Name: TASHAx reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 01, 2008 12:32 pm
Gosh. This made me quite sad, to be honest.
Wonderfully written. And Draco's note was just amazingly rebellious and uncaring about his Father, which almost made it sadder that he actually thought that and yet they'd both decided to die together rather than fight Lucius and society's prejudice.
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 05, 2008 08:50 am
A great poem. Draco's note had me laughing. :)
Name: jojozdraco reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2008 04:09 pm
wooww i really liked that
Name: December Sunshine reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2008 01:19 pm
Aw, Conniffer. You have the weirdest ideas. I love them. The note bit's still my favorite.
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2008 06:39 am
That was good. It was sad, but his note made me smile. I'd prefer a happier ending, but I knew what I was getting myself into when I read it. Although, they could have faked their deaths....(hint hint)
Name: Mollie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 31, 2008 09:16 pm
lol, I love the letters..."I love her, Father. Go to Hell"... that is so funny!!!
Name: elentari reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 31, 2008 08:33 am
"I love her. Go to Hell."
I LOVE that line.
The rest of it is great, too. Although some of it is more funny than Romeo and Juliet-ish, I like it more that way.
Name: hedwig reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 31, 2008 04:29 am
hey! i liked it very much!
especially the part with their notes to harry and lucius =)
only the last line was a bit, well bumpy...
but i know how hard it can be to find the right rhymes. i've been writing for my own band for a while and its always difficult! so i am in awe at how good it sounded.
love, hedwig
Author's Response: Thanks! The notes are my favorite part too. Yeah, that was the best line I could think of at the time.
Name: d-g_lover reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 31, 2008 12:09 am
wonderful