lol. the humor was neither flat nor mediocre.. i found it most enjoyable :)
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Author's Response: Thank you! It's so great to hear that. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
HEHEHE...I liked it. I giggle to myself and in my head quite a bit so people would think I was crazy for laughing out loud for no apparent reason.Great one-shot.
Author's Response: Thanks :) hahaha, I do that too sometimes, the people around me think I'm crazy. I'm glad it made you laugh.
that was great! I think you captured Ginny's mood swings perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've actually never been pregnant or around an emotional pregnant lady, so I was afraid I may have overdone it. I'm glad you enjoyed.
ok so this story is hilarious!! i'm a big fan of your "his" trilogy but this story is so funny! for your first comedy i would say you did awesome. i love the banter between ginny and draco. my favorite scene is probably when bill says the line about them deciding to reproduce and ginny freaks while draco laughs, then realizes whats going on. i have to say i guessed that ginny was pregnant in the beginning, but i didn't think she actually was. pretty sure this story made my day!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was very scary putting this up because comedy can so easily be flat or trite; it's good to hear how much you liked it. That scene is a favorite of mine as well, it took me a long time to figure it out, but I didn't have to change it at all once I had written it. Good job on guessing what was wrong with Ginny, I tried to be a bit more subtle about it by not giving her morning sickness. I'm glad you enjoyed this story so much, thank you for your great review!
~I think that you did are really great job with the humor. You kept Ginny and Draco in character and added Ron as the humorous background character. The whole part about Little Draco may have been a bit much, but the story as a whole works. I would say that this was a successful attempt at humor.~
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought it was funny. I was really really trying to keep everyone in character, which is HARD in a comedy. I'm sorry if you thought there was too much of Little Draco, I just loved how much torture he could create for so many different characters, which is why I kept throwing him back in there. Both he and The Weasel From Hell were incredibly fun to write.
Great fic, yeah, but you do know that England doesn't celebrate Thanksgiving?
Author's Response: *palmface* I actually did know that, but I completely forgot while writing this. Thanks for pointing it out, I went back and changed it.
I think it's adorable. Ron made me laugh a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've always loved Ron's little zingers. I'm glad you liked it!
This. Is. Hilarious! I absolutely ADORE Ron in this story, and how he's always making not-so-subtle comments about how he wants 'the ferret' to be gone. You've done a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it so much. Poor Ron, it can't be easy for him having his sister marry his hated enemy, can it? :D
lol, I think Ron was definitely the funny character in this story!!! I loved it... Thanks for writing such an awesome story. Any plans for another anytime soon?
Author's Response: Thank you. Ron is definitely very easy to pick on, isn't he? :) I'm glad you liked it. I have another short, angsty piece half written in my head, but I haven't gotten any of it down yet. Soon, hopefully.
I liked this a lot. I enjoyed the humor, especially when Ron realizes his daughter will own a ferret named "Little Draco" and Ginny threatens with more pets - tarantulas!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really think Ginny and Draco have a very similar, wicked, sense of humor. I'm glad you liked it.