Name: shortlilangel73 reviewed
Spark on Aug 10, 2007 04:03 pm
great story so far!
Name: agora reviewed
Startle on Aug 10, 2007 08:21 am
Write more soon! My curiousity is piqued!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Startle on Aug 07, 2007 11:40 pm
Oooooh! The suspense! The mystery! I love it all!
I just realized this, but the war is over, right? And the dark side won? Wow. Im really slow.
Mr Weasley is dead? Who else is dead? I really, really hate Jordan. Hes such a mean, evil jerk, and so is Murtagh. Well, the latters more of a lewd drunk.
I absolutely love the way youre writing this. Its full of emotion and its really powerful... Ginny still misses Draco, but Draco has a shadow. At least, His Shadow seems slightly nice. Oh! Draco helped Ginny clean up! Woot! I dont know if that counts as DG action, but I taking what I can get.
Wonderful!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Startle on Aug 07, 2007 06:29 pm
Excellent story. I love the way you're focusing more on the thoughts & actions of the characters as opposed to the dialogue. Can't wait to read more!
Name: razzle_be_dazzled reviewed
Startle on Aug 07, 2007 08:05 am
I like this, update soon!
Name: playingwithfire reviewed
Shiver on Aug 06, 2007 09:57 pm
ooh! i'm glad you posted this here too! I LOVE the angsty mood of this fic!! ^^
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed
Startle on Aug 06, 2007 12:04 pm
Yet another wordless encounter between Draco and Ginny. I love how you refer to Draco's companion as 'His Shadow' You sure do know how to build up the suspense. I can't wait for the next update.
Name: i_heart_penguins reviewed
Shiver on Aug 06, 2007 10:46 am
I really, really love this fic.
Name: DragonFlame13 reviewed
Startle on Aug 06, 2007 07:50 am
Oh I really, really enjoy your writing. Its descriptive enough that I can picture everything that's happening but not too descriptive that I get bored and skim. And I can just see it so perfectly. I eargerly await the next few chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Name: Moonyk reviewed
Startle on Aug 06, 2007 07:39 am
A thrill of excitement!! OH OH I LIKED THIS FOLLOW UP VERY MUCH, if you don't mind me saying. EEKS! Are you going to continue updating?
Author's Response: Actually, the fic is already finished - I wrote it for the D/G Fic Exchange, and it was posted awhile ago. Now that the authors have been revealed, I'm able to actually post it! So, yes, I will continue to update, the entire fic should be posted by the end of the week.
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Shiver on Aug 05, 2007 10:55 pm
I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed
Shiver on Aug 05, 2007 01:28 pm
I really liked it. The chemistry between Draco and Ginny in that one moment in the rain was incredible. I noticed it was a one shot. Is there going to be any more? It felt like there may be.
Author's Response: Nope, there are still 5 more chapters to be posted, I just wasn't paying attention when I posted it.rnrnThanks for your comments! That whole encounter in the rain has been percolating in my mind for quite some time, and the prompt for the Fic Exchange just finally gave me the excuse to write it, so I'm really glad that you liked it.
Name: Lili Montegue reviewed
Shiver on Aug 05, 2007 01:17 pm
I adore the visual imagery of Ginny standing with her eyes tightly closed and Draco sighing into her neck/ear. Love. Love it.
Love the whole wordless encounter - it gave me the shivers!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Name: moerae reviewed
Shiver on Aug 05, 2007 12:56 pm
Oh, I liked that very much. That is such a torturous place to end the chapter!! Can't wait to read more :)
Even though it was just one kiss, you made it so damn hot. They had all the elements working for them, the rain, the angst. Perfect. I rather wish things had heated up a bit more!
Author's Response: Thank you!!