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Name: chenjinyan reviewed Chapter One on Dec 13, 2017 05:44 pm
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Name: Desertisle reviewed Chapter One on Jan 30, 2016 09:27 am
This is a great story. Makes you wonder. Thanks for writing it.
Name: adriana530 reviewed Chapter One on Jan 03, 2011 05:41 pm
Great stuff I hope it turns into longer story I like the idea of second chance at finding soul mate

Author's Response: See, that's what I thought, too. I mean, there's close to 7 billion people out there. What if we miss our chance? So I came up with this. And I'm afraid it's probably not going to have a sequel (probably ever) because it's been several years since I first posted it and I've moved on, creatively, from this particular idea. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter One on Oct 12, 2010 08:41 am
i know i've reviewed this like 100 times but i love this story. a lot. haha.

Author's Response: I know you have! Seriously, I think half of the reviews are yours. x) Thank you, again.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter One on Feb 21, 2010 01:24 pm
a cute one-shot!!

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ I'm actually glad for once that my oneshot is pretty stand alone, because I feel that I always leave the possibility for more in all my oneshots. :D
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter One on Feb 14, 2010 12:00 am
Sequel! Sequel!

Author's Response: Goldieee, don't torture me! If you read the review replies for this stupid thing, you'd realize that the idea of a sequel is one that torments me every time I go to reply to a review for this thing. It's so tempting, made doubly so because I have so many WIPs already! DON'T TEMPT ME. (But thanks for the review, all the same.)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter One on Jul 12, 2009 06:28 pm
this story always makes me smile. greatness!

Author's Response: Gah, fourth review. You are simply too amazing for words. <3
Name: sunkistaddiction reviewed Chapter One on Jul 11, 2009 03:49 pm
Very cute. VERY.

You had me chuckling by the end :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm glad I had you chuckling. I always amuse myself when writing my fics, but it's somewhat surprising and oddly relieving that other people find my humor funny, too. ;)
Name: shezachica85 reviewed Chapter One on Feb 25, 2009 09:21 pm
Great Story BTW

Author's Response: Thank you, BTW! Also, terribly sorry for the late response, but I'm super grateful you took a few seconds to jot down a little review. Thanks!
Name: Seductive_Swan reviewed Chapter One on Dec 22, 2008 06:34 pm
I really like the go-back-and-try-again plot device you used. And I think it would be really worth while if you went back and made it longer and maybe with more detail...there would be that much more to enjoy! Good job...and a sequel would be fabulous as well!

Author's Response: I've really been considering writing a much longer chaptered fic to this mammoth sucker. And especially since I've been reading all these lovely reviews after almost two years, it's really bringing things back about how much I really did want to write a long fic for this. Problem is, I'm on an angst kick and I certainly don't have the time to devote to the potentially multi-chaptered fic that I'd like to do. :/ But yes, I definitely agree that more detail would have been better! Also, sorry-for-the-super-duper-incredibly-late-response. :/ Your review was wonderful!
Name: ZSF reviewed Chapter One on Nov 13, 2008 03:48 pm
awww... what an original idea! very sweetly done. great job.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the lovely review! I always try to be somewhat original, but sometimes it's hard. After all, there really is NO original ideas anymore. But I'm glad this somewhat-musing oneshot struck your fancy. And I also give you full permission to keel-haul me for the late response. -_-
Name: deadsnowwhite reviewed Chapter One on Sep 10, 2008 11:29 am
i really like the idea and i think the story is good but i think i would have liked it better if you hadn't made them get togerther so soon if you had simply had ginny tell the malfoys to take some action and then have ginny and draco slowly grow up too that but thats defintly won't have made this a one shot lol over all its good i just think you could have done alot more with it (^_^)

Author's Response: I know, I know! It's been practically two years, and I'm finally getting around to review replies, and they're all reminding me of just why I wanted to make this fic a full-length one. But I have to keep reminding myself that it would take forever and a day, and I really don't have the time to devote to a multi-chaptered fic. But yes, you're definitely right: this idea could have been explored WAY better with multiple chapters to build up to it. Thanks for the review, and I'll probably end up considering writing it into a full-length fic because I really can NOT stop thinking about it now. :P
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter One on Aug 07, 2008 01:59 pm
i love this story. its so good. you're a lovely person for writing this!

Author's Response: I realized that after three reviews you deserve a response, especially since I haven't gotten around to responding to everyone else's, either. rnrnYou are amazing, as well. Thank you so much. I haven't quite give this one a lot of thought, but I know that if I eventually run out of plot ideas, I will return to it. As for now, it's going to stay as a oneshot while I finish up my current DG oneshot. I'm extremely gracious of the fact you took time to review so much. Thanks! rnrnRoma
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Chapter One on Jul 14, 2008 04:11 pm
I am rereading this story for maybe the 10th time. It is wonderfully written. I wish that you would add more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the double review! I'm sorry for the super-incredibly-late response, but meh, FIA and I have an awful love-hate relationship. I'm humbled that you've reread it so many times. Seriously, that is a huge compliment to any writer. Since I'm finally getting around to review-replying to everyone, I'm starting to remember just why I tried to abandon NQE: because it had such huge potential to transmorfify into a huge multi-chaptered fic that I simply didn't have the time for. I still don't, but I'm considering extending it! This is insanity. But still. Thank you so much for the lovely reviews.
Name: kksf1377 reviewed Chapter One on May 08, 2008 12:42 pm
i liked it, very cute

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm sorry for the late reply; it's inexcusable, but I'm glad you thought it was cute. ^^
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter One on May 02, 2008 01:08 pm
rereading this. loving it a second time too. yes i'm a loser, but this is good!

