Name: kieraraelyn reviewed Chapter 38 on Nov 03, 2016 12:01 am
Well. I made the mistake, yet again, of not checking to see if a fic was completed before I started reading it. I see in your reply to the last review (the 400th, grats btw) that you said you had not forgotten this story. You'll have to forgive me if I have trouble believing you at this point. ;p Which is so frustrating because it was finally going to come back around to the future (err, present?) and make some actual progress. *growls in frustration*

Just for the record, I would be interested in seeing that revision. While I found the Twilight tie-in to be intriguing and amusing, it did distract some from the D/G goodness. Though I confess that I'm not really sure how you would get to this same point without all of it. Here's to hoping that some day, I'll get closure on this story. It seemed to me to be leading to an angsty and tragic ending where they don't get to be together.

On an unrelated note, have you ever seen Tuck Everlasting? These past couple of chapters had me flashing to the scene where Jesse and his family are leaving, at night in the rain, and he says "Winnie Foster, I will love you until the day I die." (Pre-pubescent me cried because, of course, he never would. Is it sad that it's probably been at least 12 or so years since I've seen that movie, but I still remember that scene so clearly and it still tugs at my heartstrings? I'm leaning towards yes...) Anyway, I'm not sure why, because Draco and Jesse behaved in completely different manners, but - there you have it. Maybe that connection is why I was thinking this was going to end in tragedy.

Author's Response: Hi-- I just saw this!! I'm not sure if YOU will ever see this... ;) but thanks so much for the review. Actually, believe it or not, I've been thinking about reworking a few of these older on-hiatus fics, because I think they ran into some snags and that's why they were never finished. This one is a good example. I really don't know WHY the weird Twilight connection ended up being in here, but it probably was not the best idea and kind of threw the narrative off the tracks. So I think that what I'd have to do would be to go back and reboot the story at a certain point. I even know exactly where it would be... so it just might eventually happen! :)
Name: coneveronica reviewed Chapter 38 on Sep 19, 2014 11:49 am
Wow! I don't know how I've never read this story. I know it's been a long time since you've updated but I hope that you haven't forgotten about this story. I would love to see where it goes from here

