Name: kieraraelyn reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 13, 2015 12:31 am
I did not expect that to be Epilogue Compliant, so that was a surprise. The only part that confused me was the first naughty scene. I couldn't tell if it was supposed to be Snape and Lily or Ginny and Draco. It works, either way, so it doesn't really matter in the end. I liked how you wove the DH excerpts in.
I wish there was more to be had, though I know that you don't have the stamina for a longer fic.
Name: Muzicfox reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 24, 2009 08:21 am
A different and believable version of what might have happened between the Last Battle and 14 Years Later, but with a twist. The story itself has elements of sadness and desperation, and I always like to think what if...a personal favorite.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like writing fics that fit within the canon because I refuse to be hopeless! I'm glad you liked it!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 16, 2008 09:24 pm
Hm. Kind of sad, kind of confusing.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you found the piece confusing. I hoped you enjoyed reading it, at the very least.
Name: Iliana_r reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2008 05:04 pm
Wow! Amazing
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: dawbygirl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 18, 2008 06:03 am
Oh, beautiful!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. It means a lot.
Name: loveisnowhere reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 11, 2008 09:56 pm
Oh. Oh, this one really just hit me in the chest. It was written just well enough to really hit me, it's great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: LimnHere reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2008 03:51 pm
I really liked how you intertwined two story lines! Its sad how both don't work out through. =(
(Side note: I thought it was amusing that you had Harry be Lily and Snape's son because I was going to doodle up something with a similar idea.)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Sorry that I sort of stole your story.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2008 01:41 pm
That was an awesome story, one of the best I've read...*clapping*
Author's Response: Thank you SO much, that means a lot.
Name: LiveLaughLove reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2008 11:20 am
Wait, but if Lily was pregnant, then Harry would be Snape's son...
Author's Response: Yessir. That's what I was going for. I always thought it would be terribly ironic if Harry was Snape's son because Harry looked up to his father so much and Snape disliked Harry. I even considered the fact that Snape disliked Harry because he knew he was Harry's father but Harry would never/could never know.rnrnAnyway, I hope you liked the writing at least!
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2008 05:10 am
That was intresting. I wish there would have been more, I could have seen this being a great short story peice. But it was still very good this way as well. :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm always afraid I don't have the attention span to do anything longer than a one-shot. Besides, I liked the way this one fit in with the HP world and wouldn't know where to take it next.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2008 04:25 am
This is very well written. I really liked the way you wove the parallel stories together. It makes me wonder whether Dumbledore knew about Harry somehow--and what he might have known about Ginny and Draco before he died. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it and didn't have too much trouble following my thinking.
Name: ladydeWynter reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2008 01:55 am
Whoa! That was a different take on those Deathly Hallows moments!Enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm just glad I could take the Epilogue and turn it into something that still gives hope to all the D/G shippers out there.
Name: joliefille reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 08, 2008 10:14 pm
Ooh, interesting, having both Ginny and Lily be involved in this. And it could explain part of why Snape's so against Harry. Still, for some reason it seems a bit implausible; at least the Harry being Snape's not James's part. The story, though a bit confusing at times, was good.
Author's Response: Although implausible--we all know it's implausible for a D/G chance to exist in canon--I still feel like there was so much in the text that could hint at the possibility. Anyway, thank you for reading, reviewing, and liking the fic despite the confusing bits!
Name: RitaSeona reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 08, 2008 08:47 pm
Fabulous as always, darling! I don't know who did your beta reading, but they sure did a wonderful job. :P
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed your Christmas present!
Name: Rashonda reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 08, 2008 07:11 pm
The way you blended DH and your story intertwining is quite brilliant. I'm enjoying it already.
Author's Response: Thank you for the generous adjective 'brilliant'. Although I hate to inform you, if you expected more [the 'already' implies that you assume there will be more that you would also like] this is a one-shot. I wouldn't know where to take this [a D/G relationship seems unlikely] and I'm afraid I don't have the attention span to create a Long and Completed.
Name: sevs_girl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 08, 2008 06:24 pm
I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means a lot to know that you enjoyed it.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 08, 2008 04:13 pm
~WOW. I just love that. So wonderful~
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it!
Name: yomoedmb reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 08, 2008 04:13 pm
I love it! It makes so much sense too. I think that Severus could have been Harry's father. If Dumbledore is gay then Severus and Lily had a Harry as a love child and I love that James is Draco's. Brilliant
Author's Response: Thank you kindly! I'm glad you agree that it's entirely a possibility.