Have you abandoned this one? It's so good!
I love this beginning. Your writing is excellent, and you really do have awesome descriptions. Not to mention I'm loving the premise!
Author's Response: Thank you for all of the praise, Leigh! It's doing wonders to my ego, haha. =]
I like it very much! It's a very good start!
I like Ginny very much. I could totally relate to her as a harrased traveler, and I love way she's shaping out to be. Independent,witty, ironic. I like it.
I'm intrigued as to why she'd sever all ties with her family, and I hope you'll explore that in the future. Draco sounds like a tough cookie! I can't wait to see what will happen once D and G collide! Update soon!
Author's Response:I'm happy to hear that you could relate to her travelling horrors, seeing as most of this chapter involved her going from place to place! And I definitely plan to review her background (and Draco's) in greater detail; the loose ends will disappear soon enough! A new chapter should be up soon and I hope you enjoy it just as much! Thanks for your review!
Hey now, we're off to an interesting start! Looking forward to seeing what happens. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope to have a new chapter up soon! =]
Promising! As a big fan of Ginny-and-Draco-in-the-Big-Bad-world-of-Bussinness stories, I think I'm going to enjoy yours :)
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! I'm hoping to convey a strong business aspect in this fic, since that will be their primary focus to start, so I hope you enjoy the chapters to come! Thank you!
interesting begining. keep writing, please
Author's Response: No worries, I will definitely keep writing! Thank you!
oooh this definitely has potential to continue (understatement I know as there are a lot of loose ends). Looking forward to reading more although a bit more description will be most appreciated!! =]
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! There will definitely more detail to come; I was just itching to post the first chapter and that seemed like a good place to end it, for now.
I really like it so far. You have hinted at the background of why ginny is there enough not to be annoyed, by her being in America and liveing as a muggle well stayin true to her. As well as dealing with her connection to her family or in this case her lack of one by haveing her missing them even after a good deal of time has pasted, but with a reason or reasons even if they aren't completely clear at this time besides her fierce need for independence as to why she isn't in contacted with them. so in short you have given enough background on her to keep us happy and intrigued well not haveing it be the main point of intreste of the chapter but rather a beliveable frist person view of her life as it is now and the situation she is dealing with. I also have to say that I enjoyed you haveing them come into contacted though such a round about but still beliveable manner. Though there wasn't alot of draco you did mannged to stay in charter with him as well and I am looking forward to future secens with him as well as learning his back story as well as there really wasn't any mention of it in this chapter. In the end I was very impressed with this frist chapter and thought it was more like reading the start of a really good novel then that of a good fanfiction. You have taken this and made it truly your own without takeing away from the orginal work or at least i think so.^_^ the best of luck to you and looking vrey much so to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, what a fantastic review! I'm so happy to see that you enjoyed my fic this much! I love all of the details you reviewed, it's great to have insight into the reader's mind and I'm glad that everything pleased you so much. I'll be sure to put in more of Draco's background as he becomes a bigger character in the story, don't worry! Thanks very much for all of the praise!
Ooh, this is a great start. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm assuming that Ginny's got to return to England, as she'll be the only person that could leave to be the emissary at such short notice.
I like how you've kept Ginny's reason for leaving the UK hidden - it's definitely got me intrigued.
I hope that there'll be an update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, is it that obvious? Well, you've hit it on the mark, and I hope that you enjoy reading the eventual meeting just as much! I'm very happy to hear that you are intrigued by Ginny's past -- I wasn't entirely positive if I had given enough away to catch anyone's eye, so thanks for adding that review!
hi, the beginning sounds very interesting and promising...
...pls update soon...
Author's Response: Hey there! I'm glad the beginning interested you! I'm trying to get another chapter up soon, I'm just very picky about what I want to say (it makes for a long editing process!). Thanks for the review!
Oooohh very interesting! i'm loving the idea so far, good luck!!
xx
Author's Response: Thanks for the well wishes, I'm sure I'll need the luck soon enough! I hope the coming chapters keep you intrigued! =]
Very cute.
It has a lot of promise
:D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear that some of the "cuteness" came across in such a short chapter. =]