Name: Nightmerr reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 03, 2007 03:46 pm
Whoa. It's really good... I like the way that you capture how Draco is completely different on the inside. Keep writing!
Name: Gabby reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on May 02, 2006 05:33 pm
that waas great, i love your writting n the way that draco is pining after ginny. please tell me your going to update soon, the story is great
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Mar 19, 2006 05:02 am
Aww, if he were the Draco of fic lovers, he would have a chance with her! Do you know how much it would tickle me if Draco and Ginny actually ended up together somehow in the actual books!? I'm sure it would tickle all of us relentlessly!
Name: draco_brat reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Dec 14, 2005 04:46 pm
this story is great i think it could make a really good long story. Ginny's eyes are hazel not blue just thought i might point that out.
Name: Chocolate Muse reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jul 03, 2005 11:00 pm
Aww. How bittersweet. I really like it. Are there any squels in the making? Of course, it would be much more angsty just to leave it at that, which is also good. I really liked it, excellent writing.
Name: saucy reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 23, 2005 01:56 pm
Please don't let this be a one-shot. I think it would make a very nice, very long story. But whatever happens, is up to you in the end. XOXO Karisma.
Name: pooterbear reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 22, 2005 01:58 pm
Brilliant story, although I do have one thing to say. Perhaps I read it incorrectly, but it appeared that you said Ginny's eyes were a crystal blue?
*Shrug* maybe i'm misreading...it doesn't matter all that much.
Brill' though.
Name: Betz reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 21, 2005 02:45 pm
That was good. I enjoyed how you explained his obsession over her, seeing her in teh Quidditch shop and his fantasies about her in the hammock.
Name: Ivy reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 13, 2005 12:49 pm
please don't let this be a one-shot. i like the way it's written a lot, the loneliness comes across well.
Name: mary reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 09, 2005 04:20 pm
is this a prolouge to something? it is very good, but doesn't seem complete.
Name: ronlover reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 09, 2005 11:46 am
I loved it! Are you going to write more? I would love to see what happens after. That would be cool. Keep up the great work. I really enjoyed reading this. I was wondering if you could take a look at my story? I would love to hear what you say. Thanks. Keep up the great work!
Name: Cappucina reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 09, 2005 01:40 am
I have to second the comment that fierce beatings seem out of character in the Malfoy home. I have to think that the parents stress the highest of image standards (the best clothes, perfect hair, knowing all the right etiquette, the highest marks at school, winning and being the best at everything, etc) and lots of criticisms (like when his father berated him in front of that shoipkeeper) and absolutely no hint of love or compassion. And, told everyday that he has to do all these things exactly as his father dictates because Malfoy's are superior to everyone else. That would sure produce a Draco - believing himself superior in everyway, not holding sweetness or compassion in very high esteem, and not being able to empathisize with anyone different.
That said, he sure does have a crap homelife beatings or no. You hint of lonliness (or abandonment) really well with the image of draco exploring all the places n the manor where no one lives any longer - secret bannister sliding and the summer hammock swinging.
The rest of your story is absolutely brilliant. I do hope that you take us all the way through all the books with Draco's POV of events with Ginny in them (and his obsession of her.)
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jun 08, 2005 07:50 pm
A sequel to this would be absolutely amazing. Much in the future when maybe he could have another disovery, but this time in the arms of his firey haired goddess.. *wink wink*
Name: madalene3666 reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jul 16, 2004 03:37 pm
Of course, I am a total sucker for obsessed Draco.
Name: Camilla reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jul 09, 2004 04:55 pm
Er... you might want to up to rating on this a bit! Parts of it were a bit risque. Hehe. But I still thought it was quite wonderful. Love that flangst, especially the "Draco has obsession with Ginny" kind. Please write more.
Name: Camilla reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jul 09, 2004 04:55 pm
Er... you might want to up to rating on this a bit! Parts of it were a bit risque. Hehe. But I still thought it was quite wonderful. Love that flangst, especially the "Draco has obsession with Ginny" kind. Please write more.
Name: Mynuet reviewed
At Flourish and Blotts on Jul 07, 2004 04:41 am
Did I write a note when I accepted this? I don't remember. I did think it was a good story, despite my not being the biggest fan of the theory that Draco gets beatings. I thought that you did a superb job with conveying the unwilling yet instant and total attraction, the strangeness and excitement of, er, self-discovery, and his longing and bitterness. Did you plan for this to be a one-shot, or perhaps the prequel to something longer? Either would work, although of course the second one would make me much happier. ;)