Reviews For MMS Potter
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Smitten on Jun 26, 2008 02:26 pm
This was such a great chapter. I really liked how Bill, Charlie, Fleur and even Mrs. Weasley treated Draco like an equal and made him feel comfortable. Harry better feel threatened by Draco, he can't hold a candle to him!

I loved the dancing and especially the "po folk" nightclub scenes. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes...there is a confrontation between the two coming up!
Name: crookshanksg reviewed Smitten on Jun 25, 2008 06:39 am
Good story. I'm glad it's not exactly like TItanic. I've seen some fanfics likes that where they basically just changed the characters names. Please please don't kill Draco though. With the emergency floos it should'n't be exactly like Titanic right?

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I'm borrowing quite a bit from the storyline, but this is happening in a different world, too. We'll see what happens!
Name: BelleAmour reviewed Smitten on Jun 25, 2008 05:41 am
Uh...I love this story so much! I love how Draco is poor and the Weasleys are rich, its so different, but its done quite well. You're really working the characters at a good pace, making it seem more realistic.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's weird writing about Draco as poor...but it's interesting to have him cope with it as well.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Smitten on Jun 25, 2008 04:28 am
aw, she's in love with him!!! poor ginny and draco.

Author's Response: :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed A Day at the Pool on Jun 19, 2008 03:18 am
great chapter. i do feel bad for draco. the whole thing is unfair. honestly. update soon!
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed A Little Game of Cards on Jun 18, 2008 07:00 am
Hiya there! I have been checking the site everyday for the update and here it is! :)
As usual, u have done a great job writing this chapter...
Thank you so much for incorporating my suggestion so beautifully.Its better than what i had imagined. The best part is it keeps the characters in mind,everybody behaves as expected.There's nothing sudden, if you know what i mean....Ginny is being Ginny and Malfoy is being Malfoy.You cannot expect them to become the best of friends overnight,eventhough he saved her life....The kids were uber adorable!
Its so cute to see the way 'Aunt Ginny' dotes on her 'entourage' ;)
I believe you have already planned the set-up for the evening dinner....Can't wait to see the smirk wiped off Mr.Malfoy's face when he sees Ginny look
resplendent and divine in those 'nice blue robes' :P (ref:Molly Weasley)
Honestly,we think alike coz i always imagine ginny in floaty robes of deep midnight blue or a dazzling emerald and her hair in an elegant up-do.Epitome of elegance and sophistication.
Can't wait for the next update...Keep up the good work and thank ya loads for makin me soo bloody happy :)
Cheers!
Name: BelleAmour reviewed A Day at the Pool on Jun 18, 2008 04:29 am
Amazing chapter, I absolutely love this story to pieces!
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed A Little Game of Cards on Jun 07, 2008 08:12 am
Thank you so much for considering my suggestion :)
I suppose you are thinking of some great bonding between Draco and Ted in the future? what better way for the kids to bond with the bloke than a game of kiddie quidditch ;)
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Ginny's Savior on Jun 06, 2008 01:53 am
hi there! you have been doing an excellent job so far.Can't wait for more. :)
ok, i know that you must have started work on the next i.e sixth chapter but i had this little idea in my head, you could call it a suggestion...
I was thinking of the next encounter of Ginny and Draco(the next day after the suicide attempt) to be fun.i suppose that after the suicide attempt,ginny would want to distract herself with other things and who better than her adorable nieces to do the job.
I can imagine Ginny in a tank top and shorts and a high ponytail,looking every bit like a 16 year old having a blast with Victoire,Dominique & Ted in the children's play area on the ship and somehow Draco joins the fray.
You think you could incorporate this situation in your next chapter? i mean ocourse its your story and you know the best but i couldn't resist sharing this with you :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! I like it! I'll def. keep in mind as I write the next chapter!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Ginny's Savior on Jun 04, 2008 01:42 pm
okay, i love the titanic. i only resently saw it, i know i'm a little behind, but i'm in love. haha. i really hope the endings happier tho! i don't want draco to die... update soon!
Name: shaded reviewed Ginny's Savior on Jun 04, 2008 02:13 am
Maybe Ginny hadn’t actually jumped, but that didn’t mean she wasn’t drowning.
I like this last line.
Although Ginny's thoughts on feeling trapped and suffocated are well expressed, the lines where she looks across the deck and sees she's alone and then feels trapped and suicidal seems a very sharp jump in tone and feeling. It seems very implausible. If that part was expanded a bit, then Ginny's aborted suicide attempt would not seem so out of place.

