Reviews For Already Lost
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Already Lost on Aug 10, 2008 07:42 pm
I have no idea what happened in this story. I totally don't get it.
Name: Enigmatic Eel reviewed Already Lost on Apr 18, 2008 06:50 am
Oh, how sad :( are you continuing this?
Name: razzle_be_dazzled reviewed Already Lost on Jan 14, 2008 05:25 pm
Awww, sad! Good start, I enjoy your style! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review and the encouragement. I'll be sure to continue. :)
Name: Alluring_Twilight reviewed Already Lost on Jan 11, 2008 06:29 pm
Ah, so sad. Beautifully written. Right now, I really want Saint Potter to just go jump off a bridge or something.

My only critique, is maybe using a ';' instead of '...' while writing a story. Aside from that, it was very well written for a first D/G story :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. We must have some kind of mind connection thing going on, because in my story I'm writing now, there are ";" all over the place... and a few well placed "..." for good measure as well. ;-)rnrnThanks again for reviewing.
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Already Lost on Dec 13, 2007 04:11 pm
This was really good! I really liked it. Just enough angst without going overboard and a believable plotline. Very well written!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story as much as you did.
Name: natalie star reviewed Already Lost on Dec 11, 2007 07:08 pm
This was engaging and sad, but I couldn't help but feel that Draco would not have given up so easy. The Draco I know wouldn't have left the appartment without shouting shaking the truth into Ginny. I dont like this Draco, he has doomed them both to lives of unhappiness.

Author's Response: I'm sorry that it has taken me this long to respond to your review, first off. Thank you for reviewing, secondly. rnrnWe obviously have different views of Draco, from the one in my story and the one you've described. That's what makes fan fiction great though. In my story, my Draco saw that Ginny was happy, so he let her go. Her happiness was more important to him than his own. And she was happy. She may have been living in a world of lies, but she didn't know it. So, Draco doomed himself to a life of unhappiness, but not necessarily Ginny to one. rnrnOf course, she would have been much happier with Draco, but that's left for another time, isn't it? ;-)
Name: shaded reviewed Already Lost on Dec 01, 2007 02:27 pm
No! That can't be how it ends! :(

I really can't quite imagine Harry ever intending to hurt, let alone kill, his friends or adopted family. It goes against everything we've come to know about Harry through the books; he adores the Weasley family.

Other than that, I think that the story is well written and engaging. The flashbacks are well-placed and reveal Draco and Ginny's relationship before he was accused of murder. I liked the first person narrative throughout this story.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for not responding until now. The view of Harry, well, that's the beauty of fan fiction. We get to travel outside the books a little bit. And, you never know, Harry could have that maniacal need to be the hero, so much so he'd kill others to frame someone in his way. Thanks for the review though. :-)
Name: star_in_the_sky reviewed Already Lost on Sep 27, 2007 02:04 am
I like this story a lot. You have the base of a story that could be much longer if you wanted it to be. I think you should continue it, it could turn out very interesting. The way you wrote it was excellent. I really would like to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. There aren't any plans for expanding it at the moment, though I guess I could with the flashbacks, backstory, etc. I'll think about it, though my stories tend just to be one shots. It seems to be the only way I can complete them. :-)
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed Already Lost on Sep 24, 2007 07:16 pm
Very nice. I quite liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Always the type of response an author hopes to get. :-)
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Already Lost on Sep 24, 2007 08:02 am
wow, how definately ddepressing. lovely...but depressing thank you for that. lol
no it was very nice well done

Author's Response: lol, I am sorry it was so depressing for you. Like the summary said, it was the product of a very, very bad day and was a good way to get things off the chest. I'm glad that you enjoyed it though.
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Already Lost on Sep 23, 2007 06:54 pm
Intense in a good way. Very well written. I don't like the fact that she's going to marry Harry... And the fact that he was able to destroy the "hero." Was he jealous of what Draco had? What about a truth serum?

Author's Response: I didn't want her to marry Harry, but there was no real way around it. I'm not a huge fan of writing happy endings. Harry, in my story, was extremely jealous of what Draco had, which is why he chose to drop the information that Draco had revealed the location Ron, Tonks, and Lupin, when it had really been Harry himself. There was no truth serum involved.rnrnI'm glad you enjoyed the story though.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Already Lost on Sep 23, 2007 06:36 pm
I got a little confused but I think it was because of the back and forth design you had for Draco.
Oh, I liked your one piece but I think I would have enjoyed more of the silent nature that brought them peace.
Good try.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... not sure exactly what you mean with the "silent nature that brought them peace". Would you care to explain that more? Thanks for the review though.
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed Already Lost on Sep 23, 2007 02:31 pm
Personally, I think you should lose bets more often ;-) I did not cry, however I will tell you that I almost did when you read it to me, and probably would have, had I not know you would have mocked me endlessly. You insufferable Punk.

Author's Response: This can only have one response:rnrn:-)
Name: Draco_Little_Angel reviewed Already Lost on Sep 23, 2007 02:07 pm
awwwwwwwww u no I'm crying rite now.That soooo sweet.U should get a round of the paws 4 this begin ur first fic...

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's the effect I was hoping for. :-)
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