Name: Delilah_Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 26, 2010 11:09 pm
No I won't lynch you, becuase it's an accurate portrayl of the characters. It was greatly written story and I can't wait for the epilogue.
Name: Shwadi reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 26, 2010 02:12 pm
loving it. Read it all in one go WHEN I SHOULD BE STUDYING FOR MY LAW EXAMS!! BAD! couldnt put it down. well done. So sad about the ending. Make draco see sense and leave daphne for ginny and make me happy pls. xxx
Name: Nakita reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 26, 2010 12:10 am
That is SO depressing! For once I wish they could have a happy ending with no strings.
Name: dancingonstars reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 25, 2010 06:22 pm
all that good, mostly happy story to a heartbreaking betrothal to some other girl? i hope draco redeems himself. even though it makes me want to cry lol great chapter.
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 25, 2010 12:07 pm
oh no, i really thought they were going to work out! tears are literally streaming down my face, lol. lame, i know. i look forward to the epilogue. really well written and thought out. thank you for writing.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 25, 2010 10:13 am
Draco is going to reap what he has sown. What an asshole. I mean, I can sympathise with his situation, but he should have never dragged Ginny into it if he thought it could never work. But then, we rarely think ahead when it comes to using our heart to think, nay? I love how Ginny storms off. She showed a lot of restraint by not crying, breaking down, or throwing things at him (I would have done all three). Good for her. The last line is awesome, btw, so foreboding. Lol! I can't wait to read the epilogue. Oh, wait, I am! ^^ I shall have it back to you later today.
Wonderful chapter. Although it isn't a happy one, it isn't abrupt either. There were signs, and I'm glad you played it out like this.
~Lia
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 25, 2010 02:11 am
OUCH!
Draco's "letter" made my heart ache, Megs!
i have tear in my eyes and a twiting knot in my stomch.
I do hope you fix this soon!
Far too many bad memories were brought by this letter!
=S
Really heart felt, well written, and great work as a writer, you really got to me.
but OUCH!
It really hurt to read this!
Draco, I love you. Don’t do this.
She stared at the page for what felt like an eternity. There was no response. With tears flowing down her cheeks, she pressed her quill to the page again.
I know you’re still there. Please answer me.
She waited longer than before. Her ragged breathing was the only sound in the room. After twenty minutes, she slapped the now-wet page in frustration. She felt like screaming.
GOD!
that hurts!
=S
I'm twisting here trying NOT to cry, a knot in my throath is really beginning to hurt.
Please don't let it end with them apart!
='(
She only gaped at him for a few moments before she found the strength to respond. “You have a good life, Draco Malfoy. You enjoy every minute of the luxury and the money. I really hope it’s enough because money is nothing compared to love, and you’ll never find love again.” She took a shaky breath, trying desperately not to cry. “You won’t get it from your family, and you definitely won’t get it from your not-so-blushing bride.” She couldn't stop the tears now. “I really hope you’ll be happy, Draco, because I know I will be.”
That really hurts!
And the part that hurts the mostis knowing she was telling a lie in the end.
She won't be happy, not for a long time.
Hopefully they'll get beck together before this long time passes.
Because after time has brushed away some of the lines it really makes it hard to start over...
This was the saddest chapter i've read in so long!
I really hope you make him do the right thing.
My belly is twisted with knots and bad memories...
and the looks he was giving her?
the hugs of goodbye she didn't realize the meaning?
You just made me realize so many things!
=S
I just realized you said the epilogue will be up soon.
this is the chapter before it?
already?
i was REALLY hoping for a happy ending, but also one chapter of pure fluff[and some smut] and them together as a happy couple with nothing in between.
Besides Ron has to find someone and get back at Harry and Hermione!
As a writer?
you did great, really got emotion out of your fans.
As a person?
this chapter was really really sad and i hope you fix it.
Also please update soon, i know life's been crazy, but i think your writing can help us both!
=)
kisses
Name: mchen reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 11:10 pm
EPILOGUE?!? You can't end it like that, that's just evil!!
Name: Prolific Wonder reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 09:48 pm
I'm seriously hoping this isn't fully compliant. It's your story so its up to you, but cliche is the ending of deathly hollows Draco, Scorpious etc. I would think a little heart ache on Draco's part would suffice. Maybe watch Ginny have a kid? While his farce of an engagement goes up in flames and/or his wife has a child by another man... Blaise Zabini maybe?
