Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 29, 2008 02:08 pm
LOL! Brilliant! I was reading this in the sitting room and trying to stop myself from giggling out loud - my parents would seem to think I'm not doing my homework on the computer that way. ;)
I love this story! It's great. I especially like how Hermione and Ron are blowing up in confusion at Draco's presence at their table, but Ginny just looks at Draco, considering the benefits of continuing with him.
I especially like how you haven't made Draco into this idealistic character - he still blushes when asking Ginny out formally - it's one of my fave parts. Of course the kiss is cute and the part that Hermione is horrified by Draco grabbing Ginny's bum; I can just imagine the high-pitched tone of voice..
This will definitely be put onto my faves list.
Author's Response: I think its great that you were reading this instead of doing homework, because I wrote it instead of doing assessments for uni. Procrastination brings out the best in fiction :p
And I'm glad you like the characterisation - I like to think of it as my specialty. Thanks for the great review!
Name: bee245 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 29, 2008 07:29 am
haha! that was cute! :D
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Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 05:08 pm
Uhm. I love this. :D
Name: contextual reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 04:40 pm
Your description was perfect: short and sweet :) I also liked Harry's little cocoa-marshmallow aside!
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 02:01 pm
aww hahha that was cutee. too bad it wasnt a whole story that would have been fun to read, good job though!
Author's Response: I would have liked to construct a background, but I get these ideas for scenes such as this one, write it, and figure I'll finish it later. In the meantime I've written another scene, and then another. Now I have many, many cute little scenes on my computer, so I figured I'd attempt to post them all as short stories and while I was polishing them up, if a background occured, I'd write it then. Anyway, if you liked this, have a look at my other story (its quite a bit longer) and keep an eye out for new stuff I post. There will hopefully be a lot.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 11:33 am
Haha. Very cute. There were a few grammatical and word-usage changes that I would make, but other than that -- really nice!
Author's Response: *blushes* grammar and spelling are not my strong point, and I have a thing for commas. To be honest I felt this one was too short to get a beta. But other than that, glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Name: Weasel reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 05:03 am
that was great..short simple..sweet
Name: Lynnamae reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 03:41 am
Heehee that was good and sweet :)
Name: kymom reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 28, 2008 03:40 am
I loved this! D/G/H/Hr/R were all very true to canon, but you gave them an extra boost as well. Loved the humor and saucy Ginny, it was terrific.
Thank you.