Name: kieraraelyn reviewed The Beginning of Regret on Jan 28, 2017 12:54 am
I just read this on It kept sounding familiar and I knew that I'd read it before. Then I saw you mention that it was here and I came to take a look an lo, I had read it before and it was on my favorites. But I didn't leave a review when read it the first time. I was bad about that for awhile.

Anyway, I enjoyed your story. There were some scenes I really loved, like when Crabbe and Gotle attacked Ginny and the Pensieve scene afterward. For the most part, I liked your Draco. There were some parts where he was a bit OoC to me. But I've been reading these stories for over 12 years now, so I've built up a notion in my head of who Draco is and it's possibly different from reality. So long as he's mostly right, I can deal with a few minor differences in our notions. And you did get him mostly right. I loved how you portrayed his emotions for Ginny.
Your Ginny was great, too. Her inner angst about her relationship with Draco was great. So - teenager. I remember those thought processes rather well. Kind of embarrassing really.
Anyway, I liked your ending, particularly how Fred and George picking on Draco makes him feel like part of the family. It was cute. I could've done with a bit more of Draco and Ginny; their marriage or proposal would have been nice. All in all, great story.
Name: Anacrusis reviewed Intrusion on a Family Moment on Mar 14, 2015 04:55 pm
Beautiful imagery and writing skills ! It is so hard to find writers that leave the reader begging for more! You've already grasped my attention with your portrayal of Mr Malfoy and Miss Weasley! I cannot wait to finish reading!!

Author's Response: You have no idea how you've made my day! After years of silence, it was wonderful to hear that someone found my fic! Please let me know how you like it! :-)
Name: darkseeker116 reviewed Who's the Fairest One Of All? on Nov 14, 2010 06:16 pm
found it today and love what i've read so far. Can't wait to read more.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed A New Start on Apr 22, 2010 06:21 pm
love the story to pieces!!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Dying Prejudice on Apr 22, 2010 05:46 pm
great chappie!! chappie 9 here i come!!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Confessions of a Traitor on Apr 22, 2010 05:32 pm
love this plot, so far!!!
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed A New Start on Jan 28, 2010 06:06 am
I thought it was wonderful! Amazing job ... if you hadn't mentioned, I never would've knew or believed that was your first fan fiction.
Name: Sporkanator87 reviewed A New Start on Jul 03, 2009 01:43 pm
I loved this story so much! It was very well written!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed A New Start on Jun 30, 2009 10:28 pm
very nice. and cute. i enjoyed it very much.
Name: Padfootedmoony reviewed A New Start on Jan 09, 2009 09:31 pm
amazing job with this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it! :-)
Name: dracois4ever reviewed A New Start on Oct 08, 2008 04:15 am
Excellent story! Well thought out and superbly executed. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this. (I believe that you have left yourself open for a sequel if you chose to) Hope you continue writing, you definately have a knack for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I did leave it open, and I'm thinking about a sequel, though I'm not really sure what the main conflict would be, or who it would focus on (though I'd sure like to make things up to Harry). I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it so much! I have posted a one-shot of chapter 15 from Harry's perspective on HPFF, same penname, and it's called Here's to The Death of My Heart. I couldn't post it here since it doesn't feature Ginny and Draco, but I thought I'd let you know if you were interested! :-)
Name: raistlin89 reviewed A New Start on Sep 27, 2008 07:15 pm
awww. yay a happy ending. great story it was a lot of fun to read!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :-)
Name: raistlin89 reviewed The Beginning of the End on Sep 27, 2008 01:33 pm
love the story so far! but theres just one thing, isnt it the end of the term? therefor it's round summer time rite?? so i dunno if you did this on purpose or whatevr but "thick blanket of snow covered every surface of ground..."
or am i just confused lol.

Author's Response: LOL, it's the end of winter term, just before Christmas holiday. Hope that clears it up for you! Thank you for reading! :-)
Name: raistlin89 reviewed A Fear Impartial to Purity of Blood on Sep 27, 2008 10:22 am
awwwww. i dont know what else to say except im loving this story so far =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love to hear from you! :-)
Name: hidden facade reviewed The Beginning of Regret on Sep 26, 2008 08:43 pm
I really like this story so far, I think you capture Draco and Ginny's character and I understand her internal struggle between Harry and Draco. Love it!

