Name: darinmeg reviewed Chapter 30 - Father vs. Son on Dec 03, 2011 08:50 pm
Amazing new chapter'
Name: katra reviewed Chapter 30 - Father vs. Son on Dec 03, 2011 08:29 pm
Oh wow, this story is so epic! I just found it today, and I have to say I'm glad I did :)

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm so glad you enjoy my work! Hope you enjoy the ending. (and my apologies for being so late in responding! I must have gotten lost in the Christmas rush. ) :)
Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 30 - Father vs. Son on Dec 03, 2011 07:06 pm
I really like this chapter! I am glad that ginny was able to remember! Aww I'm sad that this is over! I can't wait to read the end :)
Name: ash_of_the_rose reviewed Chapter 30 - Father vs. Son on Dec 03, 2011 12:15 pm
Oh man. So intense! I'm still a bit confused about the effects of the potion and how they were broken, though. Glad to see the good guys win! Can't wait for the next chapter, even though I'll be sad to see the story end.

Author's Response: The reason for why the potion failed will be explained next chapter. I was originally going to put it all in one, but felt that it would fit better in an epilogue. I'm kind of sad to see it end too, but I've been working on this off and on for four years, and I'm eager to move onto other projects. Thanks for being such a loyal reader! Hugs!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Chapter 30 - Father vs. Son on Dec 03, 2011 11:02 am
O what a good chapter! I loved it! Was so glad that Ginny woke up and realized that she had to snap out of it! Yay for Draco saying what needed to be said to his father. I am sure that there is a lot of guilt on his part when thinking about Narcissa. Poor Draco!
Name: iliveilearnilove reviewed Chapter 30 - Father vs. Son on Dec 02, 2011 06:43 pm
Ahhh I was so scared for a second for them, good chapter :)
Name: mustlovecats reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Dec 01, 2011 10:38 pm
I just found this story this evening and it was so amazing that I stayed up till almost 3am to finish reading it. Please tell me that you plan on posting the remaining chapters soon...

Author's Response: LOL. So glad you enjoyed it and that it kept you interested. :) Last parts will be up soon! :)
Name: ishipdrinny reviewed Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences on Nov 15, 2011 10:36 am
its getting good
Name: DwellingInDreams reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Nov 08, 2011 07:52 pm
This story is truly wonderful! I just found it the day before yesterday. I don't typically read WIPs, for fear that the author won't finish; but I've read several of your other stories, and I really like your style. So it seemed worth the risk. ;) And I was not disappointed. I wish I could give a more detailed review; but it might be tedious since I have all 29 chapters to account for! hehe So I'll just say that I love that Ginny was finally able to stand up to Lucius. The last bit with Draco and Ron is brilliant. And I'm holding out for a happy ending - I just can't believe that after all this Ginny wouldn't pull through. I have a few speculations; but I'm eager to see what you've come up with next! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a chance. :) I'm so glad you like it. I think my original outline/plan was for this story to be about fourteen chapters long but I seem to have added to it a bit. The good news is that you won't be waiting long. I've gotten the next chapter back from beta and I hope to finish up the details in the next few days. I know how you feel about WIPs, and I've always sworn to myself to never leave a story unfinished. This one was just so long and complex that it just took a bit longer to weave all the loose-ends and sub-plots together gracefully. Thank you for your lovely feedback.
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Name: SUSY3456 reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Nov 03, 2011 07:53 pm
I'm always waiting for another chapter, even though I'm terrible about leaving reviews. This was great, really, the emotions are high and you did a great job creating the feel of the scenes. Thank you for not giving up on this! I'd hate to have read all these awesome chapters and then be left with no conclusion! You're wonderful, awesome, and I love this story.

Author's Response: There *will* be a conclusion. This story has been very complicated and the emotions made it difficult to write at times, but I won't give up on a story - ever. This story was a huge learning experience for me, and I so appreciate all of you for encouraging me through it.
Name: jaybig reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Nov 03, 2011 12:27 pm
Can't wait for the next chapter!! :) xx

Author's Response: soon... just got it back from beta, so I have a couple of things to fix up. I'm hoping to post soon! So glad you like it!
Name: Erica T reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Nov 01, 2011 10:15 am
This has got to be the most rewarding story I've ever read. Parts of it were tough to get through emotionally, but for the parts that are happy, the tough parts are all the more worth it. Please let there be a happy ending though!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have a tough time reading stories that are continuous angst, and as I was writing, I felt I needed to break it up with giving some reasons why our characters want to carry on. Part of the reason the story took so long at times was because it was emotionally draining to write some chapters that I had to step away and give myself a break. It's definitely an emotional roller coaster. :)
Name: pitzi reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 31, 2011 02:51 am
I've been reading your story with great interest and I'm happy that you are continuing.

