Name: Almicene reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 07, 2011 07:53 pm
Hm, the beginning was interesting, but I have to say kinda disturbed towards the middle. If the situation had been reversed, where Draco was beating Ginny up, and then her declaration of love right after, it would definitely not be right either, yet it seems because the gender's switched it's acceptable. She physically abused him, and I have a hard time finding that romantic or cute.

I would say the first half of the story definitely shows potential in your writing style however.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 24, 2009 02:36 pm
this one makes me laugh.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 28, 2008 04:17 pm
i absolutely love this story, i've been going thru all the stories that i've reviewed to (and believe me, its quite a lot) just because i wanted to find this story. great job i love it!
Name: homegrown_witches reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 02, 2008 06:49 pm
this story has perfect porportions of everything

draco's stubborness, jealousy, and ginny's temper

great job!
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Chapter 1 on May 16, 2008 09:57 am
Awww!!! Adorable, in a believable way. The sequence at the beginning was the perfect exposition, too. :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 26, 2008 03:51 pm
i love this story!
Name: Elyre reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 29, 2007 04:48 pm
I love Ginny's last line... I can't believe she just beat the sh*t out of him. lol. thanks for the story. I really enjoyed reading this.
Name: slygal reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 25, 2007 02:27 pm
LOVED IT!! That is absolutely hilarious!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 25, 2007 11:27 am
awe. this was way cute! great job!
Name: LadySalmon reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 25, 2007 08:47 am
Aaaaaaaaaaah, that story made me smile like a complete idiot. Wonderful, well done.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 25, 2007 06:43 am
It is really wonderful. Really good. What a wasted month. ;)
Name: SMichaelM reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2007 04:53 pm
That was absolutely adorable! love it
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2007 04:44 pm
Aw, I love it.
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