Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Dying Prejudice on May 30, 2008 04:02 pm
poo on Harry...he made his choice to leave her. Great chapter, I liked the action...That was sorta cuddling. You are making your Draco seem more human which is awesome. Will he loose his tought shell around her and be cold to the others. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Happy writing and I apoligize if I forget to review anything that I read.
Author's Response: No problem! Haha, I'm sure the hardcore D/G shippers of this site like yourself are just screaming for her to give up Harry completely, but he gives the story some much needed conflict. There's got to be someone to get Draco all riled up later. ;-)
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Another Door Shut on May 27, 2008 08:17 pm
i loved pansy and draco's talk. i love her character in this story.
Author's Response: I definitely liked giving her character a little more depth than expected. Thank you!
Name: shaded reviewed
Another Door Shut on May 27, 2008 02:16 pm
The interaction between Pansy and Draco is very realistic; it was great to read. The last line of the chapter was my favourite, though; Draco would /despise/ having to hide, but would do it nonetheless.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree that he would hate hiding, he seems the type to pick fights when he's in control, but otherwise he doesn't seem as confrontational.
Name: adorame06 reviewed
Secret Needs on May 24, 2008 09:23 am
Wow very moving at the end of this chapter, I almost cried myself!! Your are doing a very well job on this story, it doesn't seem rushed at all, yet things are moving along just right! Can't wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response: LOL!
Name: LilyLove reviewed
Secret Needs on May 24, 2008 05:59 am
mmm mmm...good yummy sexy broken bad boy!
Author's Response: Wrong response! I meant to say LOL to this review! To the above review, I wanted to say thank you for reading! I'm glad that I got that response out of you, it was what I was kind of going for!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Secret Needs on May 23, 2008 06:11 pm
For real...Helps with the redeeming of them...If they are broken you can fix them to how you want. The past two chapter's were as lovely as the rest...I want to get to the action...I like how you are slowly building them up together and what not...But I want some long drawn out conversations without either getting angry or interrupted. Happy writing and I hope to see more. :)
Author's Response: D/G conversations soon to come!
Name: Logic reviewed
The Beginning of Regret on May 23, 2008 05:10 pm
I really like your style; I think you've captured the characters' personalities quite well.
Good job, and keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been stressing about capturing their personalities right. :-)
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Fire Meets Ice on May 22, 2008 12:37 am
i like this so far :)
i think you've done a really good job of developing draco and such.
also McGonagell's reactions were good. :)
cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: BelleAmour reviewed
Fire Meets Ice on May 21, 2008 12:50 pm
If I was Draco I wouldn't even want to go in the school for fear of someone seeing me, like Ginny.
I do love your Draco though. How he saw Ginny showing Bill her love and now he'll fall for her. Its developed very well, and its very believable!
Author's Response: Yea, I figured it would give him some nerve to go back to Hogwarts, thank you for reading!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Fire Meets Ice on May 21, 2008 07:24 am
Grr...If you don't mind me saying it...She's an idiot to wait for him...ooo I'm a prize for his victory...what happens if he dies??? Great chapter. I like it. Glad to see that he was cool with his work with Hagrid, if only he lost some of his swagger...But if he did he wouldn't be our Draco. Happy writing.
Author's Response: Haha, It does seem a bit hokey that she's so optimistic that Harry'll return. Little does she know what's waiting for her in later chapters! ;-)
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Confessions of a Traitor on May 19, 2008 10:50 pm
This is a really fantastic story. Its very well written!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading!
Name: dristi reviewed
Confessions of a Traitor on May 19, 2008 09:20 pm
hi, your story is very intriguing and for the first ff, it's beautifully written. pls update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Confessions of a Traitor on May 19, 2008 05:06 pm
Great chapters. I liked them all...I cannot wait for fire and ice to meet...Will they be fireworks? I really hope to see some Fluer and Ginny interaction. Happy writing. :)
Author's Response: Haha, wait and see! And I'm afraid Fluer won't be making an appearance in this tale, but thanks for reading! :-)
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Intrusion on a Family Moment on May 19, 2008 10:10 am
This is a really great start. I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully you won't have to wait long with the amazing turn-around rate on this site!
Name: rebel_angel reviewed
Intrusion on a Family Moment on May 19, 2008 09:59 am
:in awe:
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! :-)
Name: shaded reviewed
The Beginning of Regret on May 19, 2008 07:49 am
What a highly strung first chapter. It's a great start. This is exactly the type of story I'd wished DH would have begun with, so it's great to see it realised in this fic.
The pace is good; fast action is well written, as I could feel that Draco didn't have the time to let all that had happened to sink in. I wonder how he'll react to his parents' deaths once he has the chance to.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This is an amazing first fan fic! I hope that there will be much more to come. :D
Author's Response: I was rather disappointed with Draco's lack of retribution in DH; I was hoping he would play a much larger role. Thus, my story! :-) Thank you for your review, and I hope I continue to raise your expectations with each new chapter!
Name: liquid glass reviewed
The Beginning of Regret on May 19, 2008 03:32 am
Oh my bloody god!
That was so brilliant!
I loved it so much. I can't believe that this is your first fic!
I was blown away!
I'm favoriting this immediately. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support! I'm so glad to have gotten such a positive reaction. :-)
Name: ish reviewed
The Beginning of Regret on May 19, 2008 02:16 am
this is a really great start :) looking fwd to seeing more. poor draco!
Author's Response: Oh I know, Draco does seem to get the short end of the stick, after Harry of course! Thank you for the support!