Name: Lynnamae reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 02:54 pm
Wooo! Thanks for the update. Loved it!
Author's Response: No problem! Thanks for the review :D
Name: marinamermaid reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 12:42 pm
Thank you so much for updating. Good for Ginny she got her shag and is putting pressure on Draco too. It's obvious he loves but men are so AGHHHH!!! Great job as always and I wait with much anticipation for the next update xxx
Author's Response: Ginny is using her womanly wiles. :) Thanks for the review!
Name: laurelin reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 12:39 pm
I loved this chapter and I cannot wait to read more! Draco needs to realize he can't have Serena making his decisions for him and get back with Ginny! And Serena is also still talking about a little sister or brother, so obviously she still wants to see them together ;D
Author's Response: Draco definitely needs to make a decision. And Serena is a little girl who doesn't know quite what she wants...a lot like her father. :D Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 11:51 am
YES!!!!!!! THEY SHAGGED! THEY SHAGGED! THEY SHAGGED! And it was so, so yummy! I'm so glad that they finally resolved the sexual tension! Draco should really make a decision. I mean, he can't have everything. He needs to realize that he can either have Ginny and let Serena get used to it, or he can not have Ginny and watch her fall in love with someone else. Honestly, if he rejects Ginny, I hope Serena comes home to him one day and tells him that "mummy's got a new boyfriend." Then, he would realize how much he gave up. And I'm really excited that you updated so soon! I'm eager for this story to finish, because I really want to know the finale, and also because my new D/G converts are begging me for more stories, except they will only read finished ones. So, if you finish this, I can recommend this to them. :) Anyways, great job on this chapter. This story is so amazing, and one of my personal classics that I will re-read over and over again. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I'm working on bringing this to an end, tying up all the loose ends. Yes, they finally resolved the sexual tension. Let's just hope that without it, they can now come to some final decisions. :) Thanks so much for the review. I'll try and update quickly, but it will probably be a little bit longer than this update. I've got a ton of school work piling up on me.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 11:30 am
oh i love it. a lilttle bit of family, a little bit couple time. lovely. draco is cheeky with his innuendos but he just needs to pull his head out of his rump and just marry her. im dying here. the wait is killing me. great chapter though. sex on a table, never gets old no matter how many times i read it. fantastic chapter. cant wait for the update.
Author's Response: LOL, Draco's head was most definitely elsewhere for the last scene. Draco is a complex person, who now has to do a lot of thinking. :D Thanks for the review.
Name: sparkling reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 11:18 am
I"m so glad that Ginny left the room with that information for Draco to ponder? From now on the way he does & says things to Ginny will determine how much he really wants this to work between them & how much he truly loves & appreciates Ginny in his life.
I just hope that after this 3 day getaway with Ginny he makes the right decision? because when its over and nothing said? he will never get another chance?. no matter how much you love someone, you do have your dignity!.
P.S. THE LOVE SEEN WAS AMAZING BY THE WAY!
Author's Response: Actions speak louder than words. That is very true. You'll have to wait and see about Draco. Thanks for the review!
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 11:10 am
Did not expect that kitchen sex to happen... but then again, that's why plotbunnies are just used to pass the time till the real events of the story commences. very nicely done, esp the way Ginny gave him that "ultimatum". it was subtle & not over-the-top, which is refreshing to read (sorry, I'm so used to Hysterical!Ginny that I keep forgetting that she can play calm & collected as well). I can't wait to see how you'll execute the final chapters...
It was great discussing ideas w/ you. If you need help, you know where to find on Twitter. Take care always.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I can still surprise you. :D I don't like hysterical!Ginny so I tend not to write her. I will say that she is needed every now and then as a plot device though. And thank you very much for all your help with this.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Prologue on Feb 12, 2010 10:19 am
Yeah, right!
You forgot one thing: It's CLASS!!!
;P
Seriously the general theory of hospitality and turism is no fun at all!!!
But i did love the chapter, whenever the professor isn't looking i'm reading the chapter again and thinking up what to write in the reviews!
^;^
GREAT smut!!!
kisses
Author's Response: Some classes can be fun, I don't know about that one though.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 09:22 am
he needs to get a brain. serena should not control their love lives. i understand that she may be upset, but they won't be leaving her even if they did get a divorce. so seriously, they should just get together. haha.
Author's Response: I'm working on it. They're two very tricky, stubborn characters. :) Thanks for the review!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 09:13 am
Great chapter. Glad that they have talked some and that they are getting together on parenting Serena so she won't be as spoiled. Cannot wait to see who her guard is, if its anyone that she knows from school or some of his old friends. I noticed how they didn't use protection, so is another going to be on the way? I certainly hope so. How much more is there going to be, because you have a whole lot of desserts to go through still. Happy writing.
