Name: tinamarie reviewed
One Good Name on Jul 02, 2008 12:21 pm
I'm kind of disappointed starting out at the dinner table only because I'm one of those shippers who doesn't fancy Molly very much.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
The First on Jul 02, 2008 12:18 pm
Oh man I would have never seen that bombshell coming! You have my interest peaked, I'm moving on to the next chapter.
Name: BIQxoxBOHICA reviewed
The First on Jul 02, 2008 03:26 am
I'll have to go back and re-read the last chapter, it was around 1am where I am when I wrote this, and I had woken up around 7am yesterday morning.. So I was really tired. But from what I remember, everything was very cliché. Man goes away, leaving pregnant girlfriend whom he doesn't know is pregnant,to do evil deeds. Man comes back and spends time with child and girlfriend. Man leaves. Girlfriend and child are then captured. Man finds out and attempts to save girlfriend and child. And at somepoint someone (whether it be the man, or someone close to the man, or girlfriend) dies.. And it could possibly be the quickness that Ginny took Draco back. I mean, if my boyfriend left me and then just shows up without saying anything for four years. I know it'd take awhile before I let him back in my life.
Name: BIQxoxBOHICA reviewed
Him on Jul 01, 2008 06:56 pm
The one main thing I don't like about this fic is Rose. Well, not her as a character, it's more of how you portray her. Four-year-olds don't sleep in a crib, they have beds. And they can talk, probably in full, understandable sentences. My neice is two, and she sleeps in a bed, and talks in almost-full sentences.
And overall it's kind of boring. But that's just my opinion..
Author's Response: Hmm, I'm sorry you feel that way. About the four-year-old thing, the reason I made her four is because my cousin is four. She can talk but you can't understand her so she generally just uses one or two words.rnrnAs for the boring, I'm sorry you think that. Do you mean the plot is boring? Or do you mean my writing is boring? I'd be much better off if you'd give details.
Name: malvia reviewed
Him on Jul 01, 2008 05:29 am
By the way, am not some expert trying to criticize your work to the fullest. Just wanted my two cents in and as I stated earlier, I do like the story line.
Name: malvia reviewed
Him on Jul 01, 2008 05:27 am
I got a little confused about how Draco, Ginny and the rest were portrayed. There wasn't as much character development as I had hoped. It seemed rushed at the very least but regardless of what I just typed, I do like the concept of the story. I certainly don't mind that you have a lot of things going on at the same time. This shows promise.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
One Good Name on Nov 12, 2007 02:45 pm
Draco needs to get his crap straight. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be sure to be updating soon! It feels like it's harder to re-write a story than it is to write a story from scratch but I'm working on it. :Drn~Princess
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
The First on Aug 23, 2007 02:10 pm
wonderful can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I'll be updating soon! :)
Name: abby reviewed
The First on Aug 19, 2007 03:03 pm
oohhh...little baby Malfoy feet!!! YAY! please update!
Author's Response: lol. I'll be updating very soon! Thanks for reviewing. :D
Name: Elladora reviewed
The First on Aug 19, 2007 09:15 am
This is great! What an amazing twist at the end. I completely didn't see that coming. More chapters, please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! I'll be updating soon!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed
The First on Aug 19, 2007 08:52 am
I like it. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be updating soon. Glad you like it!
Name: Shwadi reviewed
The First on Aug 19, 2007 08:27 am
oh lordie! i smell trouble! haha nice :P
Author's Response: Oh, I love trouble!! :D Thanks.
Name: joey101 reviewed
The First on Aug 19, 2007 05:45 am
really good beginning...pleaz update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be updating soon.
Name: Jaguar reviewed
The First on Aug 19, 2007 12:32 am
Well, she did send owls didn't she? ;) Nice one, we want more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be updating soon. :)
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
The First on Aug 18, 2007 10:59 pm
LOL! Wow, what a way to find out you have a kid. Oh, my God. That's insane. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon. I loved this!
Author's Response: Thanks. I already have the next chapter written just have to edit it a little bit and then I'll post it. :)