Draco seems soooo broken in this chapter, you can feel it!

He really does care for Ginny and vice versa...I hope he is able to stop!

Really great Anise your my favourite author, you're really talented and have really amazing story lines!

Keep it up

x

I love your definition of short :) haha!! I love your fic!!! :)

"That was worse than Cruciatus"
loved that one!
=)
greaaaaat!
"He smiled at her, and she wondered for a moment if it was the sort of smile that Lucifer had worn during his long, long fall from heaven."great description
I loved it!
you really DO deliver what you promise don't you?
it's amazing!
can't wait for the next

it's really HOT!
I'm beggining to understand to understand the reference to POST NC-17

Really, it's great!
keeep up the good work
Ginny's crazy actions were priceless and made me laugh a lot because of the way Droca would react
but this kinda sweet loving chapter was incredible!
=D

"Do you trust me?" “Yes,” Ginny said. Then she couldn’t quite look at him, because this felt like the most intimate thing they had shared yet. He’d had his hands all over her cunt and had made her scream in orgasm for him, and she’d had his cock in her mouth and sucked on it.....but when she told Draco Malfoy that she trusted him about anything at all, she could not look at him.> "Pretend that I’m as untouched as you, just for tonight, all right?” He reached up to stroke the side of her face. “Will you do that, Ginny? Pretend it’s my first time, too?" I love the depth of emotions you have put in this smutastic story. I love that Draco's jealous of Harry and that Ginny used it to her advantage. I also love how Draco thought out in every detail of how his first encounter with Ginny would be. This was a beyond wonderful combination of sweet and incredibly hot, hot, hot! Oh, and I have to mention I love possessive Draco “and now—now—you’re mine.” "this will shape you to me, Ginny, just to me, to nobody else in the world but me."

"That entire thing actually went into me?" {Laughing out loud uncontrollably} One of my favorite lines in this chapter.

Oh and the thought that after ALL that she had not been 'throughly f$cked'??? and there's more??? (Note to self-Must by more ice for the next chapter.) Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for the crown!!! Can I please have mine with diamonds.

Deliciously, delectably raunchy, and somehow simultaneously loving and sweet.

I think I just melted into a puddle on the floor. This literally gave me hot flashes. I had to turn on my little fan so I could try to cool myself off. This was just... incredible. Right now, I feel like I just need to continue exclaiming how wonderful this chapter was.

"She felt as if she had been crawling through the desert for days on end, starved and parched with thirst, and had finally reached a glorious oasis that stubbornly kept scooting away from her" was one of my favorite lines in this chapter. I thought that Ginny's description of Draco's actions was perfect. I think that this is how some of your readers feel like too. I was beginning to get annoyed with Draco because he kept flip flopping back and forth. I swear that he is worse than a kid that can't choose which ice cream flavor he wants. Why must you torture us so much? Kidding... mostly. Thank goodness, he actually went through with it in this chapter, but I am very happy that they seem to be nowhere near being finished.

I have to admit I bit curious about Draco's jealousy of Harry. I am not 100% sure if it justified, but that is probably just me. I love, love, love that Ginny manipulated Draco. I always enjoy seeing a female that is strong, smart and a bit manipulative and not one that acts weak, defenseless and dumb the entire story.

“Ginny realized that the fang of jealousy was biting Draco Malfoy in his perfect arse. “I don’t know,” she said as innocently as she could, considering that her lust-crazed brain was screaming at her to discard clever stratagems and just make a sudden grab for Draco’s cock, which still looked suspiciously erect, if you asked her.”

I thought that these were the two funniest lines in this chapter. Ginny is again thinking about his arse. In addition, I love the thought of Ginny trying to be all-innocent while she is thinking of attacking Draco’s cock.

“He quirked one dark-blond eyebrow at her and propped himself up on one elbow, pausing to catch his breath. "Ginny, Ginny, Ginny. You don't know me very well, do you? Well, never mind." He smiled at her, and she wondered for a moment if it was the sort of smile that Lucifer had worn during his long, long fall from heaven.

"You will," he purred, and then he reached for her, and it all began again.”

This last bit gave me goose bumps. I must tell you that your description of Draco’s smile is the best I have ever read.

I want to compliment you on how you were able to expand a scene like this without making it seem as if you were just dragging it along. Very few fan fic authors are able to do this. (I have even seen a few professional authors that have had this problem.) Though I am sure that other reviewers have stated the same thing, this was still one scorching hot chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, before I forget, I would like a review crown that has blue sapphires. The blue color would go very nicely with my hair color and skin tone. =)

I get way too giddy when I see this story is updated, I just heart all of the smut in this. I like the push and pull aspect of this story. I love how it's developing. GJ

Whoo! *fans self* that was hot!
"And there’s a lot more to sex that just that, of course… oh dear, how exactly are we going to make this work"
That was my favourite line! I laughed out loud ^^
Great chapter though. I wish I could write smut like that. Is the next chapter going to be them talking?

Gahhh I love you so much for updating so often. :)
I'm kind of new to your work. (Reading both "19 Years" and this at the moment.) Everything's fantastic, keep writing!

the cedric diggory thing was priceless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

liking the story so far. poor gingin...and poor confused draco. :D

Wow its hot in here!

Okay it took me a moment to be able to be able to type this review. No not because I didn't love it but because first I had to cool off because this was hotter-than-hot. The imagery was fantastic, hence why I had to cool down. Yes I admit it, I'm okay with a little bit (or a lot) of consensual tie-me-up-tie-me-down. And I loved his 'torture' of her; slowly touching her and making her beg, getting her ready to be able to handle 'a Malfoy trait'. I can't wait for the next chapter.

The second reason I had to wait was because I had to recover from my dizziness from the roller coaster of emotions. Ginny wanting him and seemingly fighting herself because she is wanting him even through the potion. None of the ever touched me....not my body, not my....Heart. AND DRACO!!! His battles with his inner demons; wanting her, wanting her to want him like he's wanted her and to beg him but not because of a potion; "just dream and dream of having me, knowing you could never have me, and you'll start to understand what it was like for me, wanting you" Him not wanting to really hurt her; making sure the ropes weren't really hurting her. Not thinking there is any good inside of him(I almost cried). I'm really hoping this ends up love (mostly for Draco's sake); I don't believe what Draco has felt for Ginny for ALL these years is just lust.

Wow! This has left me speechless... and a bit dazed. I think that we are all going to be right beside you in hell. Ha ha!

I really enjoyed the bit that you included in you author's note. You keep on making those strange, yet enjoyable, images pop into my head.

I am going to warn you now that I am going to be using the word "love" a lot. I love how you have Draco describing the different knots he is using as he is tying her up (and how he tore her clothing to shreds). I love your original idea about the "invisible" ropes since most authors use things like real bindings, the Body-Bind curse, or the imperius curse to secure a person. As bad as this might make me sound, I love that Draco is living out his fantasy and that he is making Ginny admit that she is a "bad girl". I thought that it was quite torturous of Draco to make her beg so much and then act, if only for a moment, as if he was not going to touch her. I have to admit that I was shocked that Ginny was virgin, though I did pick up on the hints beforehand. As much I love to see Draco agonizing over this, I wish that he would just hurry up and do it. I am about to cry in frustration. I am exaggerating a bit, but only a little.

I had a much better and detailed review before, but I unfortunately did not noticed that my internet and (later the electricity) had went out because a storm before I tried to post.