Name: scentasia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 29, 2010 03:56 am
Aww, that was so sweet. the story was beautifully written and i loved the plot!And the ending couldn't have been more perfect.It made me smile.
Just as he was about to make a smug and sly remark to Draco he saw him turn to Ginny and ask, “I now have three pieces, are there more to this puzzle that I can expect?”
Ginny’s face washed from white to bright pink in about a nanosecond and she replied in a shaky voice, “This puzzle has many pieces that may not make a pretty picture.”
“Hmm,” Draco spoke with a soft smirk and small twinkle in his eye, “I believe I’ll be the judge of that if you don’t mind.”
As Blaise and Luna silently slipped away they heard Ginny respond, “Maybe together we can try to make the pieces fit.”
Author's Response: This was the first fanfiction story I ever wrote and when I go back and read it now I still like it, so it's nice to know a few years later that others think so too. I had a lot of fun writing this, but as you know, it needs Draco's voice as well. I really liked the idea of Ginny trusting her heart and fate to the whim of the gods, so to speak, and I wish canon Draco had been allowed to be a little more open to other things in life that might have allowed him to get close to someone. But of course, it has to be Ginny. Thanks for letting me know what you think.
Name: goobydoo reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 29, 2009 05:56 am
beautiful and very suspenceful
Author's Response: Ah, bless you. You have restored my faith that this story will actually get read once it fell off the new release page.
I'm sincerely happy that you enjoyed and and am grateful for your kindness in reviewing. Wow, that sounded rather pitiful, but really I'm thankful.
Name: silver rose reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 18, 2008 02:07 pm
how sweet...haha..love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! It makes me happy to make others happy. My first posting and everyone has been so sweet.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 18, 2008 10:12 am
ahhh this is sooo cute! great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your supportive words!
Name: Adelagia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 18, 2008 03:10 am
Well done! It was nice to see them form a bond gradually and quietly just from sitting with their best friends. And Luna was very sweet.
Author's Response: It's really exciting to receive praise from one of the writers I'm very fond of. Still wishing for more 'Homecoming'...sigh. Thank you, as my first posted fic, I'm rather happy to have such kind and sweet reviews so far.
Name: Parvati_Felton reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 01:40 pm
This was such a sweet story. I loved it! Blaise and Luna were extremely cute, and I really enjoyed the unspoken interest between Draco and Ginny. I hope you continue to write some more stories on them :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your sweet review. I usually like for there to be some unspoken connection between the two. It's part of what makes the D/G pairing possible in my world. They may not be canon, but I firmly believe they could have been with only a few minor adjustments. Hence, fanon.
Name: Imaiya reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 10:02 am
This was a very sweet story :) I would have loved to have seen Draco's character a bit more, but overall the characters and the plot were geat.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. There's a Draco POV in the works as we speak.
Name: gidge_8 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 06:28 am
Very sweet!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm happy to see such lovely reviews.
Name: starry_laa reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 06:26 am
That was wonderful and I particularly loved the Blaise/Luna bits
Author's Response: Those parts were fun to write/imagine. I could just see them frolicking in the forest looking for Merlin knows what.
Having characters that don't have a strict canon characterisation gives you some freedom to bring in elements that you might not get otherwise. They're probably my second favourite pairing.
Name: ginnywitch reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 05:46 am
very nice =]
i always love fanfics where it shows ginny as an artist of some kind because she has always seemed to me to have that passion in her soul. passion plus darkness has a way of equaling beauty if the person knows how to love and isn't too twisted.
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more. I'm writing a companion fic from Draco's POV that sees that as well.
When I read the prompt for this challenge this idea immediately came to me and I wrote it within two hours. The idea just seemed to work for me at that moment.
Name: mahek210 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 05:40 am
awwwww so cuteee!!!loved how u have detailed the feelings tat ginny is feeling!!it is a very believable story!!i usually like dialogues between main characters than all the other details but this was just perfect!!gud work:)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a bit nervous about my characterisation so I guess that came out as very little dialogue. I'm writing a Draco POV companion that fills the story in a bit. I'm really glad you liked the story.
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 17, 2008 05:15 am
gosh so cute :) love this
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you found this cute.