on Jan 12, 2010 06:42 pm
Again, fantastic work.
So, the Death Eaters managed to use some sort of mind connection to get to him? That's how it seems. Killing him without (almost) any visible marks.
I can almost imagine Ginny waking up after, only to realize that Draco was gone. Or maybe she was still awake, and noticed right away. Oh my, you're making me think. ;P
Can't wait to read more. Which will probably just be a minutes until I continue down the list.
Author's Response: Eh something like that ;) I wanted people to have to wonder at which was reality, and which was the "dream." Thank for your review!!
on Nov 27, 2009 01:52 pm
That was... I don't know.. impressive
I really liked it. It is a powerful story.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
on Mar 11, 2009 07:28 am
I really want the reality to be him happy with Ginny, but I honestly think that the reality is him being tortured...it would make sense that his mind goes to happiness with Ginny in a time like that....
I don't know though. Your stories always make me think...
Author's Response: Thank you, I like it when people are left thinking. It is up to you to choose what is truth here. But yes, when people are in physical pain, they often go back to a happier time in their lives.
on Aug 04, 2008 02:13 pm
with ginny when he wakes up n his bed.
Author's Response: Yes, but that could be the dream bits as well :-P
on Aug 04, 2008 01:21 am
love all ur stories, you're such a great writer. is he really dreaming?? your 'awake' bits were really amusing :) i enjoyed them whilst your 'dream' bits were very powerful. great job xxx
Author's Response: Are you sure? Which one is him awake? Thanks for our review!
on Aug 04, 2008 12:08 am
Wow, that was marvelous. I'm so impressed. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you
on Aug 01, 2008 04:13 pm
Wait a minute. I'm confused. Did he die? Which is the fantasy and which is the reality?
Author's Response: Well, that's the point :-) You're supposed to decide for yourself. I know which one I believe happened, but if I tell you, that would ruin all the fun. Thanks for your review !
Name: liquid glass
on Jul 31, 2008 03:46 pm
for a moment, I couldn't tell which one was reality. But they both were weren't they? Wow... oooh, it just makes me cringe at how great this is. I don't think I have ever seen a story done this way before.
Author's Response: Were they? I was trying to make people think about which ones were real, and which ones were a dream. I won't be telling which is which however :-P
on Jul 30, 2008 09:13 am
gosh it was sweet but soo sad!!!tat line abt draco thinking nd feeling tat finally he made a choice 4 himself even though it was death was very touching!!!very well written!!:)
Author's Response: Thanks you :-)
on Jul 30, 2008 08:55 am
I really like it. good job! ;)
Author's Response: :-D Thanks
on Jul 29, 2008 07:31 pm
awwww this was so adorable and sad. i think you should make it into a whole story that would be fun to read. good job though!
Author's Response: Alas, this is only what it is. Long stories and I never do seem to get a long. Thanks for the review!