In chapter ten though when Draco was confessing his feelings, I noticed you quoted lines from the movie Chasing Liberty. Just thought maybe you should make sure to put a disclaimer for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!rnrnGood catch on the Chasing Liberty quote; I love that scene. :-) I wasn't sure if I should put a disclaimer since it's not word for word exactly, but I'll put a note on it just in case. Thanks for the advice! :-)
Name: ginnywitch reviewed A New Start on Sep 26, 2008 05:35 pm
awww i'm so sad it's over!!! this was amazing thank you so much! if you can find ti in your heart to write a couple of one shots about what happens later on or the wedding, ect please do! ~a loyal reader

Author's Response: Great idea! We'll see what I come up with. Be sure to check out that one shot of chapter 15 from Harry's POV, though it'll be posted on MNFF and HPFF. Thank you for your support! :-)
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed A New Start on Sep 26, 2008 09:17 am
Oh I would love to see this continue and see them get married and have kids.

I have to say that was great, you wrote it brilliantly!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and it left you wanting more! :-)
Name: tinamarie reviewed A New Start on Sep 26, 2008 07:28 am
Bravo! I am sad to see this story end but also happy to see Draco and Ginny live happily ever after. This story is by far one of the best D/G stories I've read in a while. I have to admit when I saw it on the updates the title didn't catch me and I ended up discovering this jem later on. Thank you for a great D/G journey and I can't wait to read more of your work.

Author's Response: As always, a pleasure! I appreciate all of your support and I'm glad you liked it so much! Thank you! :-)
Name: AutumnKisses402 reviewed A New Start on Sep 26, 2008 04:57 am
Awh, this was such a beautiful story and I'm sad that it's over. It was a good ending though. :) Once again, this was a beautiful story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your encouraging words! :-)
Name: dracois4ever reviewed Tears and Victory on Sep 14, 2008 07:04 pm
Enjoyed this chapter alot, looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :-)
Name: gidge_8 reviewed Neither Can Live While the Other Survives on Sep 09, 2008 08:51 am
Very powerfully written chapter. You did an excellent job of writing the cliff scene. I liked the imagery very much.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad everything came across well, and thank you for your review!
Name: tinamarie reviewed Tears and Victory on Sep 08, 2008 12:28 pm
It looks like they all have a long road ahead of them. I am glad Ginny was stand up about her love for Draco though...I could totally see myself marrying him too!

Author's Response: It will definitely take awhile for things to be normal. He's really turned into a guy we can all love, hasn't he? :-)
Name: tinamarie reviewed As Seen Through Greasy Curtains on Sep 08, 2008 12:14 pm
I cannot reiderate enough on why I am so happy I stumbled upon this story. I love how you intertwine the books with your own version of things. I like how you kept Harry alive, makes me feel happier knowing he's still around. I can't wait to see what the conclusion of your story will bring. Fantastic job!

Author's Response: I always love hearing from you because you always have such wonderful things to say! :-) I feel a little like a copycat of Jo since I made it look like Harry died, but then he didn't, hehe, but I guess the point of fanfiction is to copy all of her crazy imagination!
Name: mahek210 reviewed Tears and Victory on Sep 08, 2008 01:15 am
poor harry feel bad 4 him!!!wld like him 2 have his herione too so tat he lays off ginny!!lolz!!just wanna let u know tat i have enjoyed every moment of ur wonderful story now tat its nearing 2 its end!!good work:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Hehe, he'll find someone else someday, don't worry! I appreciate your review!
Name: hummie reviewed Tears and Victory on Sep 07, 2008 01:36 pm
AHHH *Almost* to the end? Well, i just read this story in one go, and i l-u-v love it. It was perfect. I haven't had that satisfying, gut-wrenching angsty feeling in so long. This story was a real treat. Can't wait for the conclusion!

Author's Response: Haha, yes almost, just one more chapter. I was really going for that reaction! I love those stories that just pull me in and really tear at my heartstrings, so I'm very happy to read your review! Thank you for reading!
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