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Name: Mayday reviewed The only one I have... on Sep 04, 2019 04:02 pm
Enjoyable writing style and plot. Thank you for such an enjoyable short story.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed The only one I have... on Dec 11, 2009 01:42 am
I loved this!
Wish it was possible to get a room like this!
Plus it would be awfully nice to have freinds who knew what was best for me even before i did!

Really really great!
And i loved you made Gin's hair soft, everyone usually says it's couarse or thick, i like it better this way, almost as fine as Draco's!


Author's Response: Haha! Thanks so much! Yeah, Blaise and Luna are great, aren't they? Gotta love them! So glad you enjoyed it!
Name: Boogum reviewed The only one I have... on Nov 23, 2009 02:42 am
Awwww, this was very cute. I loved their awkwardness at coming together and how the kisses gradually got steamier with each "try". I did notice there were quite a few errors and such, but that's a nothing a quick glance over could fix.

In any case, this was very cute and enjoyed it immensely. ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll try to make time to read it over and correct errors; thank you for pointing that out! I'm glad you liked it!
Name: ZSF reviewed The only one I have... on May 10, 2009 02:07 pm
Quite enjoyable. It seems to me like it would take more than a kiss to push Draco and Ginny past their prejudices and "enmity"... but it really just shows what a good snog can do, doesn't it?

I think I would've loved loved loved to see a bit more interaction between them after the kiss, but really, it was quite good, and it is your story to write. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Being a one-shot, there's only so much I could do without needing to expound. I probably would have ended up adding a whole new chapter, and I'm the sort who, once I get started, it's hard to stop. I'm currently working on four full-length stories that I'll post eventually, so another would have done me in. Anyway... I'm glad you enjoyed it at least a little.
Name: juliette reviewed The only one I have... on May 09, 2009 09:49 am
I'll say this as nicely as possible; the fic had er, concept. i've read a million, so i'd think writers would run out of ideas. But I read each line and eagerly went to the next...though i knew the end (it is so, no surprise)
but still, i did a little happy applause at the end.
Their ahem, moments make you lose breath and blaise and luna need their own story.
happy? i sure am...!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's good to know I can keep people interested. And even though the ending is pretty much decided, it's still great stuff, yeah? I mean, Draco/Ginny? Totally!! Hmmmm. As to Blaise and Luna, I actually had a thought once that I should do a story for them, but nothing really decisive ever came to me. Oh, well. They'll always have a place in my D/G stories. And, yes... I am happy. Thank you!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 09:14 pm
Giggleworthy in a cheesy way.
I loved it.

Author's Response: Lol! Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it!
Name: Rosalie reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 05:21 pm
Loved it! Very cute and I love how many times they had to try the kiss again and again. It wasn't too rushed to be unrealistic or too slow and sappy. Great balance!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!
Name: Nevermindme reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 01:03 pm
I'd like to congratulate you on a very fun, light piece. It was thoroughly enjoyable!

Author's Response: I appreciate it. And I'm glad you enjoyed it. That's why I write, after all!
Name: judy0902 reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 12:56 pm
not bad, not bad at all

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you very much.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 11:30 am
haha. very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: penfold reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 09:10 am
Very sweet bit of fluff! I'm glad you had them take a few turns to get the kiss right, and that the spell on the room didn't let them out so fast. And I always love Luna and Blaise together in a story, so thanks!

Author's Response: Why, thank you! I had loads of fun with this one. ;) And I totally agree with you... Blaise/Luna is AWESOME!!!!!!! They might just be my second favourite ship.
Name: jcap1526 reviewed The only one I have... on May 05, 2009 04:56 am
Awww, very cute oneshot. Well written with a nice ending. Not too complicated, but that's good for oneshots I think. I believe I have read your stuff on and even commented on 'When No One Else Was Looking'. Would like to see more from you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy hearing that people like my stories. I'm thinking about posting When No One Else Was Looking on here as well and I have a few more stories in the works. If people are really interested I will definitely decide in the positive. (Hint, hint!) ;)
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