Name: unseensorrows reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 09:28 pm
...............
*stabs astoria*
problem solved :D
it was well written and full of emotion,
but i hate her *glares at her*
Name: Tamashii reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 03:50 pm
NOOOO!!! I can't believe it!! damn it, I hate Draco right now, I was hoping that Ginny would give him a black eye.
Name: jcap1526 reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 02:11 pm
Noooooo! You've got me crying..... An just an epi left, oh dear! Looking forward to it!
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 01:49 pm
Awww, That's really sad. Yet I somehow hope they will get together eventually...
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 11 - Head Over Heels on Jan 24, 2010 01:43 pm
I have a feeling that Draco is going to disappear... :(
Name: harrypotterchick4ever reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 07:14 am
WHAT!!
this can't be it!!!
if he knew that he had to marry astoria he should have never gotten involved with ginny, that was so selfish
i'm kinda torn as to wether i want them together or revenge for ginny since he chose money over her!!
update soon!!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 05:04 am
How can you apologize for not posting and not apologize for the disastrous thing that just took place?!?!!
need resolution. now. please.
(its still amazingly good)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 02:16 am
Wait, what? An epilogue? Why is it over? This is a sucky ending! Unless, of course, Ginny gets someone twice as handsome, twice as rich, and twice as wonderful. (Obviously, that's NOT Harry, though Harry would be a nice bit of revenge.)
Name: bellatrizM reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 24, 2010 12:36 am
ouch, that is all i have to say, too sad, hope it gets happier ha..
Name: bluelover reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 23, 2010 11:54 pm
OMG!!! WTH???
How dare he do that to her! So he actually chose money over love...that is so sad.
I can only imagine how much that must have hurt...poor Ginny!
You made me cry! And for that, you must post the next chapter soon....please!
Thanks for the update...
And now I will return to my bubble where Draco and Ginny get married and make beautiful babies.
Name: twilight1122 reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 23, 2010 11:34 pm
I love it! When will the epilogue be posted?
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 23, 2010 10:10 pm
lynching is right. its still sad *tear* not that i didnt see something like this happening. but its still sad to see. :( poor ginny. good chapter but so sad...
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 23, 2010 10:09 pm
Oh. My. Goodness. Don't worry, DeLaLune, I won't lynch you. I'm going to lynch Draco instead. Never mind that stupid blond hair, I'm going to hang him on a flagpole by the ends of his hair and set up a nice, burning fire right underneath his feet. And then I will teach Ginny to do a Hawaiian dance so she can sing and dance around him as he goes up in flames...Okay, maybe that's cruel, but I would seriously like to make him suffer. I mean, he had plenty of chances to tell Ginny, but he didn't. And even if he knew, he should've never gotten involved with her in the first place. So, now I'm torn between two things: I want a happy D/G ending for them, but I don't want the epilogue to be all "19 years later" and for Draco and Ginny to already have their own kids. And then, I also envision this scene where in a few years down the road, Draco is unhappily married to Astoria. They're in a restaurant, and Ginny walks in with Oliver Wood (because he's sexy, and Harry would just be wrong). SHe has found happiness again, and Draco suffers a lifetime of agony and regret at having chosen money over love. I do prefer the first type though, where he shows up, and tells her that he can't go through with it, and that he needs her more than his money. Even better, maybe the epilogue is a few months later, and he sees Ginny with Oliver Woods, and realizes that he loves her so much, and breaks off the engagement. That would be magnificent. Either way, please don't keep me in suspense, or else I will come back and try to lynch you...And I will bring torches and gunpowder with me...*shifty eyes* Haha, just kidding, but seriously, please update soon, becuase I need to know what happens!
XOXO, JT
D/G HAPPINESS FOREVER! GIVE THEM A HAPPY ENDING PLEASE!
that's all i have to say.
Name: MargretKelley reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 23, 2010 08:54 pm
Awww, I feel so sorry for them! :( Though to be honest, I do feel that Draco deserved everything Ginny told him, but I guess he doesn't really think he has any other choice since he's been brought up with money rather than love.
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned on Jan 23, 2010 08:53 pm
Oh, come ooooon! No epilogue yet :3
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed
Chapter 11 - Head Over Heels on Jan 04, 2010 09:08 pm
something bad better not happen. at least nothing TOO bad (breaking up and death are considered to be too bad). i LOVE this story!! please continue soon!