Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Feb 02, 2010 08:56 am

=OOO
i can't believe it!
=''(

fire her and screw up all her of job pssibilities!

GGGGRRRRRR!
I'm mad at that nasty shrew!

Can the nightbus please kill her?
or maybe Draco should anish her form the manor and send her to a train trail and then the train will roll on top of her and she'll die a blooy bloody death!
Plus a painful one!

gorry, i know.
but i like the idea...


kisses

Author's Response: Lol! You really don't like her, huh? Good, that was the idea.

Name: choravenclaw reviewed Apologise on Feb 02, 2010 03:31 am

sorry no computer today so i can't actually quote...


i hope this despicable woman finds Ginny for real and not just say she will to get him to calm down.
I hate eople who do everything by the book, this kills a lot of people and hurts the rest of them.
The rules are tere to set some order not to be followed step by step. There's no manual on how to act preciselly.
This woman is disgustig and annoying plus she's a major pain in the arse!
If you actually know someone like this, than i'm sorry for you Beth!

Please bring Gin back next chapter!
We can't have her showing up only in the very last hapter or the epilogue.
We need her back now!
And Draco should at the very least ruin this old creature's life and career should she not bring Gin to him before the half of the next chapter.
I'm so ÃNGRY right now smoke could me coming out of my ears!
Get rid of this old bat ad bring Gin bacck immediately!
And make her quiet because Draco should still be kind of delirious when she arrives so that he can apologize an she can just shut up and listen.
Also it would be nice for him to wake up and just have her there by his side sitting on the bed and waiting for him to wake up so they can talk.


This chapter was nice because of the dream, although you sholdn't have changed the foutain so everyone would think i's reality. This way we just knew it was a dream.
On the great writting POV this was a great chapter, i got as angry as Draco and have a terrible headache right now so YAY! for you.
But as a fan, i just really hate that old hag and wish for er death, hit by the nightbus.


when is the next chapter coming out?
i wanna see Gin soon!!!


kisses

Author's Response: Unfortunately, Mrs. Snidely is only saying that she'll find Ginny to shut him up. Draco will be firing her as soon as he is better again and he'll find Ginny on his own. I'm going to type up the next chapter now and try to post it today. It's from Ginny's point of view.

Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Apologise on Feb 02, 2010 01:24 am

I still don't understand what Draco's problem is. Why does he think that he doesn't have to apologize? Why doesn't he see that he should have defended Ginny?

Author's Response: Draco realizes that he hurt Ginny. His migraine is the only thing keeping him from going off to find her right now. The dream he had, as well as the memories of their conversations, has convinced him of the need to apologise. That's why he hurried off to the library searching for her in his state of delirium.

Name: raistlin89 reviewed Apologise on Feb 02, 2010 12:15 am

damn! it was a dreammm! but i kinda knew it was too good to be true, i hope theres a bit more to them getting back together, as always an awsome job and i cant wait for the next chapter :)

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Name: Dracogirl reviewed Apologise on Feb 01, 2010 09:58 pm

I still think they both overreacted, but I hope that his dream or "hallucination" will convince him to go to her and apologize so they can get back together.

I hope someone gives Ms Snidely a potion
that will make her disappear from the story.

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Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Apologise on Feb 01, 2010 08:39 pm

im on the fence, or more accurately on both sides. i do agree with ginny but i do think she blew it a little out of proportion. draco should have stood up for her but she never really gave him a chance either. poor sick draco. i dont like that snidely woman. she was aptly named. put my broken couple back together soon plz. cute funny chapter. looking forward to the update but sad that its ending

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Name: Moranar reviewed Apologise on Feb 01, 2010 07:31 pm

well ginny and draco are both being a bit pig headed but look like they'll come 'rough however mrs. snidely irks me to no end. i truly hope something brings her down a peg or ten.

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Name: Akt5us reviewed Saying Goodbye on Jan 31, 2010 03:49 pm

I really like this story! I'm so sad that it's going to be over soon! But I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: unseensorrows reviewed Saying Goodbye on Jan 30, 2010 10:14 pm

can't wait for the next chapter!
thank you for NOT making them have a perfect relationship! it's so much better and more realistic this way!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: Prolific Wonder reviewed Saying Goodbye on Jan 29, 2010 08:13 pm

Oh boo hoo.. in this fic ginny is supreme GIT. Her characteization gives me a headache. Who forgets their patient and stays locked up in their room because of their own issues over someone kissing them. Then just because someone doesn' come to their aid after someone calls them out they throw a tantrum like a baby. Then becomes buddies with the person that insults them, but then ignoes the guy. If this is how "normal" women act then I know know why guys cheat and lie. However as a girl raised around many brothers I can safely report that umm we don't whine that much.

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Name: raistlin89 reviewed Saying Goodbye on Jan 29, 2010 07:24 pm

ahhhhhhhhh, nonono! i dont like this, whatever it is going on between draco and ginny :( but as always it was good and i cant wait for the next chapter! =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm posting now!

Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Saying Goodbye on Jan 29, 2010 11:25 am

jeezeeeeee. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'll have the next chapter either tomorrow or the day after.

Name: choravenclaw reviewed Saying Goodbye on Jan 29, 2010 01:21 am

He barely even made eye contact with her, preferring instead to glare at the wall, a livid expression marring his perfect, angular features. “Apologize,” he scoffed. “We’ve both received owls from St. Mungo’s. I’m sure yours is the same as mine, so I’ll just tell you.” He sounded bitter, biting each word off harshly. “As we were both so opposed to this arrangement at the beginning, the administration has been keeping their eyes open for a replacement. Apparently they’ve found one and she’ll be here on Monday to take over your duties.”

