Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 22, 2008 01:05 pm
I am new to this story and love it. Nice flow, nice dialogue..and the plot is making its' mark...I am not a certified beta, but was an English major and would love to help you whenever you may need it.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 22, 2008 12:52 pm
Oh, this one is going to end up making me cry, isn't it? Not a happy ending? Hmm, I will wait it out, Nice job and great writing...the imagery and emotion you write about are amazing.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 15, 2008 04:26 pm
I am eagerly awaiting to see what adventures our dear Ginny encounters. Do update soon.
Name: BelleAmour reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 15, 2008 09:22 am
Amazing, I can tell its going to be wonderful
Name: JacW reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 14, 2008 08:38 pm
Loving it so far! Can't wait to read more!
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 14, 2008 04:11 pm
Haha, Ron just made me crack up. He flipped out just cuz of Ginny's skirt. Really sounds like my overprotective git of a brother. LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: She's the only girl in a house full of brothers. I kind of figure that when she does things that pretty much scream, 'yes, I am your sister NOT your brother' they'll all get overprotective.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 14, 2008 02:13 pm
Very interesting first chapter, you just make us wonder more and more as each word is read. Good build up, can't wait to see what it's for.
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 14, 2008 12:44 pm
Ah, I thought this story seemed familiar. I remember reading it before. Hope to see new chapters up soon. :)
By the way, in British English pants are underwear and trousers are what Americans would call 'pants'.
Author's Response: Oh, I didn't know that! Thank you for letting me know! :)
Name: shaded reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 14, 2008 12:33 pm
What a great opening chapter. There are many stories start out with Ginny reminiscing about her lost love, but this truly gets into the anguish and heartbreak that Ginny feels from the outset. I like how you've written about Ginny thinking back to when it all started, as it doesn't seem forced. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. :)
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 14, 2008 04:43 am
Ok...I like this and cannot wait to see where you go. That first chapter has me worried that someone does something pretty stupid for her to be hurt like she is in the first chapter. I like this, like I liked your other one. Will the next chapter be them meeting up and what not? Happy writing. :)
Author's Response: Them running into each other will happen soon enough. I promise. :)
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter 1: If Ever A Day Was Perfect on May 14, 2008 01:19 am
funny and cute. Please continue
Name: Nakita reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 13, 2008 08:32 pm
YEAH!!!! I am so happy this story is back!! It has always been on my favorites and now I get more!! You have made me VERY happy!!!
Name: nikisasilverrain reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 13, 2008 06:43 pm
yay for finishing. I like the tone of the story already!
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 13, 2008 05:50 pm
This is a great start! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm extremely intrigued.
Name: ronlover reviewed
Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1) on May 13, 2008 05:37 pm
Very interesting. Keep updating! :D