I'm really worried about Ginny. I hope the potion didn't work! I'm so looking for a happy ending to this!

But whatever happens I really enjoy your characterization of Draco and Ginny and you also managed to pull Lucius off!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know I made Draco a little out of his normal nasty character, but I really wanted him to be more of a hero on this story. He has so much potential. I was worried throughout that I made Ginny a bit too passive. She's really not. I think of her being more active in but she seems to be cast in situations where she has to sit back and wait. But I am so glad that you like how the characters came out, and thanks for reading!
Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 30, 2011 11:37 pm
I love that last paragraph! I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Awesome! I liked that one too. While I enjoy some animosity between Ron and Draco, I get kind of tired of seeing Ron if he's too unreasonable, and I think Ron has some potential to be more interesting if he can get away from Harry a bit. :) More soon. :)
Name: kyuuka reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 30, 2011 01:20 pm
Very nice! Thank you! I like the bit with the poison. I had forgotten about it and it makes for a nice twist.

Author's Response: Awesome! I really tried to tie up every detail. Glad that you enjoyed! Best wishes!!!!
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 30, 2011 01:32 am
OMG Im actually reading this story after 8 months,and truthfully,i missed it!I loved this,what a great chapter :)) Eagerly waiting for next update,great work!

Author's Response: So glad that you stuck with it! and glad to see you are still enjoying. Best wishes!
Name: isabel24 reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 29, 2011 05:35 am
Loved it! Can't wait to read some more

Author's Response: Hope to post it soon! I'm happy that you like it so far! :)
Name: KarmaKiller20 reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 28, 2011 09:00 am
loved it!! but a wee short :( what's gonna be the effects on ginny?? i gotta know :'-(

Author's Response: I thought folks preferred short chapters! LOL. This chapter and the next were originally one chapter, but it was a bit too long. I'm going over it now for posting.
Name: readhead1755 reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 28, 2011 06:12 am
I haven't reviewed in a while but I wanted to let you know I still eagerly await each and every chapter update!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're still with me! This was such a long, complex plot that it was a real challenge at times, and got really exhausting for the last few chappies. I learned a lot and, hopefully, you all can see how my writing has improved over the course of this story. :)
Name: ditzy_cadet reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 27, 2011 08:22 pm
Yay for the update! What a great chapter. I'm very curious to find out what happens with the memory potion and what not. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! This one was fun. And I love a good cliffhanger. Working on the final touches for the next one now.
Best wishes!
Name: ash_of_the_rose reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 27, 2011 07:13 pm
This chapter had me tied up in knots! Please post again soon! I can't wait to find out what happens.

Author's Response: It is a good cliffie, isn't it? I almost posted it as one big chapter, but I had to break it up because it was just too long. I won't keep you waiting too long, I promise. :)
Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 29 - The Fire Within on Oct 27, 2011 06:32 pm
OH MY GOD this is so fucking good. Oh my god. The old Ginny Weasley locking herself away; BRILLIANT touch, I'm really hoping that's a hint!!!

AHHH PLEASE update soon I'm freaking out here! I love love love the image of Draco in that last scene ahhhhh!

:D



bee245

Author's Response: I think that this is my favorite review of all time. :) Putting finishing touches on the next chapter now. And I'm so glad you like Draco in that scene. I wanted him to be totally hot there. Glad I got it right. :)
Name: mkooke reviewed Chapter 28 - Choices on Sep 16, 2011 04:57 pm
you need to finish this!!! its by far the best thing on here

Author's Response: Well, since you put it *that* way. :) Should have next chapter back from beta soon. Hopefully the ending will live up to expectations. :D
Name: ditzy_cadet reviewed Chapter 28 - Choices on Sep 14, 2011 07:27 pm
I am obsessed! Just read the whole thing within the past few days and it is really a great story. Update soon. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: next chapter is already at beta! I am soooo happy that you are enjoying it! thanks so much!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 28 - Choices on Sep 13, 2011 10:49 am
oh jeeze. i hate lucius. update soon.

Author's Response: Next chapter is already off to beta! :) And Lucius gets even worse. Funny... but I actually toned him down a bit because of my reviews. bwahahahaha (that is my evil laugh) :)
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