the bit with Draco and the kids--he played them perfectly! And the interactions with Ginny were fun too--especially Draco stealing biscuits. I'm very much looking forward to reading more!
Name: Baby Boomer reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 01, 2008 12:54 pm
You are right; sometimes when the children leave home the parents find themselves strangers under the same roof. I think Harry and Ginny married very young, possibly after she finished her seventh year at Hogwarts. I am the closet author of many H/G fanfics (all unpublished because I keep rewriting them). "My" Harry, as a young adult, has trouble dealing with his past; abused children often do. He expects that marriage to Ginny will automatically fill the hole in his heart caused by the deaths of his parents, Sirius, and Dumbledore. But that is impossible. IMO, "your" Harry has buried his emotions so deeply over the years that he has turned into a different person. He is unable to express his feelings to Ginny, and she is no longer interested in chasing his demons away. That scene where he refused to eat dinner because it was a few minutes late was disturbing, very controlling of Harry, almost abusive. I love your story, however, I NEVER review stories I don't like. I can relate to Ginny's missing the children and feeling like she has no life without them. For years, I put my own life on hold to raise my daughter as a single parent, and now that she's an adult I have no idea what I want to do. Like Ginny, I miss the frantic pace of caring for children and at the same time well remember how exhausted I was while doing it. Once I fell asleep in the car, late one night, while waiting for my daughter to finish a drama club rehearsal. Sorry to natter on; I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Name: CCC reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 12:31 pm
I like that Harry gets irked at the sight of Malfoy. I love the idea of Narcissa playing Risk. Draco bargaining for cookies was highly entertaining as well. Good job.
Name: Baby Boomer reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 10:30 am
Can't wait for the next chapter! Good story, though I shed a few tears at the apparent end of the Harry-Ginny romance. But since this is a D/G website, what else could I expect?
Name: toothpick reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 10:18 am
Haha! Very nice. Ginny's bits with the children, the children with Draco, and Draco's constant biscuit eating...very upbeat chapter :)
Name: fairydust123 reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 09:10 am
Oh! I loved this chapter! I honestly can't wait for more!
Name: crookshanksg reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 08:32 am
I'm loving this story!!! You have an EXCELLENT knack for comedy. There was a line in the previous chapter about a pig wanted to mate with Ginny because of her snort that was freakn hilarious!! Love the scene with James and Draco too, talking about Scorpius! Brillant!! If you ever publish your own book, let me know, I'll buy it!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 08:15 am
haha. great job. love the story. update soon.
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 04:39 am
Well, I suppose the cat is out of the bag now eh? Harry is well aware of the budding friendship between his soon to be ex-wife and the man he still can't stand, and now the kids have been introduced to him properly. It will help ease the transition come summer.

Although I do have a feeling Harry is going to kick up a fuss because he refuses to let go of petty childhood rivalries.

I can't wait to see Scorpius' reaction to his father's causal friendship/ground laying for future relationship with the mother of his school enemies...

I was so glad to see this chapter! I want more! Soon! Please!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 03:58 am
I just love this story. I don't usually, but I adore how it's told in first person; Ginny's point of view is perfect! Go, MBA!

Who would've thought that Narcissa Malfoy and my husband would have anything in common? Hmph. The teaser was fantastic, from Ginny's spiked tea (I've thought about doing that same thing often) to the mental picture I got of Narcissa, standing over the game board, lit from below, cackling evilly at taking over the world.

Looking forward to your next, and Happy New Year!
Name: hyperion reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 12:44 am
I've been waiting forever for your update. I absolutely love this story!

It's very well written with wit and humor. One wouldn't even think that Ginny's at the brink of divorce.

This is a lovely little gem of a story. Keep it up. Love the humour. :-D
Name: Georgia reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 01, 2008 12:16 am
All those epilogue compliant stories start to grow on me. This one is just great. I especially enjoy reading all the dialogues - they are so well written! I also like how you portray Harry because I really like him, I just think that D/G works way much better :)
Name: dragonsangel68 reviewed Chapter 4 on Dec 31, 2007 08:22 pm
This is just brilliant! I've spent the afternoon simply enjoying it and I'm looking forward to more *g* Whatever are they doing drinking together at that ungodly hour of the morning?
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed Chapter 4 on Dec 31, 2007 07:52 pm
Alright, it's official: I love you. And I'm in serious danger of not sleeping at all tonight because I'm going to read everything you have on the archive.
Name: shaded reviewed Chapter 4 on Dec 31, 2007 06:56 pm
Lol! Your note about the politically correct programme had me in fits of laughter. Typical. (I just had to check if my copy also happened to be PC, but found that it did not.)

A wonderful chapter, as usual. The interaction between Harry and Ginny is very realistic, with them arguing over how to bring up their children, but yet being rather compromising in other instances, like when Draco is coming over. Heh, I didn't think that Draco would get to meet the children this early on, but it was a great meeting, for sure. I doubt that James will forget it for a while to come. :)

The banter between Draco and Ginny is lots of fun to read. I look forward to more of it in the future. I hope that there'll be an update soon. :) The teaser at the end was intriguing; I wonder just how long it'll be until Draco and Ginny are in that situation. Hmm.
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