I LOVE THIS STORY!
And yet I'm afraid - I'm LOVING the teen-Snape and the whole Golden Three 2.0 thing he, Ginny, and Draco have got going on... I don't want him turning back into a teacher to ruin that. And yet, at the same time, a grown-up-Snape romance would be fun...
Also, masterful job with the D/G. It's marvelously in character, while still managing to work in the friendship/romance confusion. (I'm getting endless laughs over the fact that Draco's essentially Ron, and Snape is Harry.)
BRILLIANT! I loved this! This has been a day well spent reading, though I don't think my feet would agree with me.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. I haven't been this excited over a story in a long time. Love it, love it, love it! ^_^
Author's Response: g'day g'day :) just read your review over on ff.net, so cool that you liked it. whenever i'm feelin down about my grammar (the reason why it's takin so long to upload it here) reviews like yours remind me that it's totally worth it. cheers and thanks for reading :)
Aww, poor Draco. So many good moments in this chapter. I'm just so addicted. Sorry for the rushed reviews, but I have to find out what happens next.
SHE KISSED HIM! But then she kissed Harry. *sigh* I agree with Severus.
Needless to say, I loved this chapter and this story. You really do have a way with humour. I've been laughing quite loudly a few times and have earned very disapproving looks from the people near me. Congratulations. Your fic has made me look nutters.
Oh, what a way to end it. The tension is growing. *sighs happily* I love this story so much.
My reviews are becoming increasingly less eloquent. I blame you. This story is just so darn good. I couldn't possibly say what parts I particularly liked. The whole chapter was great! ^_^
Another great chapter! I love Draco and Severus, and Ginny too. Draco's indignation at Woodley looking just like him was classic. Though I do wonder if there is something there.
I really do love the fact that you let them be ordinary teenagers. They feel so human and normal. It definitely makes for a much more lively tale.
Oh my gosh. I absolutely adore this story. And I'm freezing my feet off right now as I'm reading this, but I don't want to move because it's so addicting. Love it!!
I'm surprised you have so few reviews. This story is brilliant!
AHHHHHH! Nooo, cliffhangers. You're evil, you know. I'm so addicted to this now. I would write more, but I have to find out what happens.
I LOVE THIS! I think I'm going to have to add it to my favourites. This is great. You've captured the characters brilliantly. I also love the fact that Draco and Ginny are such teenagers!
The story itself is great. I do wonder who the Death Eater is.
This is brilliant! I love it! I don't even know how to express how much I love this story. Severus as a teenager is naturally hilarious, and the poor guy is in Gryffindor too. But I'm loving the way you're setting things up, and the fact that Draco and Ginny are being dragged into it.
Oh, Hagrid calling Severus "Sev" was nicely done. I was smiling the whole time I read that.
Oh, I do love me some Snape. I think I'm going to like this story. I find it hilarious that Mrs Norris was the culprit. Or should I say it was the muscle in Snape's cheek?
Nice chapter. ^_~
I...I don't believe I'm saying this but...I kind of want snape and Ginny to get together....it may just be my extreme hatred for Prof.G. and I hope they don't get together...I don't know why...
yay yay yay yay yay!! that was fantastic. still really curious about woodley - update soon please, this is wonderful!
fantastic! :D all three chapters were awesome :D
I love the characterization even though they're really taking their dear sweet time aren't they...
and I also have to confess, on Sunday I found the website with all the chapters and read it in a day :O.
it's brilliant and super awesome :D
what a GREAT GREAT story :D
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Author's Response: that's cool that you found the website :) makes me feel all warm and fuzzy to think that you actually went to the trouble of seeking it out. it's taking a while to upload it here due to the grammar fixes, le sigh.
ahhh!!! i loved it!
thanks for updating!!
lol and at the risk of sounding demanding, please update soon!!!
Well finally! Now I really want to know what is going to happen next. I starting to want Snape to remain a kid for now on. Ginny's realization of, "wait, I'm .... Herminone" was awesome. This story is pretty fantastic - you're a wonderful writer. I wasn't sure about the premise but oh man did you pull it off.
oh my god this story is FANTASTIC!! I'm so sad I caught up! it's hilarious. you have an awesome sense of humour! :D
and I love cat-snape :D
and this => "drawing heavy inspiration from the Muggle fairytale, Flashdance," on top of many other situations and one-liners = GOLD.
update soooon please! :D
I'm loving the long chatpers :D
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Very cute story! I like that everyone's taking their time, but still progressing. haha And it's so sweet imagining scrapey Snape as a hottie high schooler. XD
is it too melodramatic to say that I am holding my breath until this is updated? I really love it, I have such a thing for Snape and I don't really know why. Anyways keep it up!
i'm just reading this for the first time and i absolutely adored it - laughing out loud several times. please update soon! keep up the good work!
“WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM?”
“YOUR FACE!”
Pure gold!!!! I loved this chapter, and I loved how surprised Snape was when Draco appeared to help him. Loved it!! :D xx
This story is awesome. I love the dynamic between Snape, Draco and Ginny, but mostly that of Snape and Draco. I wonder how it pans out for Snape, and what'll happen when he returns to his age. This story is one of my favorites right now.
I am liking this story, too, and am surprised at the little number of reviews. Teenage Snape is a good idea and I'm wondering if Draco will figure out who he really is.
Ginny better realise that she likes Draco! He, obviously, has begun to notice her, not because she likes Potter but because she likes this Woodley character, who looks (and even acts a little bit) like Draco.
Oh, I forgot to mention this in my last review. My favourite line in the story, so far, is from Chapter Five, in which Draco and Ginny are arguing about Woodley and Ginny is doing a compare/contrast between the two, and Snape "compliments" Draco: Snape raised his eyebrows and tried his best not to look amused. “Hey, I think you have the voice of an angel,” he called out.
Hee Hee! Priceless. I cannot wait to read more. This is a highly addictive story you have here.