Author's Response: No babies. Or maybe babies. I won't tell. As for how much, I would say four maybe five more chapters. We're quickly coming to the end, and I plan on trying up all the loose ends into a nice pretty bow. :D As much as I would love for this to go on forever, I also have other stories I would love to start posting. But I only do one chaptered fic at a time. Thanks for the review!
Name: ginnyd reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 08:23 am
Oh I just love the way you leave us on the edge, it really makes us want to come back for more. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: :D I'm glad to have you all coming back for more. Thanks for the review!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 08:22 am
=O
I'm shocked at the chapter and myself.
I was so entranced by the story I completely forgot to review!!!
I'll be reading it again as soon as i'm back from class.
But this chapter is absolutely wonderful.
And i loved Serena in it.
She was just as perfect and manipulative as her grandmother Cissa.
=D
Thank you so much for this.
kisses
Author's Response: I thought you might like it, especially with the smut. :) Hope you're having fun in class.
Name: Sophiebelle02 reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Feb 12, 2010 05:26 am
See, I think that's why I can read your UST. Because who doesn't love a little tension when it leads to that. Hmm...Draco on a diningroom table.
Author's Response: Lol, I was very tempted to tell you that it would soon be resolved sexual tension. But I figured the update would be up soon, so you would see for yourself. :D
Name: Sophiebelle02 reviewed
Passion Fruit Tart on Feb 11, 2010 05:16 pm
Normally UST drives me crazy. But you do it so well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: :) Thank you. I don't think I've ever gotten a compliment for that before.
Name: Clarisse reviewed
Prologue on Feb 07, 2010 05:53 am
I found this story a few weeks back and made myself read it, after midnights, to catch up. I totally love it. And can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be up soon enough.
Name: cindy reviewed
Passion Fruit Tart on Feb 06, 2010 04:54 am
aww..nice chapter..i m so into this story!do update soon=D
Author's Response: The update will be up by next week. The next chapter is in the final revision stage with my beta. Thanks for the review!
Name: scubarang reviewed
Passion Fruit Tart on Feb 02, 2010 05:04 pm
Too short!! But I'll be okay, don't worry.
I am getting as frustrated with Draco as Ginny is. He needs to make up his mind on what he wants. Though I understand where he's coming from I really get the feeling that he's being rather cowardly. As much as the girls saw the love in Ginny, I see in Draco. Ginny is being rather oblivious about it. Perhaps if she wised up she might use a different tact in dealing with Draco.
Anyway, good chapter, but too short. I need more. And soon. ^_^
Author's Response: Remember that thing I said about the lemon meringue, well the next chapter will be lemon meringue. And Ginny isn't as oblivious as she seems. The next chapter should come soon-ish. I plan on working on it tomorrow and sending it off to Leigh, at least that's what I hope will happen. I'm bogged down with work.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Chocolate Truffles on Feb 02, 2010 06:19 am
Haha! I love this chapter, and you were right: I love Serena. She's such a combination of Ginny and Draco. *snorts* Quite the mouth on her.
I like Lucius' talk with Ginny, but this line confused me: “Do you know that some animals eat their young to protect them?” -- How can your protect your young by eating them? o_O
Hehe, I really like your Pansy: "She holds conversation as well as a table". Hehe! Also, you're very good at making me hate your female characters, namely Molly and Tracey Davis. Draco better well break up with her! *gives you a pointed look*
Overall, a really good chapter, Ann. Fully of humour, sweetness, and craziness.
~Lia
Author's Response: She's quite the smart six year old. The animals eat their young because they think they're better off dead than out in the world. You'll have to read on to find out what's going on with Tracey Davis. I will say that if you hate Tracey now, you are going to abhor her, want her dead, very soon. You'll see. :)
Name: Incognito reviewed
Triple Chocolate Fudge Brownies on Feb 02, 2010 05:10 am
Boo to Molly! Ginny's brothers were awesome at least. Very content that Ron is not an arsehole in this.
Ginny is entirely vindicated in her anger and taking out said anger and frustration on her mother; however, I am left wondering "where do we go from here?" Will we see Molly and Arthur again (any time soon)?
I am very excited to see how this will pan out. I am deliberately taking my time to savour your delectable and indelible scenes. *licks fingers* Onward I go!
~Lia
Author's Response: None of the brothers are bad, don't worry about that. Percy gets annoying but you'll see. You will see Molly and Arthur again soon, just very later on. It's going to take a lot of times for those wounds to heal. And Molly does have her own twisted reasoning behind what she did, which you will find out later as well. I just thought naughty thoughts with that ending. Thanks for reviewing.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Passion Fruit Tart on Feb 01, 2010 10:48 pm
Thank you so much for the update :) I actually read this several days ago but realized today I hadn't let you know how
wonderful it was.
I loved the interaction between Draco, Ginny and Serena in this chapter even when they were arguing about raising Serena. The scene with Ginny and Serena in her bedroom was nice. Serena can be a handful but you convey really well how
much she loves her daddy and you could see how much she loves her mommy here.
