Name: maggums_xo reviewed
My Dearest on Jan 24, 2009 05:21 pm
I love it
:)
it's perfect
Name: I dream of draco reviewed
My Dearest on Jan 22, 2009 02:56 pm
That's really sweet! I like it a lot. I like poetry that rhymes and I really like the rhythm of the last three stanzas. :D
Name: shaded reviewed
My Dearest on Jan 17, 2009 03:32 pm
Brilliant! ^_^ Kudos for not only writing a very expressive poem, but also making it rhyme! I bow down to your writing skills! ;D
I liked the rhythm of the poem; the short lines, when read, sound as though Draco is desperate to let Ginny know how he feels inside, to explain that he left Ginny for her own good.
Two lines in particular stuck out, as they show how very insightful Draco is; how he knows that Ginny could not be happy with him if away from her family.
They are the future to which you toast,
I'd never steal your sun my love
I hope that you'll be posting more of your writing here. I'll be keeping an eye out, for sure. :)