NOOOOOOO!!!!
=OOO

I sure didn't see that one coming!
but he deserves it!
i sure like to protect Draco but he deserves to be left alone and the next nurse should put no flavouring in his potions and be a nasty old shrew.
i hope she does everything, down to the clothes, different from Gin and that he hates her and feels lonely enough to suck it up and go after her.
Especially seeing as she has no place to live.
on that note: could she please find a crappy place to live instead of getting cozy with Harry and Hermione?
It would just be so much better!



Ginny shrugged and knelt on the hearth rug so she was on the same level as the other woman. “Well, maybe I was a little. But mostly I was angry at your son’s lack of reaction. It was like he didn’t care at all.”
Mrs. Malfoy nodded. “He did just sit there, didn’t he? A Malfoy through and through.”
For some reason, Ginny found herself confiding in Draco’s mother. She told her that they weren’t actually dating; only snogging. And that she was pretty sure Draco was only attracted to her physically, while she was very much in love with him.

Now THAT's the Cissa i know and love!
=D
i was really angry next chpter when she showed up as a nasty, bitter old lady with prejudices up to her hair.
I much prefer this one, the one who talks and listens, it's much much better!
=D


Mrs. Snidely was short and plump. The sort you would expect to see handing out candy in the children’s ward. She was wearing a drab grey dress and simple black flats. Her mouse hair was short and tidy and she wore a pair of spectacles on her nose. All in all, she was a very unremarkable-looking woman. “Where is the patient?” she asked in a bossy, busy-sounding voice.
Ginny instantly hated her. “You are to call him Mr. Malfoy,” she snapped.
Mrs. Snidely raised her eyebrow. “Dear, I will call him whatever you want when he shows me respect. Honestly! To not even welcome me himself! Sending the hired help! Disgraceful!”

YAY!
She's a nasty old shrew!!!
Shes but ugly and thinks too much of herself.
i'm sad Ginny left her with potions made by herslef, but sure glad she was completely professional as to explain the rules of the house.
plus, it's grrrreat to know she lef the old hag to brew his migraine potion!
He sure gonna hate that one!
BRILLIANT!!!
^;^


If she left, it was highly unlikely she would ever see him again. She’d be moving into her own flat in two days and he didn’t know. She’d opted not to have a Floo connection since she lived in a Muggle building, so even if he got his head on straight and tried to find her, he wouldn’t be able.

PHEW!
That's a relief!
I'm glad she doesn't have to stay over with friends.
And i'm happy she's in a place which is hard to find and can only be reached by muggle ways.
We'll have less chances of him trying to bribe her with expensive gifts and he'll have to actually work hard to reach her.
plus, that leaves room for a terrible migraine attack, as he's tying to figure out how to find her muggle way.
^;^
YEs, i can be evil when it comes to Draco[but only when he deserves it!]



Draco leaned against the wall, looking his usual, nonchalant self. “What I don’t understand,” he said calmly, “is how you can be so angry at me, and still be worried about my well being, as you put it.”
Feeling incredibly tired of this whole thing, Ginny raised her eyes to his. “Don’t read into it, Malfoy,” she replied blankly. She stood up and patted her pocket to ensure her shrunken luggage was still there. “Well, goodbye then.” With that she turned and headed to the fireplace.
“Gin, wait,” Draco said quickly, pushing off the wall and taking several steps after her. “Please don’t leave like this.”
“Like what?” Ginny cried, feeling the now-familiar prickle of tears behind her eyelids as she looked back at him. “Heartbroken? Feeling stupid for thinking you and I could actually work? Or am I just overreacting?”
She shook her head and threw a pinch of Floo powder into the fire, stepping in as the flames flared green. “Goodbye, Draco.” She shouted, “Weasleys’ Wizard Wheezes!” and braced herself for the spinning sensation. The last thing she saw before whisking away was Draco’s miserable face staring back at her.

I've got a HUGE lump on my throat and i read this last bit completely from Ginny's point of view.
by the time i reach the good bye i was dropping a few tears and feeling a HUGE need too cry.
it was a very difficult scene, i could really put myself in Ginny's shoes and in a way, i did.
it felt awful!




Thank you for this chapter!
It was wonderfully well written and charged with emotion.
i'm glad cissa came around and that the othr nurse is as bad as i thought.
Please send the next hapter tonight!
i can't wait to see what comes next!
I'm dying of curiosity!

Thank you very very much for this...some things turned out right and other worng, but the wrong was just right and i dunno f it makes any sense, but i'm glad it happened!
=D


kisses

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I agree with you that Narcissa is much better like this. I love the stories where she's more of the kindly, motherly-ish sort of person. I was going to keep her completely proud and uncaring through the entire story, but I got to this chapter and she just naturally turned into this character. It actually turned out to make the epilogue easier to write. I cried, myself, when I wrote the goodbye. I get so involved with my characters when I'm writing and I feel all of the emotions that they're feeling so I could literally feel Ginny's heart crumbling in her chest as the Floo pulled her out of the manor and she saw Draco looking back at her and she was thinking this was the end of it. I made myself cry when I wrote When No One Else Was Looking, as well. It makes for much better writing when I put myself in the character's spot, but it also creates a bit of an emotional ride. Like when I wrote The End at the last page of WNOEWL... I couldn't write for at least a week. Anyway, now that I've rambled on and on... Thank you for your review and I'll have the next chapter this weekend!