I quite enjoyed Draco calmly talking to Ginny about how he'd be forced to risk certain death to save her. That was one of my favourite parts of Titanic; I can't help but grin when I think about it. I mean, could you imagine what Harry's reaction to seeing Ginny in that situation would have been? Probably run to save the day and then cause her to fall overboard. Anyhoo, it shall be fun to see the dinner scene. Looking forward to it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! It was difficult to get from "hey, I'm sad and alone" to "I think I should kill myself now". I think I may try to brush up the scene, actually.
Name: starry_laa reviewed A Little Game of Cards on Jun 03, 2008 07:58 am
Glad there's been more G/D interaction...can't wait for more!
Name: mahek210 reviewed Ginny's Savior on Jun 03, 2008 07:53 am
d last line was perfect!!luv d way this is going!!curious 2 know wld u stay true 2 titanic nd kill draco?? well obviously time will tell!!gud work:)
Name: hummie reviewed Ginny's Savior on Jun 03, 2008 06:47 am
oh boy. well i can honestly say i didn't see that coming. very interesting plot point. where is draco going to get clothes?! hopefully he will be the same ol' malfoy, and saunter in as if he were wearing the finest dress robes while he's wearing his poor muggle things. i really hope you don't have him borrowing dress robes from pansy O.O anyway, great job, can't wait until the next chapter!
Name: Hopeless reviewed Ginny's Savior on Jun 03, 2008 06:08 am
lovely story so far, I can't wait for more!
Name: 0630938 reviewed Draco's Dreams on May 23, 2008 04:31 am
OHHH NOOOO!
Name: hummie reviewed Draco's Dreams on May 22, 2008 08:03 am
wow, well, great job! it is a pleasure to read this fanfic :) i must have missed the last couple of times you've updated. i really enjoy how the characters have been put together so far. i am really curious what direction this fanfic is taking. well, i guess i'll find out in the coming chapters! :) well done, and i cannot wait until your next update :)
Name: hummie reviewed Setting Sail on May 22, 2008 07:55 am
i love the story so far . . . but isn't it Apparate? anyway, great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment and the correction!
Name: starry_laa reviewed Draco's Dreams on May 22, 2008 05:37 am
Wow, is all I can say! You're really going somehwre with this. I love how depthful it is! And Draco killed Snape, hey? Looking forward to more revelations!
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Draco's Dreams on May 22, 2008 04:22 am
I was so happy to see an update. It must've been so hard for Draco to face his "friends" from the past. My boy got through it like a champ though. His encounter with Pansy and her son was very funny.

Oh gosh I hope he didn't kill Snape. I can see why he's having such a hard time getting any sleep. Those last 7 years are definately going to haunt him forever.

I can't wait to read more Ginny & Draco intereaction...Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next chapter is in progress and yes, Ginny and Draco will interact more!
Name: shaded reviewed Setting Sail on Apr 29, 2008 11:55 am
Ooh, ominous ending. The children were very well described. I especially like Teddy and his reaction to recognising Draco's relation to him was great.
Ginny and Draco's meeting went off with a lot less antagonism than I thought it would. Though I guess that in this fic they are a lot more mature than in their school days. It should be interesting to see how closely you're going to stick with the Titanic storyline. Hopefully the ending isn't going to be exactly the same!
Name: harrypotterchick4ever reviewed Setting Sail on Apr 29, 2008 11:36 am
please don't have the same ending as the movie
i agrre with the previous review about draco getting his money back and marrying ginny adn harry well i'll be nice he can find someone else!!
i liked the chapter
i especially liked teddy's meeting with draco
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Setting Sail on Apr 29, 2008 07:38 am
This was such a great chapter! I'm so glad Draco and Ginny finally saw each other. Is there any chance that they could've had some "history" back at Hogwarts? Something about the way Draco looked at Ginny's hand until he found the ring made me think (hope) that maybe they had something back in the day? I'm looking forward to them "bumping" into each other some more. I can't imagine all the drama that's going to explode once Harry and Ron see Draco and Blaise.

The kids were absolutely adorable! I hope Draco reaches out to Teddy. I could tell they were both shocked by the realization of what they were to each other.

“So nobody could get off the ship either?”

“No. But why would they want to?”

I agree with the reviewer who wrote " Kiss. Of. Death.!" Please update soon : - )
Name: starry_laa reviewed A Little Game of Cards on Apr 28, 2008 09:11 pm
I like this, it's very good! And I second the motion of the previous reviewer... if those passengers die...
Looking forward to an update!
Name: 0630938 reviewed Setting Sail on Apr 28, 2008 05:36 pm
dread full those wards I don't trust them at all at all (if you sink and kill the passengers I will find you and force you to re-write the story with a very happy ending that would include Malfoy getting all his money back, them getting married and Harry falling out of the boat)
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