Author's Response: You're not a loser! It's mind-boggling to me that you could like this fic so many times to warrant multiple rereadings AND multiple reviewings. Seriously, that is a massive amount of flattery heaped onto me. Thank you!!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter One on Mar 27, 2008 02:51 pm
i loved this! its brilliant! greatness!

Author's Response: Thank you, m'dear, and I'm looking at the top of the reviews where I noticed you reviewed AGAIN and that is simply insanity. You. Are. A. Goddess. :)
Name: Shwadi reviewed Chapter One on Mar 25, 2008 12:04 am
YAS! Sequel please!!!! I love it and now u can write a super huge, giant fic about their new lives on earth. please. no pressure :P hahah xxxxx brillio xxxx

Author's Response: Wow, the enthusiasm is amazing! Thanks so much. I really DO want to write a huge giant fic. Gah! I think I might. If I have more time, and I get off this angst kick I'm on right now. And of course, that's no pressure at all! x) Sorry for the late response! :S
Name: shans12342002 reviewed Chapter One on Mar 24, 2008 09:29 am
Wow, i really liked this! It was a totally new way of writing D/G! Great job!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Pardon the incredibly super-late response. But I think I had just recently finished reading DH, or I had been reading a bunch of next-Gen fics, but I really wanted to write a DG without adultery but still preserved the kids, too. So, I created a way! And I actually super like it, and want to return to it. I'm glad you liked it so much! :D
Name: dristi reviewed Chapter One on Mar 24, 2008 06:49 am
hey...the story was fantastic! i loved the sarcasm and the witty comments. (it's a wonderful one-shot, but it has a lot potential to be a superb long story!), dristi

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I like that other people think my witty comments are actually funny, and I'm a sarcastic person so of course my characters wind up being that way, too. It's been a couple of years since this review, so I'm dreadfully sorry for the late reply, but I've been reading all these reviews and it's been reminding me of how much I wanted to make this fic into a full-length one. I'll have to give it some thought, but it's definitely making me consider it. Thank you for the review!
Name: Katmillia reviewed Chapter One on Mar 24, 2008 04:46 am
Okay, that was really cute, and totally made my morning.

Author's Response: Eek, okay, I'm really cheesed I didn't reply to this sooner, but I'm sort of glad I didn't because GUESS WHAT? I'm on the DG Forum now! And I think you came on once (?) since I've been on, and sometimes (very infrequently, actually) someone waxes poetic about the days of Katy. You should come back! Oh, and thanks for the lovely review. I'm glad it made your morning. :)
Name: stickofgum reviewed Chapter One on Mar 23, 2008 12:59 pm
sequel

everything

nothing

Author's Response: I wish I could write a sequel! I might. Later. Or make it into a full-length fic. But I really shouldn't be thinking about that because I'm so busy. *sighs* Oh, and terribly sorry for the incredibly late review reply.
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed Chapter One on Mar 23, 2008 09:20 am
I liked it. Sweet. I would like to read more, I think. How they deal with a world where they know what happens next, what happens to the people the ended up with, how things change because of it.

Is there conflict because of the "changing fate" issue? What happens to everyone else?
What happened the first go round, and what happened in comparison the second time?

Author's Response: Okay, one: I'm sorry this reply is so terribly late. Two: YOU MAKE ME REMEMBER WHY I WANTED TO WRITE A FULL-LENGTH FIC FOR THIS SUCKER!
Name: diary2me reviewed Chapter One on Mar 23, 2008 08:18 am
It was fun. I new take on the idea. But I have to confess that what made me laugh was the summary. Expecting a sequel.

Author's Response: A sequel probably wouldn't be forthcoming, especially since if I DID want to write a sequel, it was transform into a monolithic multi-chaptered story documenting their troubles with reliving life. And I want to do that so badly I know it's a bad idea. Gah! You're making me want to write it, just rereading your review nearly two years later (for which I'm sorry the reply is so freaking long coming). And I'm super glad you like the summary, since I'm usually notoriously bad at writing them. Thank you!
Name: Dracosgrl10 reviewed Chapter One on Mar 23, 2008 05:54 am
wow.. this was an interesting story. i really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it interesting and enjoyed it! I wanted to try something different on the whole DG angle, and I think this was spawned right after reading DH, because I liked the kids so much that I wanted to keep them, but still have DG. And adultery!stories just don't really do it for me when there are kids in the picture. D: Anyway! Thanks for the review, and (hopefully) you can ignore the fact that this response is (nearly) two years later!
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