I really like the plot of this story. Lily and Scorpius are really lovely characters, and Rose has a very good depth also. I really enjoyed the advice that Lucius gave Draco. It's very appropriate. I truly hope that Astoria doesn't get hurt. She's an innocent party in this whole mess and I find myself sympathizing with her very strongly, even though she's only been involved indirectly. However, you've portrayed her so well with things like Scorpius's opinion of her, and the description of her in the picture in Draco's office. Nicely done.
Author's Response: I know, I actually love Astoria. I figure she's gotta have something if Draco married her. I'm glad you sympathize with her because I certainly do. Thanks so much for your review!
This chapter was hard to get through. I'm very happy Draco finally knows why she left. But, alas, I see it has been over a year since this fic was updated. Should we mark it as abandoned? I have enjoyed this story, and if that is the case, it is a shame.
Author's Response: I am crossing my fingers that it is not abandoned. I just wrote two new chapters the other day that my friend is editing for me, and I hope I can get the last four out before my classes resume and my life is too busy to think :) I am sorry it's been over a year, but conveniently, it was your review that made me realize that and I started writing it again the day I saw your review. Thanks for the wake-up call. It should be 29 chapters total, 24 and 25 are being edited right now. Again, thank you for your reminder for me to get on this story and finish it properly.
What a way to leave it. You sure have a knack for leaving things hanging. Well, I've finally caught up, and am now feeling rather depressed. I can't really see how things will work out, but I hope they do.
Author's Response: It'll all work out somehow. I promise that. I just can't promise WHEN I'll have those chapters out next, but there are only five left... :)
wow, I know I havent read this for awhile, but didnt know I would miss out this much!
I love Travis + Rose pairing!!!! LOL, totally loving every second of it. I'm happy to see Rose being happy nad Lily with Scrop! Now if there is such a thing as happy ending for the older generation...
Lucius in this chapter is a bit different than the Lucius we know in HP Series, then again, he shoudl be a chnaged man after all that happened to him. I agree with him too, just b/c you discover the ugly truth, doesnt mean you have to go back and screw up everything that you have build up now. What's done is done, but what we could do is to shape the future :)
Hope everything is going well for your work/classes! I knwo midterms are coming up, so good lucK!
Author's Response: Thanks! Good luck to you too! And I'm really glad you liked how it's turning out!
Loved it! I really hope Draco doesn't listen to Lucius. I want their marriages to break up even though it'll be horribly devastating for their kids and families. I think that they deserve a happy ending with each other.
Author's Response: Duly noted, lol. We'll see what happens!
aaaaieeeeeeeeeeeeeee! what a dramatic chapter. i feel really sad for draco and ginny, but at the same time for harry and astoria who are just pawns (whether they know it or not). hmmmm. i have no idea what is going to happen. also, hermione is being a bitch :D i love it
Author's Response: Yes she is, lol. Can't help it. Loved her as a teenager but still see her as manipulative and just a bit tightly wound. Haha, oh well, I'm not sure how much I'll even bother redeeming her. We'll see what happens. I have a foggy idea you see... How I hate writer's block
Oooh, you're back.
Eh, I have no idea who Rose is writing to towards the end of the chapter though it's "painfully obvious"! Who who who!
Author's Response: Ah that you will find out in the first sentence of the next chapter, haha. I just hope I can get that out relatively soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
no problem thanks for writing it gives other of us with jobs an school things to read and enjoy
Author's Response: Haha, so true. Thanks for understanding! I'll try and get the next few out with some amount of timeliness!
way too much time, too many words, devoted to whining and crying. and it's hard to believe that ginny would have forgiven lucius for putting tom's diary in her cauldron first year.
Author's Response: Ginny didn't forgive him necesarrily, but she did support Draco and the fact that Draco needed his father. Also, she got a different view of Lucius from how Draco viewed him, a man who screwed up really really bad and then ended up struggling to keep his family safe.
I just started reading this one yesterday and I'm already here and loving every minute of this story. I hope you get the chance to update soon!
Author's Response: Oh thanks! I'm so glad you liked it enough to get through it all so quickly! I hope I get the chance to update soon too, lol!
A wonderful chapter. I really expected more from Luc. Oh well, he is hard to read at times. I really can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Hmm, yes he was difficult to write how I wanted him. I feel like he really does care about his family and his grandson and wants Draco to give Scorp what he didn't give Draco, but that he is still very caught up in traditions and still too stiff to truly understand where Draco is coming from when he revealed what happened with Gin in his past. So yes, Lucius certainly gave me a headache this chapter. I'm hoping to be done with him, lol. Thanks for your review!
“Now Mum, did you mean parents singular or plural?” Rose asked inquisitively, staring across the table and meeting her mum’s eyes with a flash of anger. “Because it seems to me that you weren’t quite as specific as you meant to be. Are you blaming her upbringing in general or just one of her parents?”
That's the only point where i liked Rose.
i despise he still and Hermione of course.
Ron is just a useless piece here and is just hanging around so they can have the "perfect" family.
the brother(Lily's and Rose's) are just as deespised as Rose and useless as ron.
Harry i already loathe so there's no point in adding it up to that.
GREAT!...now i dislike Lucius...
I do hope this has a happy ending Rose because this chapter has made me cry, scream in anger and feel hate and loathing all over me.
If anything get Harry killed by the nightbus, Astoria to cheat pr whatever means are necessary to have Draco and ginny together as well as Scorp and Lily.
this is D/G after all not next generation so we cna't have them apart.
;)
Besides my profered hate and loathe and despising everyone and everything(i believe the onely weasley i love are ginny and lily) i do love this story and i really like you so i'm putting my faith in you and hoping for a happy end.
Remember that legally Draco and Ginny may marry nd it wouldn't make Scorp and Lily siblings so they can be together as well.
As long as these 4 are happy and together(in a sense of 2 distinct couples) the rest may as well as burn in hell, except for Cissa, i still like her!
;)
Hope i can have my happy ending by the ned of this!
kisses
Author's Response: Ah I'm sorry you're so frustrated with so many of the characters! Hopefully the end will satisfy though I'm still not saying what the final pairings will be, ;) I know, I just like frustrating people I think! Thanks so much for your review!