Author's Response: yay and thanks for the 400th review!! It was kind of stuck on 399 forever... Actually, I haven't forgotten about this. There's been a revision in the works for a while... but, well, some other things have gotten in the way. ;) It WILL HAPPEN at some point, though. The thing is that it really would need to be a revision.... who knows how Twilight sneaked its way in here, but it would need to be gone. It really never worked, and it was a major distraction from the D/G content. So... I do have the outline, and at some point, it'll all get done!
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 38 on May 26, 2011 07:00 am
Oh GOD!!! That was amazing!! Sorry I didn't review, but I was just to into it! The flashback was perfect, but I'm so curious as to what's gonna happen after, I'm really not sure...so please update at some point in the foreseeable future because this is astonishingly good!:):D I've been a bit obsessed with your work of late, and I really don't know how you come up with all this, your a genius! Xxx
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 15 on May 23, 2011 09:23 pm
Hahhahahahahhaa, great chapter!!:)
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 14 on May 23, 2011 08:58 pm
Ah! I was kind of right bout the Vampire thing! Yay! Tho I'm sure there's a lot more to it. And good thing I read New Moon, it all clicks together:)
Name: luvdracoginny reviewed Chapter 13 on May 23, 2011 11:52 am
okay, far to weird for my liking. different, but just weird. in my mind, HP and Twilight should never be mixed. it's just not right.
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 12 on May 22, 2011 01:04 pm
Intense!! Okay, thats the meanest spell ever! I like Harry gay, I think it suits him in this story:) First Harry and George paring I've ever seen, but I think it works well:) Luna really is so glossed over by most people:( Loooooost of tension, and Cedric/Edward makes me chuckle:) Oh and the zumba dancing rats are priceless!:D
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 12 on May 22, 2011 01:03 pm
Intense!! Okay, thats the meanest spell ever! I like Harry gay, I think it suits him in this story:) First Harry and George paring I've ever seen, but I think it works well:) Luna really is so glossed over by most people:( Loooooost of tension, and Cedric/Edward makes me chuckle:):)
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 8 on May 21, 2011 09:18 pm
Okay, we when I hear 'the cold ones' I just think vampires (thanks a bunch Twilight)
Name: Why1817 reviewed Chapter 1 on May 21, 2011 09:43 am
Hahahhahahahaha! This is absolutely hilarious, I can't even take it! The bit bout cedric/edward cracked me up. And don't even get me started on the trousers and puppy strangling - your a genius! This is going to be so much fun!
Name: CarpeDiem88 reviewed Chapter 12 on Dec 14, 2010 06:46 am
Ooooohhh! Harry and George?! Lol Ron with the brother right spell made me laugh! And now Cedric is in the picture?! I can't stop picturing Cullen! Where is Draco?! Need more D/G fix!
Shai xx
Name: CarpeDiem88 reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 14, 2010 06:22 am
I adore your Blaise! Such witty banter! The mystery is spellbinding! Btw I see you state this is a short fic, how many chapters would it be I total? Why hasn't it been updated for a while?! Please don't say it's been abandon? *gasps*
thank you!
Shai x
Name: CarpeDiem88 reviewed Chapter 8 on Dec 13, 2010 04:11 pm
Wow! You my dear are the cleopatra of smut! *fans myself* thoes past few chapters have been smoking! I see the plot is began to thicken I wonde who Draco is talking about....and why did Luna have the potion inthe first place? Questions questions! Thank you!
Shai
Name: CarpeDiem88 reviewed Chapter 2 on Dec 13, 2010 02:57 pm
Ahhh I love Ginnys other side of her brain! And thoes trousers?! Perfect imagery!! I really enjoy the flow of your writing and the banter is just top notch! Thank you
Shai x
Name: CarpeDiem88 reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 13, 2010 08:58 am
ey!
Your characterisations of D/G are perfect. Draco just sounds sexy as
hell. I love your decriptions they create beautiful imagery. :-) The
chapter is full of humour and great banter. It's always nice to have
Luna, this cracked me up:
'It’s a very nice arse,though, isn’t it?” asked Luna, as if
gathering Ginny’s opinion on the blue willow pattern on the teacups.'
My fave line has to be:
'The wizard looks soppy and fatuous; there’s a sort of Mr. Rogers-
meets-Barney quality. And on top of it all, you’ve drawn the vampire
to look like Cedric Diggory again '
Anyhoo great plot, off with the next chapter!
Thank you
Shai xx
Name: Ella Not Lotte reviewed Chapter 38 on Nov 27, 2010 08:10 pm
Ohhh, this is fascinating. And I absolutely adore Nick and his snarky sarcasm. I'm hoping that things turn out alright for our favorite couple, although the odds are stacked against them right now...
Name: QuixoticMoose reviewed Chapter 38 on Sep 26, 2010 02:39 pm
Your writing is just so very addictive...
Name: adriana530 reviewed Chapter 3 on Sep 07, 2010 08:44 pm
This is freaking hilarious! Great!
I couldn't stop laughing!
Name: Tatiana reviewed Chapter 34 on Apr 06, 2010 09:06 pm
You know, I can only wonder how your ideal male scent in your fanfiction has gone from sun and clean grass, to freshly melted chocolate. (But I suppose this follows the growth of your Dracos' as characters from boys to men.) And I can really relate to the chocolate smell. After the first mental image of Draco turning to the chocolate man from the Axe commercial (and Ginny bending over just like that lady on the bus and taking a savory bite right out of his toned buttocks in his extremely-well-tailored-trousers), I started to think about it, and, well, chocolate, especially the rich, almost sinfully exquisite scent of melted dark chocolate, is perfect to complete the complexity of your character. Good choice.
Name: saraohjaonne reviewed Chapter 38 on Mar 29, 2010 12:51 am
please finash! this was the first story i everr read on herel.
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 38 on Mar 23, 2010 03:50 pm
cliffhanger..wow..wow..wow..love where the story's heading..do update soon=)
Name: HumbugGirl reviewed Chapter 38 on Mar 13, 2010 02:25 pm
I'm really enjoying the plot of this story. The descriptive writing is as flawless as ever, and the way you've written Draco particularly is just lovely. The dilemma that you've put Ginny in is cleverly worked, and it came as a surprise. There are a couple of things that (at least for me) detract from this story though. Firstly, the dialogue. It feels long winded, and in places a little repetitive. The second thing is Nick. Sometimes it feels as if the extent of his antics are becoming a little over the top and drawing the story out unnecessarily. I suspect I'm noticing this more because I just read multiple chapters back to back.

Author's Response: I think you're right about that, and it's because this story got away from me for awhile and basically took off on its own (plot scampers away gleefully.) I eventually chased and caught it (chains up plot and throws it into the corner), but some of the damage was done. On the other hand, I now accept that I have a problem... working the twelve steps may help...D/G/A, anyone? ;)
Name: liquidediamonds reviewed Chapter 37 on Mar 09, 2010 09:51 am
I love love LOVE the dig at Jersey Shore :)

Author's Response: I got involuntarily addicted to it about a month ago, but I seriously think I lost some IQ points from watching it.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 38 on Mar 09, 2010 03:31 am
Daaaaaaaaamn. I couldn't get onto the site for DAYS so I missed all the updates till now.

Omg, if that's not love, Draco, I want that NOT LOVE.

Author's Response: Glad you can get onto the site now, GF!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 37 on Mar 09, 2010 03:20 am
OMG, Jersey Shore... Can't... Stop... Laughing...

Author's Response: See above... ;)
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