Name: girlMalfoy reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 04:21 pm

Ooh, how wonderful! Except, you know, you're such a tease. :P

So there was a *hint* at some lovely smut, but tease!Anise strikes again.

I love how this chapter was focused so entirely on D/G. I can't say I saw any major plot points being developed, though, but then I've always been pants at reading between the lines.

Your characterization of Ginny sticks; she doesn't suddenly morph from headstrong Gryff to some meek little kitten who'll do as she's told. She's brave to the point of recklessness because, hello, she's a Weasley.

Draco is a paragon of Malfoy/Slytherin-ness. :D

I should have just settled down to living the life of a monk in the first place, complete with beggar’s bowl, loincloth, The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Zen Buddhist Meditation, and a permanent Global Positioning Charm so that I could stay at least ten miles away from the sight of your frizzy orange head at all times, Ginny Weasley.

That line (among others, but then I'd end up quoting most of the chap) is so much win it hurts. :) Something about the things he says and the way he says them makes me think he isn't as apathetic to Gin as he claims. Finally! A plausible reason for their relationship to work out other than 'Well, it's on FIA so it HAS to be D/G'.

Looking forward to the next.

Name: SansMarine reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 03:06 pm

Anise...I think you are a fantastic writer, firstly. Secondly, I feel as though your writing is getting a tad repetitive. I am trying so hard to read this latest of your fics, but I find myself growing tired of it, since it feels like basically the same plot as most of your other fics. This is not to say I don't love the plots you come up with, but rather that I would adore it if the plots were a little less similar, the character developements were a little less similar, and (though I doubt this will change, and really, for readers who can manage to follow your stories: more power too them) less over-complication of the plot.
I think that you are witty and insightful, and often times your phrases and the way that you spin you chapters honestly makes me happy to see fantastic writing in action. I feel as though you sometimes sell yourself short by writing long, overly-complicated, hard to follow plot twists because I think that you could have lovely, interesting, action packed and mysterious works of fiction if you just made your plots slightly less jumbled.
All I ask is that you keep in mind that while you may know and understand everything that is happening and is going to happen: the reader does not.
Thank you so much for being such an inspirational writer, and I hope that you take my criticism as just that--not meaningless, cruel words, but just a fellow reader and writing trying to support and improve your work.

Name: Flighty Temptress reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 08:29 am

Oohoohoo!! I am absolutely, desperately impatient for the next chapter! She's finally going to get it out of him, isn't she?! EEEEP!!
I was starting to wonder how it was all going to work out if he wouldn't even admit it to himself, but then you put in this perfectly timed little handcuff spell that doesn't allow lies! Genious!! I can't wait to see how it goes!

Name: Indiainksky reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 07:58 am

“Peeves doing the rumpy-pumpy with giant flobberworms"? Now that's just flat-out disturbing :). But the sexy times certainly make up for it.

Name: michelleho reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 06:34 am

Cliffhangers should be banned for a story as good as this! If only I could lock you up in a room to finish this story!!! :'(
Love how Ginny got the upper hand in the end. Now Draco's at her mercy! muahahaha

Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 04:37 am

HA! Poor Draco is a gonner.


“Let’s add Hagrid in McGonagall’s frilly pink nightdress and hair curlers for good measure!” spat Draco.

Ginny winced. That was really hitting below the belt.

Ah, that did make me chuckle so.

The end there was simply sublime, Draco's almost childish defiance and Ginny's... well, Ginny's rather sadistic enjoyment of the entire thing.

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm going to have to purchase a parachute soon - my reaction times aren't very good, so being met with these unexpected cliff hangers where the ground dissapears out from under me is going to resort in a broken bone or two soon!

Till next time!

MTL

Name: joano reviewed Chapter 16 on Jun 11, 2009 07:53 pm

gah! cliff hanger!!! I love your characterisation in this story and the way you write it is very entertaining but that! that was just MEAN!

Name: girlMalfoy reviewed Chapter 15 on Jun 10, 2009 05:54 am

Aiiish! A cliffe :(

From the top, then, and I'll try to be rational about this.

I love your crack fic like a druggie loves... crack. It's brilliant, and witty and a tad overdone (Walmart, really? ;D), but it's CRACK and that's why it's funny.

You could call me Lucy in the Sky With Diamonds, if you like
Nick is a vampire after my own heart.

And the idea of playing Pasha and Slave-girl just makes a girl swoon, really. I doubt Ginny would be as averse to the offer if Draco were the one suggesting it. *grins*

I bet you know how each and every one of those stains got on Draco, don't you. *sigh* My heart was warmed when he reached for Ginny. You aren't *that* cruel ;)

Name: Dracogirl reviewed Chapter 15 on Jun 08, 2009 05:20 pm

Ginny makes me want to turn into the cake Nazi-like from Seinfeld "No common sense cake for you!!" She doesn't trust Cedric but is listening to Nick, who is also a vampire. She thinks Draco will be happy to see her, I guess she has forgotten that he wanted to keep her safe.
Did she really hate Draco before she shagged him, or is she in denial.
I so love the part about the magic 8 ball and Walmart.

Name: Indiainksky reviewed Chapter 15 on Jun 08, 2009 05:43 am

Lucy in the sky with diamonds? Wow; it's vampires on happy pills!!!

Name: michelleho reviewed Chapter 15 on Jun 07, 2009 01:35 am

Whoops! I just realised that I accidentally posted my review at the first chapter. So I'm gonna re-post it here!
"AHHHHHHHHHH! I can't take this anymore. I'm never good with following fictions when it isn't completed. I'm craving for more and more and MORE. I.JUST.NEED.THE.NEXT.CHAPTER! Give it to me ANISE! I've fallen in love with Draco and Ginny all over again because of this! After my long break from this site! You're absolutely amazing! =) PLEASE BRING ON SOME DRACO GINNY ACTION."
Draco sounds so sexy in this chapter. Then again he's always sexy!

Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 15 on Jun 06, 2009 08:07 pm

YAY!
We're slightly back to sanity, or at least something i can understand
nick was hilarious!
I laughed my butt off with the wallmart and 8 ball coments, really, AMAZING!
and Draco is BACK!!!
and there will be NC 17!
The world is good again!
=P
Please write more soon!!!
I can understand (and love it even more)again!
so PLEASE more and SMUT too!
=D
kisses

Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 14 on Jun 01, 2009 08:20 am

great chapter!twilight+harry potter=deadly awesome combination and a great story by you..do update soon!