This was very nice. It's wonderful to see a Dark Lord that isn't half-insane and looks like a snake, but instead is truly interested in bettering his world. And, I love queen!Ginny.
Excellent job!
This is very strange, but very well written. I do like the idea that Ginny was corrupted by Tom in this subtle way. Well done.
As much as "oooo" doesn't seem like a good enough comment. It is the closet thing I can say to describe the chills I got when Draco changed the shape of the sign.
this was really good. and not anything like i was expecting. great job.
I totally loved this story, it was well written and a lot different than I thought it would be.
This was such a beautiful story, very different from what I though it would be, but I really enjoyed it
I don't know how I missed this one. It's really good. I love how you show the change in her thinking.
Wow ... the summary and title threw me off -- I thought that it would be totally different. You already know what I'm thinking about, but ... wow. This story was superb. I sincerely loved it. Great job.
Such an interesting take in this story. Brilliant writing. Wonderful tone.
All hail the new world order :P
I liked this.
i was expecting something different but this is just AMAZING..i luv it..
Good story. Interesting take on the Bad Ginny motif. I have a hard time believing that theirs would be a bloodless revolution and that, in the end, it would be sunshine and rainbows. But I rather like that, thinking that while they are doing what they're doing for the common good, they're in something of a downward spiral (a la Voldemort). And as another reviewer said, I like Ginny being a strong character, manifesting her own destiny as opposed to how she is often painted in contrast to Draco.
One criticism, and it is small, I didn't really like the idea of the foremost part of giving birth to their child was that Ginny got beautiful jewelry. It seemed a little off and materialistic compared with the rest of a great fic. Like I said though, very minor criticism, probably not worth mentioning. Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: *goes back to read that bit* You're right, it does come off as materialistic. I meant it to emphasize the ongoing attraction between them, despite the figure alterations of pregnancy and all the related stresses that go with it, but that didn't quite come across.
I can say, without doubt, that this fanfic is very unique! I love your imagination! You are a great author. You have my salute.
This is giving new meaning to power-drunk, me thinks . . . I almost pity the wizarding world.
Awesome!
That was truly amazing. I've never read a story like that. It was completely original. At first I skipped over it because I thought it was going to be some dark fic where Draco somehow gets Ginny to join Voldemort. But the I saw the recommendations so I gave it a shot and I'm happy to admit I was truly surprised. It's an interesting plot and it's beautifully written as well. By the way, I love the line at the beginning. It fits so well. And the BBC line made me laugh.
I'm so sad that it's a one shot but you ended it at the perfect spot. I think if you turned it into an actual chapter story some of the substance and style would be taken away.
It was great. Now I can stop procrastinating and maybe get some work done before school tomorrow. Maybe...
I love it! Every time i read it, it gives me goosebumps... especially the ending..
I postively love this. And I'm not exactly sure how I've never read it before. Great job. Wonderful originality.
it took quite a while to get to the reason she was getting the mark but all in all it was a pretty good story.
I really liked this one, Mynuet. Your idea was completely diffrent and fresh. I liked how you explained Ginny's gradual realization of what muggles are really like. Fantastic job!
love it!
Oh Myn. I decided to reread my favourite story tonight, and I'm glad I did. Every time I read I get something new out of it. Every time I read it I am amazed at the brilliancy of it. This time was no exception. In over a year of fanfic reading and reviewing and reccing... this is still my very favourite story. YAY for you! ;)
Wow. Just Wow. I love that Draco didn't give Ginny the Dark Mark. He passed over her and gave everyone else the Dark Mark and then changed everyones as he was giving her her 'Mark'. It was as if he didn't want something that had such an evil backround to even touch her. Even for a minute. Very nice. Lovly, really!
Wow, incredible, really. I especially love the opening quote. Wonderful work!