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Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 29, 2008 11:23 pm
Lemon cakes, aye? Better than chocolate? I can kinda see what she means...
Name: ZSF reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 29, 2008 10:23 pm
Wow, this story is so GOOD! I never would've thought that two authors writing different characters would work well - it would require that they share the same sense of humor for the banter to work - but you guys have done really well with it! I'm curious as to how the writing really goes on. Do you actually write different lines, or what?

Author's Response: We actually DO write the different lines. We use Google documents - that lets the authors edit in real time, so I can watch Myn write Draco's lines as she's doing it. The she tags me in an instant messenger, and I write Ginny's response. It's REALLY fun. :D
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 29, 2008 01:00 pm
I agree with Draco that the lemon filling would make tea more interesting. Can't wait for another update.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 29, 2008 12:27 pm
Ooooh, seems like Draco can't keep his mind out of the gutter. Great D/G interaction.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 29, 2008 11:57 am
Loved the witty banter. Great protrayal of Draco and Ginny.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 29, 2008 04:29 am
hahah. this is great. i'm falling in love. haha. update soon!
Name: VegaBlack reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 28, 2008 04:12 pm
Hehehe this is hilarious! The banter is just perfect, can't wait to keep reading :)
Name: Adelagia reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 28, 2008 03:54 pm
Hee, the repartee is great, biting but with a touch of familiarity, and it is so much fun to read.
Name: Kalira reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 28, 2008 01:58 pm
Haha, smearing himself with lemon filling. That would definitely make tea far more interesting than usual.
Name: Embellished reviewed Not Attractive. Nope. on Dec 28, 2008 01:36 pm
I just had the chance to read what you've posted so far, and I am thoroughly enjoying it. It's VERY funny. I just may have to start reading the rpg!

Author's Response: And our nefarious plan has worked! *evil laugh*
Name: SpiffyDee reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 27, 2008 08:13 am
Yay! My favourite part of si_muove, now on yet another site! It's like two scoops of d/g in every visit to the computer. You guys totally and completely rock.

Author's Response: We're just happy to know that someone reads the rpg besides us! Thanks for the review!
Name: Kalira reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 27, 2008 05:51 am
I love the bantering, it looks like this story is going to be a lot of fun.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 27, 2008 03:47 am
great job! i really like this story and i'm interested in where it goes! update soon!
Name: slitherhither reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 26, 2008 10:00 pm
For fear of losing all control over my time I've held out on reading si_muove, but you two may have just convinced me otherwise! Well done.

Author's Response: *evil laugh* Our plans have worked!
Name: lookwhatidid reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 26, 2008 09:01 pm

I am enjoying this fic very much so far; soon won't be soon enough for another update! What really drew me in was the personality involved, especially with Ginny. I love that she is smart and even a tad sarcastic, certainly not to be overpowered by Draco. But her simplistic morals still seem to be intact, which (to me) are a huge part of her character.

I also truly adore the plot and what was written for the RPG. This is a very exciting bit, and I'm am very much looking forward to what's next! =]

Name: Adelagia reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 26, 2008 08:19 pm
I love that you've given us the backstory on the Quidditch jersey/colour exchange. Their banter, as usual, is wonderful.
Name: Adelagia reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 08:08 pm
Eee! It's Bunty! :D I enjoyed in particular the mix-up on who Mister Malfoy was, and am looking forward to more.
Name: shaded reviewed Getting More Comfortable on Dec 26, 2008 06:28 pm
It's brilliant having both Ginny & Draco's points of views written in the same narrative. I guess that by reading the rpg I've forgotten how unique this style is in fanfics in general. It's very amusing to know of both their thoughts as the story progresses. In fact, I'm glad that everyone is asleep right now, or I'd be shot odd looks as to why I'm giggling at my computer screen. :D

I noticed how easy it is for Ginny to open up to Draco about things close to her heart; things that I don't think she'd readily tell other friends of hers. I mean the fact that the sorting hat offered to put her into Slytherin and the rather sombre part at the end of the chapter where she is clearly put out that someone - Harry probably - has mentioned that she's so complex that no one can understand her. *huggles Ginny* I'm glad Draco hinted at the end there that he, the Slytherin, would not give up so easily on someone like her. It's amusing how he is hinting but not actually going to move in on Ginny, since she'll be very difficult to replace as the Ministry Liaison. I'm glad that at least for this fic, I know that they're going to get their happy ending - and how as well!

These two chapters were great fun to read. I hope there'll be more lovely D/Gness up soon!
Name: shaded reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 06:08 pm
Lol, brilliant! Not even an hour in each other's company before they start looking at each other as prospective interests, even if it is subconsciously and or involuntary. *grins* I can't wait till Ginny meets Bunty. :D Should be fun, methinks.

I'd like to say that I love the D/G interaction on the RPG. I must admit that I don't review on livejournal, but I do very much enjoy reading - especially the D/G posts, of course.

Author's Response: I'm glad to know you're reading. We wonder, sometimes if there's anyone out there... Thanks for the review!
Name: seegrim reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 05:12 pm
*giggles*

WOOT! Yay!

So yeah, I really enjoyed this first look into the searching of Malfoy Manor. I love the whole Mr. Malfoy confusion and the resulting conversation.

I love me some good d/g. Thanks for providing it.
Name: psyche reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 04:51 pm
Nice story! Do update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Name: GiiN_Weasley_22 reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 04:05 pm
Lovely! :)
Name: ReignOfSlytherin reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 02:06 pm
You have represented Draco perfectly, right down to the snobby House Elf. I love it. Great work.
Name: joey101 reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 01:24 pm
wao so glad to read ur stories again...great first chapters! update soon
Name: DG4life reviewed The First Meeting on Dec 26, 2008 12:45 pm
wonderful :)
i love the banterful conversation between them, never fails to put a smirk on my face!
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