I love their banter throughout this, it was witty and flirty-
"The things required for an island vacation are rather miniscule," Ginny said, an imitation of Draco's smirk appearing on her lips when he glared at her.
"Are you planning on doing that all weekend?" snapped Draco.
"I don't know what you're talking about," Ginny said innocently. "I'm not doing anything."
^^^^
"I suppose you have no urges to shag me then?" asked Draco after a moment of silence.
"What?"
"The last time you played in water and talked about your brother, we shagged and conceived Serena." Draco raised an eyebrow. "Having any of those urges?"
Ginny couldn't help but to laugh. "No, I can't say I am."
"Liar," Draco murmured, his eyes flashing. "I can read you like a book, Ginevra. Don't forget it."
Suddenly uncomfortable, Ginny said, "I better go get dressed."
"Don't mind me," Draco replied with a grin.
***************
I think I know what Draco was going to say when he said "Not for—" or at least I know what I am hoping he was going to say.
I can't wait until the second part of their vacation. I know Ginny doesn't want casual sex, but I would LOVE to read about some 'sex on the beach' - and not the drink :)
Author's Response: You'll get to see what he was going to say in the next chapter. Ginny will bring it up. I know that a lot of people have pretty much hit the nail on the head in regards to that though. So, I have no doubt that you probably did as well. LOL. I love your sex on the beach line. It was hilarious. I'm glad you liked the Serena/Ginny interaction too as it is very important to my story. Thanks for the review!
Name: Incognito reviewed
Strawberry Cupcakes with Sprinkles on Feb 01, 2010 12:46 pm
Draco is such a gentleman; however, he is also vindictive too -- he likes to rub salt in open wounds. Lol. I still can't believe Molly did that. Argh, I want to throttle her. And Arthur let her do it? *shakes head* It's ridiculous. I cannot wait to see Ginny reunited with her daughter. Wonderful chapter -- am onto the next. ^^
~Lia
Author's Response: He does have his moments, but I do find him to be a little OOC. Although, I also find that this is how I would envision Draco to be considering his circumstances and age. Some might disagree. The reuniting comes soon.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 01, 2010 12:37 pm
Adorable. I have a feeling that Serena is a hellion. She's a Draco and Ginny combined? Dear God. Run for the hills! Very very cute chapter. I love Narcissa as the evil grandmother. I also like the name Xavier. That was the name of one of my exes (I have too many exes).
I like how we're being built up for the huge tension balloon that is forming. I'm assuming the customer who came in and said "Weasley?" is Draco. Mwa ha ha. He's gonna be so pissed at her, and Ginny should be furious with her mother when she finds out. She should disown her!
Lovely chapter. Now on to the next one. I can't wait to read the D/G interaction. ^_^
~Lia
Author's Response: Oh, you'll love Serena, and probably hate her a little too in the later chapters. You'll see why though. Keep in mind, she's six years old. Narcissa and Lucius are very important to this story, at least, more important than the Weasley parents.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Prologue on Feb 01, 2010 08:22 am
So, I finally sat down to read this, and now I am being carted off for lunch. Damnable boyfriend.
I like he opening, the flashback. Draco is uncharacteristically nice, but characteristically Draco: "... I can get one of your living brothers." Hehe, he can be such an emotionally retarded boy. I can definitely understand Ginny's need to lose herself and to use Draco to do it. He does tell her not to tempt him, so it is all her doing. Bravo, Gin. ^_~
I also like how this is entirely from Ginny's PoV. I'm assuming, at some point, we will see Draco's. I guess I will have to read on to find out.
Molly should be shot and killed. What a bitch! The baby is still a part of Ginny. It's not like Ginny was raped, and the baby is a reminder of some past tragedy/horror. Wench!. Argh, I'm going to despise your Molly, aren't I? I can't believe Arthur let her do this. Please tell me that he regrets what he did. Arthur is the reasonable one.
I am also curious if Ron knows as well -- what Molly did. I doubt it. I have a feeling that only Molly an Arthur know.
You set up a good mystery, and I cannot wait to R&R when I get back. ^_^
~Lia
Author's Response: No, you probably won't like Molly. She does have a reason behind what she does, not a very strong one, but one nonetheless. You'll see eventually, and then you can make your own judgements. As for Draco's POV, yes, you'll see it once or twice. But this is mostly from Ginny's POV. Boys are silly!
Name: firefireice22 reviewed
Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 31, 2010 10:47 pm
i'm loving every bit of this storryy! keep writing please!
Author's Response: I will. Thanks!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Prologue on Jan 31, 2010 05:41 pm
YAY!
Double YAY!
No more bunch of homework!
over 2000 words for Buttercup!
=DDDD
I'm so happy!!
kisses
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad.